MANAN SS My Life ( chapter 01 pg 02)

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Good start


My life i think is good

It's ur choice

Interesting prologue Continue nd pdate soon

CHARACTER SKETCH


MANIK MALHOTRA : handsome and dashing , girls die over him is a mummas boy . 26 year old looks after his family business along with being a lead singer of band FAB5

NANDINI MURTHY : 23 yaer old buubly girl . the life of her house she is aan orphan lives with her amms and brother rishab who is in boarding school is going to be a doctor sooon

NAVYA NAVELI : Nandinis best friend also also persuing doctor

FAB5: a band of five friends who love each other like anything

ALIYA : A FASHIONISTA AND A DIVA

MUKTI : EVIL CRIME PARTNER OF CABIR FULL TOMBOY

CABIR : A PRANKSTER FULL OF LIVE BUT KNOWS WHEN TO BE MATURE

DHRUV: SHY SWEET BOY ... MOSTLY QUIET ...


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CHAPTER 01
Nandini and rishab were in nandinis cabin . rishab was keenly looking at nandini waiting for her to start when she said
N: rishab to wakai jaana chahta hai k kia hua meri zindagi kun badal gai ...
R: han di plz bataao
Nandini nods and then says
N: 2 sall pehley jab men 22 years kit hi apni doctoring persue kar rahi thi aur us k sath sath amms muhey singing bhi sikhati thi . tum secondary level men agaye the to amms ne tumhain boarding school men dal dia jo dehradun ka sab se best school tha . sab kuch acha tha . hum sab buhat khuch the lkn kehte hain na khushion ko nazar lagte der nahi lagti mere sath bhi kuch aesa hi hua
...FLASHBACK...
It was winter in dehradun early morning u could hear the voice of a beautiful girl singing the arti and spreading the aura of calmnesss everwhere
The girl was doing the arti and at her back an elderly lady along with a young girl same what of the age of the girl singing was standing and listening the arti keenly
After finishing the arti the girl bowed down seeking the blessings from her ayyiaappa also praying for a better day ahead
Elder lady : khanna Prasad dene k baad practice k liye ajana
Girl: ji amms
Amms: aur haan nandu der na karna bachha ok??
Nandu: ji amms men bas abhi aii
Amms nods and leves from there Nandini places the arti thaal back at its place and then turns towards her friend
N:hmm so navya madam aankh khul gai apki
Na: kahan yaar amms thi yahan esiliye ankhen phar pahr kar karhi thi take so na jaon

CHAPTER 01 B
Nandini laughs looking at navyas state and soon navya also joins her
Nandini and navya soon comes to her amms grukul which is in their house only where they practice music or to be prcised classical music alsong with dancing
Nandini and navya soon take their place along with all other students
Their class went for almost 1 hour
After practicing last time amms asked their attention and said
Amms: larkiyon aj yeh tumhari akhri class hai kal se yahan worksop hogi isiliye yeh akhri cass aj jo kuch bhi sikhaya wo men poonchun ek mahine baad kun k is baar yeh worksop ek mahine tak chale gi samjhi gai??
All nods their head and then leave from their except nandini ,navya and amms Navya being the most curious one asked
Na: amms aesa kon araha hai jis k liye ab ne becch men yeh workshop rahi kun k ap to workshop saal k akher men rakhti haina aur ooper se itni lambi workshop poore mahine ki ??
Amms smiles and then says
Amms: haan navya is baar mene workshop bech men rakhi kun k kuch logon ka ek band aaraha hai Mumbai se yeh workshop attend karne yeh workshop khass unhi k liye ... men jab pichli baar Mumbai gait hi to whan un k trusty se mili aur unhoon ne mujhse kaha tha men yeh workshop conduct karoon kal unka phone aya k men yeh workshop abhi karron kun k saal k akhir men unka ek concert hai... Aur wo baar baar workshop k lye nahi aasakte kuch kaam ki wajah se isiliye mene yeh poora mhaina un k liye workshop rakhdi ... Ab samajh men aya kun .kia .kisliye meri curiosty ki maa
Navya smiles sheepishly and nods Nandini and amms laughs looking at her red face
Na: amms wese wo hain kon
Amms: koi FAB5 hai aur un k saaath 3 aur loog
N: (wishpers) fab5

CHAPTER 01 C
Nandini smiles remembering all the past
Rishab looks at her and asks phir
N: phir
Navya and nandini after a heart moment with amms left for their hospital . after reaching they resumed their duties over there for the day
Same time , other side

A group of 5 people were travelling in the car and also side by side enjoying the lovely and peaceful atmosphere of the dehradun

Boy1: yaar kitni beautiful city hai ye ...

Girl 1: sahi keh raha hai cabir ... There is a peace in this city ... it feels awesome

Girl 2: kia baat hai mukti tu kab se itna philosophical hone lagi ??

Mu: aesa kuch nahi hai alya but sachi yeh city dil ko buhat sakkooon de rahi it feels as if I am at peace

Ca:kia baat hai is city ne tu hamari mukti ko hi badaal dia !! pata nahi ab aur kia kia beadle gi yeh
city ...

Boy2: sahi keh raha hai cabir

Ca: are waaah hamara sharmela larka dhruv bhi bola ab to pakka is city men kuch hai

All were talking only one was quiet who was listening their babak and smilling all time along with enjying the atmosphere

Ca:arey manik baba tum aese hi muskurate raho k kuch bolo ge bhi ya phir is city ne tumhari bolti band kardi

Bt to his surprise manik did not snap him nor shout at him

Ca: arey baap re yeh city tu pakka kuch hai manik baba kept quiet he didn't scred how is that possible ... yeh city to pakka hamari life men buhat changes laigi ... CHANGES ARE ABOUT TO HAPPEN

Manik did not said him anything only kept driving and thought

MANIKS POV
Wakaai is city men kuch too baaat hai ... I feel at peace ... I feel calm ... this city is beautiful and above all I am getting very good positive vibes from here...Dehradun what have u stored for us ... but as cabir said I also agree this city will bring lots of changes and so CHANGES ARE ABOUT TO HAPPEN...

Fantastic update...

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