MANAN FS: ZINDAGI DO PAL KI...[chapter 2) pg 9 ///(v.v.imp note)pg 13 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: reet0143



are rona kyu a raha hai...sisters hote hi care and love karne ke liye hai...u r like my sweet siso and agar sis tumhare jaisi ho to use pamper karna to banta hai na...hooo akele akele ice cream khali...mujhe poocha bhi nahi...mere hisse ki bhi khali ...aur fever karva liya...

mujhe bhi fever hai kafi dino se upar se stomach infection...aaj hi sare test karvaye hai ...but u just take care of yourself and aage se bhi dhayan rakhna ...jo man karta hai khao but in a limit ta k tumhe koi prob na ho...ok sweetipie...and i love u too...

Aap ki saari baate main manungi..but aap ko merit bhi baat man I hogi air ache se apna dhyan rakhna hoga.
Please didu..aaap na bilkul careless mat Hona..
Get well soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: crystalfairy95

Hi dear,

It was beautiful update . i totally fell for it.
Manan convo was just lovely!
cont soon...
thanks for the pm.


take care😊

Thank u so so much..😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
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Thank u .😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
CHAPTER 2
LOVE HEALS EVERYTHING. ~😳



"HMM..bilkul stars ki Tarah na..they shine for us and show us path in darkness...but u know what Nandini. These stars na. They dissapear..!!"

N: "isiliye toh manik...u don't need. to find a soulmate in star. U will find a star in your soulmate who us gonna shine for you. Who is gonna show u path in darkness no matter how dark it us..no matter how the difficult situation it is..but that soulmate will be their for u. Forever..!!!
(all this while manik was looking at her with so much of amusement and some unknown feeling's that were flooding in his eyes. He just could not believe that such a petitie girl..who looked so innocent had such deep thinking. Her each and every words were healing Hus wounds. He was getting more and more curious. It was like he had finally found someone who could answer all his questions that were buried inside his mind and heart that always Gave him immense pain and today he felt happy to know that he could ask all those questions to her. And hr knew he will be satisfied and content with the answers she wull give him. ,!!! So without wasting a second he just asked.

"Soul mate !! Aisa kuch nai hota Nandini..!! Soulmate jaisa kuch bhi nahi hota..!! Ye Sab baatein sunne main hi achi lagti hain..yeh sirf imagination hain...aur kuch nahi..!! True love doesnt exist..!! Agar aap kisise pyaar karoge na toh aako surf dhoka hi milega kyunki this world is very cruel..!! Kisiko kisi airki koi parwah nahi hota hain..log Jo bhi kaam karate hain ushke piche ek selfish reason chupi hoti hain..everyone is selfish..everyone..!!(and then nandu saw few tears dripping from his eyes..!! )

Nandu slid a little more closer to manik and softly cleared his tears... but manik didn't look at her..he was looking away..he didn't want to look at her eyes .because it was new for him..he had never opened his heart out in front of anyone..but today he had finally began to pour out his emotions in form of words that to I front of a stranger who was no more a starmger for his heart and his soul..!!!

Nandini slightly cupped his cheeks and made him look at her..and as soon as his eyes may her..he was captivated .those eyes were potraying so many emotions that manik could not recognize many of them..but whatever they were they were so soothing. That he felt good..he felt contented looking at her eyes..

" manik..pyaar na..!! Pyaar can't be expressed in words..its beyond them..but haa main yeh baat dawe se kehe sakti hun ki true love do exists..tum is baat pein believe karo ya na karo but manik soulmates hote hain..aayiappa ne na sabke liye koi na koi bheja hain ish duniya main..u just need those eyes to find him/her..!! And jis din tum he apni soulmate miljayegi na u will feel the most luckiest person in world..all were pain will just dissappear .!!

"Nandini..but how will I find her..!! ?

