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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 2
Nandini's POV

"One strawberry milkshake please!"

I bought one from the stall and continued walking on this crowded beach. CARNIVAL! I so love them. It's been years since I last came to this carnival. I remember, before Rishab was born...dad used to bring me here everyday for the whole month till this carnival lasted. And this, this strawberry milkshake used to be my favorite. It still is! And am merrily drinking it here and...

"Wwoohhh!"
There I land on the ground and a completely shirtless, fair tint skinned hottie over me. COMPLETELY! 'Shut up Nandini! What is wrong with you??!'

"Woohhh! Aahh! Am soorrry!" The shirtless creature said as soon as we got up. "I would rather prefer drinking my milkshake than wearing it ..but that's OK! You're lucky!" I replied sarcastically in return all this while trying to clean my t-shirt but the milkshake had no plans to come out I see. It had completely soaked in my clothes making me look like a roadside pig. Uurrgh!! Let's clean up now.

"Aaah! Let me buy you a shirt." He said following me. "No thanxx! I'll manage." I replied paying him not much attention. "Ohh come on. Plzz" he pleaded again. Oh god, make him leave plzz. "Hey! I'm Manik, by the way!" He forwarded his hand this time. I just replied with a fake smile and continued walking away. "Ohh come on, honour me to show this new and beautiful young lady in town some southern hospitality plz." Jerk! "Ohh! So hitting on strangers is what you call southern hospitality here! I see. Impressive!" Oh! The sarcastic ME is in full mood!

As I spoke these words he stopped walking beside me. For once I had thought that I was successful in wooing that jerk away...but my badluck today. The next moment he was standing in front of me, blocking my way. Now I notice...he's really tall and well built. "You know what!! I have no interest in buying you a shirt." This idiot, I feel like killing him right now. "Oh! Is that so?!"I say, amused. Pretending yaar! "Yeah! Actually I was just taking a break so that the opponents could catch a little breath. You know, I'm a pro in volleyball so the others have to really work hard to catch up with me."

After listening to him, I realize he must be playing volleyball, that's why he's all shirtless. I glance to where he was indicating and there are people with confusion printed all over their faces and looking in our direction. "Impressive, haan!" I reply looking back at him. And the very next moment, he was leaning onto me. I could feel his lips on my earlobe. "So why don't you come and WATCH...ME...PLAY!" He said huskily while exaggerating the last three words. Oh gooddiiee ggodd! I'm sure he knows that this little proximity of ours is affecting me. The look on his face says it all. 'But don't lose it Nandini! Get back into action.' I gave an ear to ear smile to him and I can see him smirking. Dimwit! I nudged his chest a little pushing him away from from me. "That's awesome!... But I'll pass! Thankyou!" A polite reply from me. Isn't it??!!

I walked away without even glancing back at him. I really have no interest in watching his smirking jaw.

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It was evening already and I was still on the beach. Hopefully, I didn't have any more encounters with that jerk. But my clothes still stink. But no matter what, am not going back. Although it's crowded here but I still feel peaceful. I just don't want to go back HOME!

I was on a stall looking for t-shirt that could replace my already stinking one. "Looking for cartoons??!" I heard a girl. "I can show you better ones around here!" I looked in the direction of the voice and there was a girl in a crop top and shorts. She was trying few sunglasses standing beside me. I saw what she was indicating at and she was actually pointing out to that t-shirt in my hand which had a dora printed on it. Oopss! I did not pick this intentionally. "no! Actually looking for a simple tee to replace this stinking one." I told her pointing to my clothes which still had stains of the strawberry milkshake. "so how about this one??" she came beside me and selected a translucent orange tee. "better!"

"hey! Mukti! by the way." she forwarded her hand. "Nandini!" I shook hands giving a considerate smile. 'She looks no harm, Nandini.' I smiled to myself thinking that.

"dad's looking for you!" I was paying for the tee when I heard Rishab. "go and tell him, you didn't see me." I said paying not much attention to him. "That's not happening!" Agitated by his words, I handed him a 1000 rupee note from my wallet, that first came in my hand "it is happening!" and I walked away with Mukti. "Nice going business, sister!" I heard Rishab's shout behind me but I preferred keeping an annoyed expression while Mukti chuckled.

