MaNan FF-HAI KYA YEH TERE MERE DARMIYAAN?Chap4 pg21 / 27thApr/PM'sSent - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Okay so as I had asked you all that wich story to update first...& many told me to update this story...so here is the update😊
Enjoy😛

Chapter 2

Manik : Cabirr! Chal jaldi kaha hai?? Dhruv Mukti Alya sab le liya hain na??
Dhruv : Haan buddy tension mat le sab barabar se le liye hai.
Manik : Are yr yeh Cabir kaha reh gaya?? CABIRRR!!
Cabir : Are aagaya...kya chilla raha hai!
Manik : Time dekha hai...flight miss hojayegi😡
Cabir : Nahi hogi mere bhai...chal ab!
Neyo : Bachho sambhal kar jana. Aur waha pohochte hi call kardena mujhe.
Manik : Haa Mom kardunga. Lekin aap bhi aate toh.
Neyo : Manik main aajati par tere Papa ko kaam hai yaha toh main unke saath next week aajaungi.
Maan : Kyu bachho jaane ke liye tayar?
All : Yesss!!
Maan : Aur haan Manik hum next week aajayenge.
Manik : Okay Dad! Bye Mom! Bye Dad!
Fab 4 : Bye Uncle Aunty!
Maan/Neyo : Byee bachho😊

And they left from there all set to go to India. They were in the jeep & the driver was driving the car. Manik was sitting beside him & Fab4 were behind.

Cabir : Manik! Tune aajtak Nandini ke baareme sab bataya par kabhi uski photo nhi batayi. Kyu?
Mukti : Haan yr kabhi dekha bhi nahi usko.
Manik : Guyss waha jaakar dikha dunga na. Dekhlena!
Cabir : Aree par abhi tak kyu nhi bataya??
Manik : Arrghh! Meri marzi.
Cabir : Aree lekin...
Dhruv : Cabir chupkar na. Kitni bakwaas karega. Usne nhi batani photo toh nhi batayi.
Cabir : Okay! 😛

After few mins they reached airport. The driver dropped them & left from there. They passed all the necessary checkings & sat in the plane. Oh ofcourse their private Fab5 plane😉
They were sitting somewhat like this- Manik beside Cabir then behind them Alya next to her Dhruv & Mukti was beside Cabir.

The flight took off & half an passed. Cabir was getting really bored as Dhrulya were busy romancing, Mukti was listening music & Manik was busy in his thoughts.

Cabir : Yaar mujhe bore ho raha hai. Manik chal koi game khelte hai.
Manik : Tu chota bachha hai jo game khelega?
Cabir : Are yeh game bachho wali nahi hai. Its Rapid fire!
Manik : What fire??
Cabir : Rapid fire Manik! Tujhe yeh game nhi pata?
Manik : Nahi!
Mukti : Dhruv Alya tumlogo ko pata hai??
Dhrulya : Noo!
Mukti : Oho Cabir explain kar inn logo ko.
Cabir : Ok so its like main ek word bolunga aur jo tere dimaag mein aayega like pehle jo bhi aayega woh boldena. You cant take time to think. Like Mukti we'll show them.
Mukti :Okay shoot!
Cabir : Water
Mukti : Evrywhere
Cabir : Love
Mukti : Abhi
Manik : Okay Okay I got it!
Cabir : Dhrulya uh both got it??
Manik/Mukti/Dhruv/Alya : Dhrulya???😕
Cabir : Hey bhagwan! Kaise dost bheje hai mere pass. Sab mujhe hi samjhana padta hai. Are Dhruv ka Dhru & Alya ka Lya that 'Dhrulya'. Samjhe?
All 4 : Whatever.
Dhrulya : Ok yaa we got it. Its fun.
Cabir : So lets start with Alya. Alya ready?
Alya : Yes! Shoot!
Cabir : Fan
Alya : Ranbir
Cabir : Food
Alya : Tasty
Cabir : Hindi
Alya : Umm...
Cabir : Thats it! You lose!
Mukti : Manik now ur turn!
Manik : Okay!
Mukti : World
Manik : Music
Mukti : Music
Manik : Fab5
Mukti : Life
Manik : Parents
Mukti : Love
Manik : Na...
Cabir looked at Mukti & she also looked at him & both passed a victory smile.
Manik : Um...I'm tired! Goin for some sleep.

Next day they reached India. All felt like they were home since it was their country India. There was a smile playing on all of their lips.
Cabir : Finally India! I missed you!
Mukti : Yeah seriously! It feels so awesm.
Dhrulya just smiled coz they were busy admiring the surroundings.
Manik (in mind) : It feels so right, so good. Finally I'm in my country. India. Nandini. I missed you! Pata nahi aaj mujhe dekhne ke baad tumhara kya reaction hoga. Tum khush hogi? Surprised? Shocked? Yaa phir...Pata nahi!
Dhruv : Buddy kaha khogaya? Chal Nandini ke ghar jaana haina? Aur address??
Manik : Woh mujhe yaad hai buddy! Chalo guyss.
Cabir : Waah! Address bhi yaad hai😛
Manik : 😡
Cabir : Sorry!