" manik there is no any formulae to know that is HSE your soulmate or not nor their is any test or exams that can prove it to u..but your this heart na..(putting her index finger above his heart ) this heart will automatically say u that " yes .she is the one..)
And manik jab bhi tum he koi aisa mile who will stand by your side as a friend...who will stand in front of you to protect ypu ...and who will stand behind you to support you na .then samajhlena she is your soulmate..!!
Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
PART B


"Pata hain Nandini meri dadi na .meri dadi humesha mujhse yeh kehti thi ki sacche pyaar ki taaqat bahut badi hoti hain..who na bilkul tumahri hi tarah soulmates ki baatein karti thi..she always used to tease me saying that jab bhi mujhe apni soulmate milegi na I will forget all my pain...aaj dekhlo. Dadi tph mujhe apne pain ke sath akela chodker chali Gayi..aur my so called soulmate nahi kabhi mujhe mili aur shayad nahi kabhi milegi..!!! I have to live with this pain all my life..toh isse acha toh yehi hain na ke main mar jaun.!!

Nandu instantly kept her palm in his mouth to stop him from saying such words to which manik amusedly look at her...!!
When he heard her saying. " manik..!! Aisa kaunsa dard hain Jo tum he apni life se itna hatred hain..??

On not getting any reply from manik for few minutes she said " its OK manik. If you are not comfortable ...tum mujhse abhi toh mile ho. ( nandu's p.o.v but main toh tum he bahut ache se janti hun...tumhari soul ko feel karsakti hun)

"Pata hain Nandini..main aisa bikul nahi tha. Yeh haara hua insaan main nahi hun...situations have forced me to become like this. My childhood. Was like a fairy tale..living a luxurious life in a palace like house with your parents who fulfilled all your wishes ...all your desires. No scoldings ..!! No punishments from parents. !! No any limitations...Jo karna chaho woh karsako..mujhe laga ke yehi hota hain pyaar. I thought I have a perfect family..who loves me like anything.

I always that falling in love means something that my parents had..I always thought that they were so much in love. But gradually when I started growing up..when I started being mature.I came across with the fact that I was wrong...I was so damn wrong. !! Neither they loved me nor they loved each other. ...or rather to say my dad didn't love my mom...he one day suddenly left me and my mom And ran away..to live his life.

I was devasted that day. I just could not gather myself..I was just 16 then..I had no idea what's the reason that he suddenly left..I was very much closer to my dad than my mom..so at that time I blamed my mom for All what happened..but phir as the time flew I began getting used to it. I stated gelling up with my mom..I somehow accepted the situation..!!
I had one belief that my mom is not gonna leave me. Not at any cost.

(Sadly chuckling) but I was once again wrong. You know what she ran away with someone whom she said that she loved. Since I was not okay with them being together she just ran away leaving me all alone in this world..

And then I was broken..main purhi tarah tut chuka tha...but there was she who took care of me. ..my love. My childhood friend..vivah. she handled me..she helped me to move on in my life. I thought she is my shining star. But today all my hopes shattered.

I wanted her to marry me. But she rejected me saying that she just thought me as a good frinwd. Usne bhi mujhe chod diya. Ab tum hi batayo how can I live. And why should I live. ?? Kis reason se main jiyu ..bolo nandu. !!

Both manan were crying so badly..their tears knew no bounds. ..they were just looking at each other and crying. !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
PART C


Nandini cleaned his tears lovingly and she herself composing herself said.."manik you know what your mom was not wrong in her place..!!
(Manik looked at Ber confusingly) manik ssometimes you have to think from others point of view too..don't you think your mother also needed that love and care that your dad couldn't give her. Don't you think even she has the right to live her life.
And rahi baat tumhe chodkar Jane ki toh there might be some reason she did that. Kuch toh baat hog I manik..and then tumhari love story. Kya pata manik who tumhari soulmate ho hi Nnaa. Kya pata you two were not meant for each other..

Manik I know bolna bahut easy hain..lek in karna. Bahut muskil..I know it was difficult for you to go through all this but manik iska matlab yrh nahi hain ki you will finish your life. !! You have no rights to finish your life. Ayiappa ne tumhe yeh zindagi di hain toh woh hi finish karenge.

Zindagi na manik. Bas do pal ki hoti hain..agar tum iski kadar nahi karoge na toh ek din zindagi tumhari kadar nahi karega..!!
Jis din tum he iski kadar hogi bahut der hochuka hoga. !! So manik respect it..and try to live your life !! No matter what.. never give up. !!
****** ~~~~~~~~~~~

Hey guys.
Here goes the second part. I really don't know what crap I have written. .
I started to write something else and I ended up writing something really different.
But I just hope you all liked it.