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After few mins, we both were walking on the beachside. "So, you seem to be new to the town?" Mukti started the conversation. "yeah! I came today only. Actually, my mom dropped my brother and me here, at our dad's place for the summer." I replied. "but it's not that I am coming here for the first time. I was born here and been here for about 7 years of my life. After that the 4 of us moved to Mumbai. But then... mom and dad started having differences. Fights and cries became a daily drama at home so both of them got divorced. Rishab was small at that time, about a year and a half so he needed mother care but I wanted to be with dad. I pleaded dad to bring me back with him here... but he was adamant on not doing so. One night, he just left all of us there and came back running here like a coward. Since, then he's been hiding here in Goa without any identity... He used to visit us in Mumbai once a year but after he left, I've never really talked to him other than saying a cold 'am fine'. *chuckle* but suddenly, this year...he called up mom and told her that he wants to spend the summer with his kids so mom forcefully dropped us here." I told her my life history, slowly, sadly. "oh come on! No saddy saddy now! Even I have a family back at a house somewhere near, but both of them really give a damn about me and same is with me. Neither do they care nor do I." she stated totally carefree. "so where do you live then??" I asked, amused. "I stay at Harshad's place. Harshad! My boyfriend!" I nodded at her. "you know what, you should meet Harshad. Come on."

After few minutes, we were standing in a crowd and there we could see 3 people juggling with fire balls. "That's him.!" Mukti pointed out to the guy standing in the middle and juggling with balls. He seemed tall and was quite muscular.

He immediately, reminded me of the guy from the afternoon. Manik! His hot breath still seems to be lingering on my ears. 'huh Nandini! Stop thinking shit!' I scolded myself and then we continued watching the fire juggling show.

"hey baby!" Mukti exclaimed and hopped on Harshad as soon the show got over. "you were superb!" she kissed him on the cheek and I stood there, a little far from the couple. "Thankyou sweety!" Harshad replied. "come, I want you to meet someone." Mukti brought him to me.

"Harshad, that's Nandini! My new friend." she said and I just smiled. He forwarded his hand towards me "Harshad!" he said to me. And I forwarded my hand too for the handshake. "I know, thanks to Mukti.! Nandini!" I replied but I felt awkward with him. The way he held my hands and carressed it, it was uncomfortable. I just politely withdrew my hand. I don't wanna create a scene here. And then the 3 of us walked away.

POV ends.

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Hello guys, long time na?? But am sorry. My exams were/are going on. I'm not able to work on my stories. But currently I'm righting my other story that will be updated soon. Till the happy reading!! And tell me how you guys liked the MaNan meet!!
Head on guys...reply, like, comment...atleast do something!!!! Bye my lovelies!!! Take care

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Posted: 9 years ago
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manik nandini met


mukti s bf harsshad

nandini told her everything about her life

nice update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice update...
Manan meet was awesome...

Love the bond between mukti n nandu...

Harshad is such a jerk...

Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

manik nandini met


mukti s bf harsshad

nandini told her everything about her life

nice update😊


Yes she did!! Thankss!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandhya098

Nice update...

Manan meet was awesome...

Love the bond between mukti n nandu...

Harshad is such a jerk...

Continue soon...


Thankyou soo much!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
loved manan meet
harshad is such a jerk
nandu told mukti about her life
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update
nandini and mukti bonding is fast and nice
harshad is and will always be jerk
manik and nandini was funny😛
thanks for the pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: ragini_nirva

nice update

nandini and mukti bonding is fast and nice
harshad is and will always be jerk
manik and nandini was funny😛
thanks for the pm
update soon


Thankyou. So much!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 3

Manik's POV.

"Hey Handsome!" I heard a familiar voice behind me. OH GOD! Not this one. "hi...*irritating* SOHA!" how could I be more polite than this?!

Wait, where is her butterfly...who 24X7 keeps fluttering around her. ALYA! I looked around and found Alya and Dhruv together. I'm sure...that idiot is still trying to hit on her...but hasn't been able to impress her in a long time.

"ahh...how come..you here?" I said coming back from my thought land..and paid a little attention to my ex, 'not that I really wanted to'! I was looking into my vicinity to find an excuse to escape this bala! "huh! *chuckling* what do you mean by that, Manik? A massive carnival is on full swing in here, and being your girlfriend, am I not supposed to enjoy with you?" she said...but why is she being sooo chipkoo with me. And there follows her hand now. The definitely not-so-soft hand of her on my cheek. "oh, cut the crap, Soha!" I said gently shoving off her hand from my cheek. Gggoooddd!!! I can't even be rude to her! "All of Goa knows, Manik Malhotra only does flings!!" " But...I have been the only one you've dated for more than 6 months." She said with a little sadness creeping over her face. BUT! Who cares??!! "yeah, because you're Navya's close friend...and I could not deny you at the first place, when you approached me because... you and Navya share a close bond. And I was not in a mood to upset my sweet sissy." Her face depicted hints of annoyance now. "look Soha, I am glad that you were the first girl whom I've dated for so long...but,... but sweetheart! Sorry to burst your bubble, you're not the only one. I'm still waiting for the right girl.! Whom I can officially call my 'girlfriend' " I said all that with a sweet smile.

