MaNan os : Killer by love - Page 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
#11
Wow awesome update...
So manan r already in a relationship...
Who was in the room...
Manan convo was cute...
Luved it..
Waiting for nxt ...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#12
Oh God... Amazing update... But yeah kon tha .. Horror all around 😕
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Posted: 9 years ago
#13
hmm.. am so happy with ur feedbacks . thankyou guyz for reading this. and am also damn excited for the upcoming parts just like u guyz are.. so keep reading. and i'll try my best to give u guyz daily updates..
happy reading 😃

KILLER BY LOVE :2

A week later
night 11: 38
Manik and the girl on phone..
Manik : Atlast the waiting is coming to an end. tomorrow is a big day ! am coming ...
girl : hmm.. i am so xited.. atlast u r coming to me. we'll be together forever.
manik : a silent pause, and u hav no idea.. how desperately i've been waiting for this. yea... forever . . . !!
girl : tomorrow u'll reach here by night and then we hav only one day left for our day . our wedding.. am so happy manik ..
and they went on talking for hours.
( Yea guyz they going to marry. they havn't even exchanged rings bcoz manik was out of state and it was him who suggested for straight to marraige. and she also agreed merrily. They were in same college. she was the first one to fall for him and confessed also. later it ended up to marraige .)
next night .
on call . girl : manik why havent u reach yet ? is there any delay in flight ?
manik : sorry .. i cancelled that plan. i'll reach there by tomorrow night only. an urgent call u see...
girl in a sad complaining tone : wots dis.. day aftr tomorrow its our wedding. tomorrow is the haldi , mehendi, sangeeth and all.. and u won't be attending any of these.. this is not fair huh !
manik : plz try to understand. to be bride just chill ok ... be nyc and enjoy every ceremony i'll be der for the wedding !! and he let out a giggle..
talk continues..
NEXT MRNG
scene shifts to Mumai . INDIA.(girl's home)
(Manik is in Bali ryt now. business related )
the house is decorated elegantly. white and purple flowers. lights, and full of music , rush..
the HALDI ceremony is on full swing. the girl is dressed in a yellow lehenga with a wide neck sleevless white blouse and her hair tied in a messy bun and decorated with floral jewelleries. the later comes mehendi ceremony.
she makes them write manik in her palm and her hands and legs are beautifully crafted with mehendi.. the aroma of mehendi dissolves in the air she goes up and comes back for the sangeeth at night dressed in a blue crop top and elegant baby pink full length satin skirt and paired it up with a earring and her hair neatly curled and set . she hav a pleasant smile pasted on her face. the ceremony goes very well.
at 11:38
manik receives a message he was in the car on the way to Mumbai.he received some messages and he checked it.
she hav send him the pics and videos of all ceremony. and a note "I miss u babe. come to me soon.i love you"
he opened her pics and gazed it . he closed his eyes. he could feel that smile. that twinkle in her eyes. the blood pumping to the cheeks an unknown smile crept on his lips. the wind kept on caressing his hair patting his face. he let out a whisper into the dark night " i love you. forever and ever ... only if u u had stay and i could tell u "
a lone tear escaped his eyes, trailing down through his cheeks kissing his lips and ending up on his chin. some drops still hugging his eyelashes like dewdrops of trees on winters.
he blinked them away and stared to the utter darkness . . .

i knw its short. but i promise to keep the next part a lil long and willl give more mysteries too 😉 and here also if u read it intensely some questions are surely gonna pop up ... and answers will be revealed ...
... and dnt forget the feedbacks .
ok thanks bye. 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome update...
By the way who is she...
Manik seemed to love her..
Luved it..
Waiting for nxt...
And yes dear whenever u update change the title as no one will able to know tht u updated...
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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plss update the next part...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so sorry for the delay guyz, got stuck in some celebrationz , trips and lately health issues. apologies 🤔
and here's the new part. keep reading 😊 some secrets to be revealed...
Wedding Night
KILLER BY LOVE

It was atlast the wedding day. The whole house was filled with chaos. people rushing here and there. and by the evening in girl's bedroom.
she came out wearing a maroon lehenga. it sparkled with the silver stones studded on it. her hair was tied in a bun and decorated with flowers. branded designer jewelleries enhanced her spakle. her spa treatment did worked well giving her the bridal glow. her elegant bridal makeup . she stood in front of the mirror smiling. gazing at herself. in some moments she would be his.. forever together. her dreams chain got broke wen her cell rang.she took the call.
girl : manik, phn kyu kiya.. abhi mandap me hi toh aa rhi hu. thoda toh wait krlo
manik : before our wedding i wanna spend sm alone tym with you.. plz.. come with me ? he asked in a innocent tone
nw hw could smone say no to that ?! 😉
she agreed and she got out through the back door. there he was waiting in his car. wearing his wedding dress. total punjabi style.
a silk cloth of red and gold shade. looking handsome as ever.
she hopped in and they drove off..

they reached a little far from the destination.
(by the way , this place is not her home town ok. manik suggested this place for wedding so she shifte to here few days before wedding only for this purpose. that's why she's not aware of places in here.)
it was like a forest.. desserted isolated place. some kind of garden. it was dark. a total creepy feeling. dry leaves throughout the way. she walked through them. she joked : waise toh brides roses jaise flowers ki path par chalke entry marti hai.. par tum toh mujhe is dry leaves pe chala rahe ho and giggled.
few steps later her heels broke. so she put them aside and walk bare leg. they keep on talking. suddenly she gets no response frm him so she turns back and see he's not there .. she panicks. then she hears a noise nearby. someone shouting.. she rushes towards there shouthing his name.
there is a house. old. a lil scary, haunted type. she slowly reaches the door. smthng pierce her foot wen she enter the house her red footprints are left (blood) 😲
(ryt now she's totally tired by running, totally messy, panicked )
but she moves on calling out his name. then she come across a room, she's about to open the door. ..

Smashh !!! someone hits her with a rod . she falls there. that someone , pulls her hand take hold of it tightly which crushes her glass bangles and blood starts dripping down through her hands , he drags her , as she's lying in front of that room. only somelow unheard whispers of pleading and help comes out frm her. her tears rolling down and mixing with the blood. he keeps dragging her on the floor by making sound with the rod on floor through one hand and other pulling her arms. leaving her blood stains all the way along...

yea yea its short.. but plz be happy with this. coz i hav still not recovered completely . will keep updating. feedbacks needed.
ok bye thanks 😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
Plzzz suspension killing me post sooon tc.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18
Nd when u post next part plzz add page number nd part number too it easy to find out .

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