Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr
Yaar... I want to hug you right now for showing the bond between Mukti and Nandini... I loved it so much and you know yours is the only story jaha I read each and every line so dhyaan se, even those parts where there is no MaNan.
Cabir, what he said to Manik, it was so damn nice, main wait hi kar rahi thi ki Cabir apna gyaan bantna shuru karega, but you ended the update, itani achi wali feels thi ManBir wale sequence mein...
Agar you would have ended the part where Manik and Cabir have a talk and reach destination and then Manik would have been left to think na.. That would have been a perfect cliffhanger, you know..
"what will be Manik's next step of action?"
I am glad you take my comments so seriously, it makes me want to give nice long and descriptive feed back and even makes the reading process more enjoyable. :)