Yeah, that might sound a little girlish! I'm waiting for the right person! But, I too have quite similar thoughts. I do flings just to pass my time...so that at some point of time, I may be able to feel something...but that has not been happening lately. It was all good a year and a half ago...but now everything's changed! I've changed! But still a little corner of my heart is in search of true love. Ahhh, let's cut the crap now!.

Soha was quiet for sometime. Maybe, engrossed in her thoughts. And meanwhile, I found my escape!! THE NEW GIRL IN TOWN.!! She was probably shopping with her friend and...she was not wearing the same clothes from this morning.! She was wearing a translucent light orange tee...which showed her perfect curves. 'Ahh, nice chick! You're up for your next target...buddy!'

"Anyway Manik, let bygones be bygones! Let's come back to the present. So what are your plans for tomorrow?" she asked interrupting my thoughts. Uurgh! Why can't she keep that organ of her's mum for sometime and let other's be in peace. I wonder how Navya and Soha are close friends??!! "You joining tomorrow? For the match?" she asked again. "yeah!" I said paying not much attention to her. Because my attention was somewhere else.

I stared into her eyes while she returned that back to me by staring into mine. Soha was a long forgotten business for me since the time the new girl and I had been staring into each other. I'm sure she had recognised me by the time...but why is her face so blank??!! In my trance, I took a step forward towards her only to be stopped by a nudge on my chest.

"Ab tum kahan jaa rhe ho?" Said Soha. Arre yaar! Now the new girl broke our eyelock... probably she might have seen me with someone else. Ab woh 'hitting on strangers' wali theory ko sach man legi! Soohhaa ppoohhaa!! I'll kill you someday. "I got it Soha, we're meeting for the match tomorrow." I spoke, totally annoyed. "Good!" She spoke and then she leaned forward. She kissed my cheek and in a reflex my eyes darted towards the new girl. I finally let out a breadth out of satisfaction, I didn't know I was actually holding. SHE DID NOT SEE US! Thank god! She was still engrossed in her shopping and here finally... Soha walked away with Alya and Dhruv joined me!!

"buddy...you coming na... tomorrow??" he asked me. I smiled at him indicating a yes. "good!!! Because if you YES!! Then Soha YES!!! So, Alya YES!!! And finally me...YES!! Woohhoo!!" I chuckled at him. So much desperation for Alya!! I was about to open my mouth to say further when suddenly...

Suddenly, Harshad appeared from nowhere and caught hold of Dhruv's neck. "so, how are you old buddy??" he exclaimed. A pig. A real pig !! "Harshad!! Leave him" I said in a stern voice and parted Dhruv and Harshad.

Finally, was successful in doing so but the way he walked seemed as if he's drunk. Not seemed... Literally he's totally drunk! "look look, who we have here! The player boy!!"
What crap he's telling? Pig! "keep your mouth shut or else I'll..." I was warning him but that pig had to squeak again.."arre arre, you are taking me wrong buddy, I'm talking about your volleyball skills 'the playing skills'. what did you think.???... Ohh that 'playerboy!' wooff! No not at all...you're the most sophisticated guy in Goa! Isn't it? The sophisticated prince!" he taunted. Guufff! He's drunk but I guess that really doesn't affect him. His taunts just don't stop.
"anyway, see you for the match tomorrow! Get ready to lllooossseee!! Hahhh!" he taunted and walked away along with his girlfriend.

But then we both came across. THE NEW GIRL IN TOWN and me. Arre yaar! Yeh toh Harshad ke saath hi thi! Kahin issne un saari baaton ko galat toh nhi samajh liya.??!! We both looked in the eye and then she walked away! No expressions! Why does she always wear a blank expression face. I know she wears that and this is not really her personality. There is more to her, I guessed that from her eyes!! Beautiful eyes and obviously from the experience I've had with girls.
I WANT TO KNOW HER. This is getting strange with her. But still I'm interested in her.

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Hey guys!!!! I'm sorry...maine bohot late update kiya and that too a small one. But am sincerely sorry! I will try to come up soon till then you guys enjoy your life... My pretty lovelies! Bye ' ' ' ' '
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
manik is a player of both sports & hearts
but he also has a wish 2 find his dream girl
how sweet
but what happened with him one year ago?
he was attracted towards nandu
plz cont soon

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