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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update! lengthy too... thanks 👏👏
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Amazinggg
Cute
Suprrbbb update
Manan kiss...lovd it
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all thank you so much for big update.lovely update.really love this story so much.manan moments was beautiful 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Excellent update...
Manan's moments were cute...
Wow!!!manik confessed his feelings 2 nandini...
Luved it...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved d update

loved d way their lovestory is progressing

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Posted: 9 years ago
tat was awesome
and beautiful
finally thy are comfortable
and opened up to one another
it was awesome moment btwn them
so ignore game worked for manik
can't wait for nxt post
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Posted: 9 years ago
CHAPTER -60

Nandini felt relaxed and relieved in Manik's arms.

She stayed like that for sometime.

Nandini then realised that they have left the kids with Pia and Arjun.

Nandini without breaking the hug said - Manik...

Manik - Hmmm...

Nandini -

Bahut der hogayi hai. Ab Hume chalna chahiye.

Aarav-Khushi dhoondh rahe honge Hume.

Manik - Nandini... wo log akele thode hi na hai. Pia ke sath hai. Let's just stay here for sometime.

Nandini - But...

Manik - Please...

Nandini - Ok...

Manik broke the hug and looked at Nandini.

Nandini lowered her head due to shyness.

Nandini - Aise kya dekh rahe ho aap?

Manik - Dekh raha hoon ki tum Blush karte hue aur bhi zyada beautiful aur pretty lag rahi ho.

Nandini blushed even harder on hearing this.

Manik thought to tease Nandini a bit.

Manik- Nandini... Tum Agar aise hi blush karti rahogi to problem ho jayegi.

Nandini - Problem???

Manik - Haan. You know Aarav-Khushi confuse hojayenge fir.

Nandini - Kyu?

Manik - Kyu kya. Wo dono to tumhare cheeks ko Tomato samjhenge na Agar itna blush karogi to...

Nandini at first didn't get what Manik said. But then realised that he was teasing her.

Nandini shyly said- Manik...

And playfully hit Manik.

Manik held Nandini's hand and pulled her closer.

Manik - Arey mai mazak nahi kar raha hoon. Aisa hosakta hai. Aur shayad mai bhi confuse hojau? You never know... Then don't blame us...

Nandini - Manik... Aap bhi na... Ab chalein...

Manik - Haan to Chalo na. Maine kab mana Kia?

Nandini started to walk back to the place where Pia , Arjun and the kids were playing.

Manik - Nandini wait.

Nandini stopped and looked at Manik.

Manik came to her and held her by her waist.

Manik - Chalo...

Nandini looked at Manik and then at his hand with which he had held her.

Manik - Kya hua??? Ab ruk kyu gayi... Chalna nahi hai kya?

With this both of them went to the place where Aarav-Khushi were playing.

As soon as the kids saw Manik and Nandini, they ran to them and said- Mumma Dadoo aap log kaha chale gaye the?

Bolo na Mumma...

Nandini looked at Manik for help.

Manik - Aap dono ke liye ek surprise arrange karne gaye the...

Aarav-Khushi - Surprise???? Kya hai surprise???

Luckily for Manik, he spotted an icecream vendor at a distance.

Manik - Surprise ye hai ki... Today you both have the liberty to have as much icecream as you want.

Saying this Manik pointed his finger at the icecream vendor.

Aarav-Khushi's happiness knew no bounds hearing the word 'icecream'.

Both the kids held Manik's hand and took him to eat ice cream.

Pia who was all this while observing Nandini came towards her and said- Kya hua?

Nandini - Kuch nahi Di...

Pia - Kuch to zarur Hua hai. I can see it. Tum chupao mat. Bata bhi do Ab.

Nandini - Nahi Di... Aisa kuch nahi hua.

Saying this she blushed.

Pia- OMG... Did you guys kiss?

Nandini was surprised on hearing this.

Nandini - What??? No... I mean... how do you know?

Pia - How do I know? Iska Matlab I am right...

Nandini - Nahi . Di wo...

Pia- Aye Haye... Meri bholi behna... Mujhe sab kuch pata hota hai. Everything... To bata Am I right or Am I right?

Nandini - Right...

Pia - Haye... Ye to breaking news hai...

Nandini - Di... Shhh... Dheere Bolo. Sab log yahi dekh rahe hai.

Pia- Ok. Ok. Abhi to jaane de rahi hu. But I want all the details.

Nandini - What details Di...

Pia - Details about the kiss... And no shying away. Ok. Warna...

Nandini - Warna kya????

Pia - Warna mai Jiju ko bata dungi ki ... Tum unhe monster bulati thi...

Nandini - Di aap aisa Nahi karsakti...

Pia - Mai karsakti hoon aur karungi. Trailer dikhau kya?

Pia - Jiju... Nandu Kuch keh rahi hai...

Manik - Bolo Nandini...

Nandini - Nahi Kuch nahi. Di to bas aise hi keh rahi hai.

Pia - Arey nahi... Mai aise hi nahi keh rahi hu. Nandini keh rahi hai ki usey bhi icecream chahiye.

Nandini heaved a sigh of relief that Pia changed the topic.


Done with another update.

Hope you guys like it.

Ignore the typos if any.

I have written this chapter in a hurry as most of you were requesting for an update.

If you don't like it, feel free to tell me.

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Posted: 9 years ago
Congrats for your 60 chapter finally you
Gave a update, nice but short tha come
With longer update next time 😛
Edited by LoveyDoveyNeha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Can't wait for the next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow sarah
it was super adorable
their moment
manik's teasing session
awww too cute

and pria she caught them haha...
she really knows how to tease nandu
cant wait for further updates
hehe

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