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Posted: 9 years ago
#21
CHAPTER-4

Few days passed like this. The newly married couple were so lost in their romance . Manik was very romantic kind of guy. Anita felt blessed to get manik as her husband as he was very caring and never failed to fulfill all her wishes even before she opened her mouth.
They went for their honeymoon to Paris and had a nice romantic time there. They got to know a lot about each other. They were out and out a perfect couple. On returning , anita brought a lot of stuff for her little sisters Pia and Nandini.
The two sisters teased anita a lot about her Paris trip. But they were very happy for their Anu Di.

One day after dropping Anita at her house, Manik went to office as he had an urgent meeting. After the meeting got over, he was sitting in the cabin to finish some important work. He got a call from Anita asking him when he would be coming home as he had promised to take lunch at Murthys.
A smile appeared on Manik's face on seeing Anita's name on his mobile screen. He picked the call and Anita asked him to pick nandini from her college while coming. He said that he will be reaching in 15 min and hung up the call.
He reached Nandu's college in 5 min as it was near to his office. He enquired about Nandini and someone said that she was in the library. He reached there and the sight in front of him was enough to boil his blood.
He saw that a few boys were trying to force themselves upon her. He shouted on top on his voice.
Manik- LEAVE HER.
On hearing his voice the boys loosened their grip on her. Taking the chance Nandini pushed them and ran towards Manik and hid behind her.
Manik gave her his coat and asked her to wait outside. After she left, he beat the shit out of those boys and handed them to cops . He talked to the principal and made sure they got suspended.
He came to Nandini and was about to say something, suddenly Nandini hugged him tightly and started sobbing. He consoled her by caressing her hair and assured that everything will be fine. She broke the hug still sobbing and looked down.
Manik lifted her chin with his index finger and wiped her tears and said that she doesn't need to be scared as the bad phase is over and such thing won't happen again.
She smiled slightly and thanked him for saving her.
He took her to a nearby store and bought her a dress and asked her to change as her dress was torn at her shoulders.
He asked her not to discuss the library incident with anyone and that he will handle the matter in his way.
She nodded in yes and they drove to murthy Mansion.
Manik made a mental note to talk it out with Anita before sharing it with Padma(Nandini's mother).

They reached home , had their lunch. Nandini was silent all this while. After lunch she excused herself and went to her room after looking at Manik once.

Anita observed Nandu's silence and thought to ask Manik about it as till morning she was OK then what had happened to her all of a sudden.

In the meantime, nandu closed her door and cried her heart out. Though Manik had assured that such thing won't happen again but she was still scared and decided that she won't go to college from now on. Thinking of all this she drifted to sleep.

Done with another update.
Hope you guys like it.

Waiting for your comments.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#22
Manik is a super jiju...

But he is nandus jiju
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
awesome update...
but i seriously don't like manik with anita,,,,,,,

we love manan that much k kisi or ko imagine hi nahi kiya jata manik ke saath,,,,,

i know age jaake manan hi hone wala hai ...

bechari meri nandu kitna dar gayi hai,,,,,,,,,,,

loved it

update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24


Amazing story. ..

Looking forward to seeing what happened next.

Please continue.

Stay blessed and keep writing.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Woooww awwwsoommee fresh concept luv it but plzz end Anita chapter bcoz m to anita k place m Niti read karti huu cant see Manik romancing wid someone elsss soo plzz jaldi end anita chap and start Manan jaldi jaldi Plzzz zzz zzz
update Next jaldi jaldi plzzz
desperatellyy waitinggg
Luv that Prologur part luv all Manan
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Nice story.
Read all parts...
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Awesome story .. It's really diffrent... N I really liked it... The name of the story is really attractive.. Actually the reason why I started reading it
Intersting concept.. Looking forward to read more
Plz pm me when u post next
I've send u buddy request...

Thanxx for sharing this story

Keep smiling
Stay blessed
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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WOW...JURT WOW...THIS MAN...MANIK MALHOTHRA IS SEEMS LIKE AN IDEAL MAN...ITS GOOD..NOW FAMILIES DON'T HAVE TO WORRY ANYMORE...AGR MANIK JAISA HAR INSAAN HOGA THN TOH BOHOT ACCHA HAI...EK SE SHADI...DUSRI FREE FREE...PARENTS KO TENSION LENE KI KOI ZAROORAT HI NEHI HOGI
BEHNA..KUCH LIKHNE SE PEHLE SOCH TOH LO KYA LIKH RAHA HO
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
CHAPTER-5

Manik and Anita were sitting in their room at Anita's house. Anita asked him what is the matter with Nandini. She was all OK before going to college and now she seems so lost.

Manik sighed and took Anita's hand in his hand and told her everything that happened in the college.

Hearing all this Anita was very shocked. Tears escaped her eyes. She couldn't believe that Nandini went through all this.

She said that Nandini is still a kid at heart and she must be shattered after all this.
Manik consoled her and said that they will always stand by Nandini.

Anita thought to talk to Nandu once and excused herself .

Anita went to Nandu's room and asked her to open the door.
Hearing her Anu Di's voice ,Nandu opened the door. Anita came inside and closed the door.

She hugged Nandu and Nandini started crying. In between her son's she said-

Nandini- Di I have decided something and I want you to support me in that.

Anita- Of course Nandu I will support you in every decision you take. What is it say?

Nandini- Di I have decided that I will never ever go to that college.

Anita- Nandu what are you saying?
Just because of some bad incident you will stop your studies. My Nandu is not so weak. You are my strong girl na bachcha. Don't think negative.

Nandini- No Di it's final. I'm not going to that college.

Anita tried to make her understand but in vain. So she gave up and thought to talk to her mother.

She along with Manik talked to her mother and they came to a conclusion that they will send her to some other college in another city so that she gets over that incident and it will be a good change for her.

So they decided to send her to their Uncles (Padma's brother) place in Shimla.

They spoke to Nandini about it. At first she refused to leave them and go but then agreed after a lot of insistence from them.

Finally the day arrived when Nandini had to go to Shimla . Anita, Pia and Padma had tears in their eyes as their little Nandu would be away from them. Nandini also had tears but she decided to stay strong for her family's sake as she didn't want to stress them further.

With heavy heart she bid goodbye to them and left for Shimla.

Done with the update.
Hope you guys like it.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Nice story.
pls give long updates

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