And this us dedicated to my didu. Reet. !! Please aap jaldi se thik hojayo. Praying for your good health. Lots of love.

And guys please do like and comment both.
And I have sent pms to only those who have commented And Ste in my Buddy list .I hope I can expect good response from those who I have sent pms.
Lots of love to u all
Nitu.
Edited by mananneetu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Aww my doll...i love u a lot baby...u dedicate this update to me...its really a big big big thing for me...thanku so much doll...and ab to mujhe jaldi se thik hona hi padega...u and ur wishes are with me na to main ab jaldi se thik ho jaungi...

tu bata pehle mujhe tera fever kaisa hai ab ...thik hai na tu babby...

update was awesome justt like u babby...

i got tears in my eyes reading this...it was emotional...

aur upar se tu itna brilliantly likhti hai it touchea to the heart and soul

dikhta hai k tune kitne efforts daale...

vaise meri baby to bhut mature hai ...bhut badi badi aur true baate karti hai...

tujhe pata hai mujhe teri stories itni pasand kyun ati hai becauae i always got to learn someting from it...it relates to our real life...hamari life ki hi situations hoti hai jinhe tu words de deti hai beautifully penned. kar deti hai uhne...

thats why i love ur stories...

u just nailed it...

manik is a broken soul but i hope k nandini will mend his broken heart..

but har person k paas apne reasons hote hai kuch bhii karne ke...

loved it doll...

dont say it a crap baby...u know tune ajj kya likha hai...agar aj tu mere paas hoti na to tujhe mujhse maar padti ise crap bolne ke liye and fir big fat hug ye sab likhne ke liye...

ending was beautifull...

love u lots for this...

it was your masterpiece baby...

keep smiling and apna khayal rakhna ok doll...didu loves u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I loved manan a lottt


Nandu was fanbbb


Soo emotionalll


Ya it's not crap


It was superrr


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Posted: 9 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: reet0143

Aww my doll...i love u a lot baby...u dedicate this update to me...its really a big big big thing for me...thanku so much doll...and ab to mujhe jaldi se thik hona hi padega...u and ur wishes are with me na to main ab jaldi se thik ho jaungi...
Hi didu. I love you too...!! Aur ab aap kaisi ho?? I am desperately waiting for the day when u will be totally fine. Take care. Aur jaldi se thik hojayiye.

tu bata pehle mujhe tera fever kaisa hai ab ...thik hai na tu babby...
Ha didu..main bilkul thik Hun .don't worry at all..

update was awesome justt like u babby...

i got tears in my eyes reading this...it was emotional...

aur upar se tu itna brilliantly likhti hai it touchea to the heart and soul

dikhta hai k tune kitne efforts daale...

vaise meri baby to bhut mature hai ...bhut badi badi aur true baate karti hai...
Kabhi kabhi karleti hun mature wali baatein..😳😆

tujhe pata hai mujhe teri stories itni pasand kyun ati hai becauae i always got to learn someting from it...it relates to our real life...hamari life ki hi situations hoti hai jinhe tu words de deti hai beautifully penned. kar deti hai uhne...

thats why i love ur stories...

u just nailed it...
Aap na ek din mujhe rulakar hi
Rahoge..apne comments se..thank so so so much. It means a lot to me..love u bahut saara

manik is a broken soul but i hope k nandini will mend his broken heart..

but har person k paas apne reasons hote hai kuch bhii karne ke...

loved it doll...

dont say it a crap baby...u know tune ajj kya likha hai...agar aj tu mere paas hoti na to tujhe mujhse maar padti ise crap bolne ke liye and fir big fat hug ye sab likhne ke liye...
He he .nahi bolungi crap..but kya karu response hi itna bura milta hain ki..mujhe apne stories crap hi lagti hain..Lekin ab aapne kehe diya ke its good..tph I am very very happy..

ending was beautifull...

love u lots for this...

it was your masterpiece baby...

keep smiling and apna khayal rakhna ok doll...didu loves u...
Thank u so much. Aap bhi apna khayal rakhna. ...your siso loves u too. !! Muaah h. !!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: niti06

Loved it dear 😳 😳 😳

Thank u .😃😳😛

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