They hired a taxi as they had nt informed anyone abt their arrival. Soon they reached their destination.


Nandini's place
Nandini : Mom! Aapne Maan Uncle aur Neyo Aunty ko bol diya naa??
Priti : Haa beta bol diya hai woh bhi next week tak aajayenge.
Nandini : Okay! Acha Mom mein abhi orphanage jaa rahi hu! Ek ghante mein aajaungi.
Priti : Aree par...
Nandini : Byee mom! Bye bye bye... & she ran from there.
Priti just smiled looking at the way she went. And she didnt realize when tears made their way out from her eyes.

Raj : Priti kya hua? Ro kyu rahi ho??
Priti : Aree aap kab aaye??
Raj : Bas abhi abhi room se niche utara toh tumhe rote hue dekha. Kya baat hai?
Priti : Kuch nhi bas Nandini ke baare mein soch rahi thi. Pata hi nhi chala kab meri gudiya itni badi ho gayi. Kuch hi dino mein wo humse door chali jayegi.
And she started crying.
Raj : Haan Priti kab Nandu itni badi hogayi kuch pata hi nhi chala. Par tumhe pata hai naa Nandu ne sakt mana kia tha rone se. Aur agar usse pata chala naa toh woh kahi nhi jaayegi (chuckling)
And Priti too chuckled on this. Both were smiling and Raj side hugged her.

"Apne bete ko bhul gaye naa aap dono??"

They were facing their back to the door but as soon as they heard the voice they turned back with a jerk. And Priti murmured his name 'Manik'. While Manik was smiling like a fool standing on the door. The tears which had stopped again started flowing from her eyes after seeing his son.

Manik came running to them & hugged both of them tightly. Raj & Priti too reciprocated in the same way. Fab 4 were standing there smiling seeing the trio.
Priti : Kaisa hai mera bachha??
Manik : Bilkul thik hu😊
Raj : Tu toh kitna bada hogaya. Itna sa tha jab yaha se gaya tha.
Priti : Lekin Manik tu toh next week aane wala tha naa??
Manik : Haan par phir maine socha kyu naa app logo ko surprise doon!😉 Toh kaisa laga surprise?
Raj : Bohot hi khoobsurat.
Priti : Toh phir Neyo aur Maan bhai bhi aaye honge naa? Kaha hai woh??
Manik : Nahi aunty woh dono nhi aaye. Woh Dad ko kuch kaam tha isilye dono nextweek hi aayenge.
Raj : Aree par ab tu apne doston se bhi milwayega ya phir humse baatein hi karta rahega!
Cabir : Dekhiye naa uncle kabse yaha khade hai😭 Aur yeh hai ki iska saaman bhi hume uthana padta hai.
Manik : Cabirr apni nautanki band kar!
Manik : Aunty Uncle yeh hai Cabir Mukti Alya & Dhruv! Aur guyss yeh hai My Priti aunty & Raj uncle😃
All greeted each othet while Manik was busy looking here & there. Priti noticed it so she said smiling "Nandu nhi hai ghar pe. Bahar gayi hai. Aadhe ghante ke baad aayegi. Tab tak tum sab log fresh hojaw!"
Manik looked embarassed & Cabir & Mukti tried to control their laugh.
Soon all went to their rooms & freshened up. Still there was no sign of Nandini. All gathered in the hall & Priti was calling Nandini bt she was not picking up the call.

Priti : Yeh ladki bhi naa phone rakhti hi kyu hai jab uthana nhi hota?😡
Raj : Shaant hojaw Priti! Woh bachho ke saath hogi isilye dhyaan nhi diya hoga.
Priti : Aree lekin...
Manik : Kya hua aunty? Koi problem?
Raj : Kuch nhi beta woh Nandu waha phone nhi utha rahi aur yeh yaha par gussa ho rhi hai.
Manik : Aap kahe toh main le aau usse??
Raj : Aree Nahin...
Priti : Haan beta plss tum jakar le aao usse. Waise bhi bohot kaam baaki hai shaadi ki tayaari ke liye.
Manik : Thik hai aunty! Aap mujhe address dijiye main jaata hu!
Fab4 : Hum bhi chalte hai.
Manik : Okay!
Priti then gave him the address & they all left to pick up Nandini from there.


Pheww! Done😛 I know No manan meet😛 But woh main next chap mein karaungi. Till then m a lil greedy for ur comments. 😆 So jldi jldi batao kaisa laga??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Amazing part.
Waiting for the manan meet.
Thnks for the pm.
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Thanks for the pm

Great start!!
Nandini_goyal thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Answer to the question-
I am liking both so.. Which ever you are comfortable with :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
This one
Or As uh wish...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
Finally manik came to India. .
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
thank for pm
amazing update
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Awsmmm


Awsmmm


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Awssmmm


Waiting for Manan meet


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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Finally manik in india for nandini wohooo
Cabir was so fun really nice update now aryaman nandini breakup mission start
I hope cabir n mukti hel them to be together..
Boht amazing
Thankyouu for pm me
Keep writing 😉 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
Hey dear thanks for the pm
Amazing update
Waiting for the manan meet
Do continue soon

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