Manan SS The Beast Is My Prince [chapter 1 in page 3]

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Hola people!
I'm Teja Manaswini.
Guessed it write I'm a south Indian and a female.
New to forum
I'm here with a story hope you all will like *Fingers crossed*
I hope for a good response *meek voice*
Trust me on this I'm hell a nervous.
Happy reading


Warning
1. Bashers stay away!
2. DO NOT COPY my story
3. I'm NOT into criticism, sorry!

Finally, Happy reading!

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The Beast Is My Prince
Prologue

Some where in the dark room a man standing with blood shot eyes in which anger is clearly visible. The room is covered with extreme darkness and silence echoed in each and every corner of the room. Finally breaking the silence a man of same age as the man with the blood shot eyes spoke " what are we going to do?"

A man who is elder than both of them spoke " I think we have left with no other option."

The man with blood shot eyes closed after hearing the elder man but calmed himself down and said "Where there is a will there is a way." He said this while smirking evilly and turned to leave but the elder man's stern voice made him turn.

"Manik its dangerous. We can't risk your life." The elder man completed last sentence while sighing. ( The blood shot eyes guy is non other than Manik Malhothra)

The man of same age as Manik spoke "I think we should do this uncle." Uncle looked away knowing it is useless to argue with both of them. But the man who has same age as Manik spoke as something stuck his mind "But what about his family?"

Manik turned to the window and kept his right hand on the wall and replied hesitantly "I will go and tell them."

The other two man gasped and shouted in unison "What?!!!"

Manik folded his hands and leaned to the window while gazing at his favorite stars spoke "You both wanted to protect me right! Then this is not a bad option because who can guess I'm going to stay in village and even I need fresh air , just out these miseries in my life." He paused for a moment and continued "I will be fine in a day or two and will start planning for the our next move. I hope we can act our plan from the village. This is a nice idea and no one will even doubt us. So what say?"

The man who is same age as Manik grinned and told "Not at all bad Mr. Malhothra we will bring it on."

And both of them looked at the elder one but getting no response Manik spoke " Dad please agree,dad trust me this is a nice idea and we will make it work at any cost."

His dad sighed and told "Its all up to you beta. If you really want to you can do it. I trust you Manik" ( He is Manik's dad) Manik's dad let out small smile but was proud inside seeing his son work hard for the aim.
He patted Manik's back and left.

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SEE YOU SOON!



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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue continue soon waiting Manik in village interesting take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
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is d same story where manik meets cabir in train nd dn stays wid him in his house?? i dnt remember where did i read it bt i think i hv ..some parts .. wait .. wre u on wattpad??
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing prologue...
Sounds interesting...
Wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Originally posted by: urbabie

is d same story where manik meets cabir in train nd dn stays wid him in his house?? i dnt remember where did i read it bt i think i hv ..some parts .. wait .. wre u on wattpad??

Yup..I'm on wattpad...and plz tell me about how to post a picture
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey ... The name of the story is so catchy... N the prologue is super interesting... So plz conti soon
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N yaa plz pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hola people!

I'm back with the first chapter. Hell nervous. This chapter I would like to dedicate to softysakshi, birthday girl. Happy birthday dida. U have been my support through the bumpy road I had to cross. Thanks for being there. Love You Loads.

happy reading.

-unedited-

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Birds chirping, trees making sounds by swaying, animals making their morning sounds and sun rising made the dark night disappear to welcome the new morning, an other gift to people . There in India, Mumbai, a silent street yet elegant at its beauty, stands a big duplex house. The house has its own beauty, the walls of the house are covered with majestic red, flawless white and magnificent blue with pinch of vanilla. The house ultimately defines the ecstatic style of the owner. Moving on to interiors of the house the living room is well built with the brown puffy look wall to the right and dark brown, cream and white sofas with a television opposite to them, there are stairs behind the sofas in the living room which will lead to the upper part of the house and left from there to find the bedroom. The bedroom is covered with brown and white colors. There stood a blue denim jeans boy. He hurriedly slipped his white T-shirt which gently flowed down his perfectly toned body .He grabbed his brown jacket and put it on only to let it caress his hard biceps. He perfectly gelled his hair and put on his black shades to cover his chocolaty brown eyes, he immediately slipped his feet in sports shoes and clasped his bag in which he placed all his requirements and took his car keys only after locking the door. He left to railway station.


He reached railway station in no time. He went to his platform and boarded his train. He took out his ticket from his pocket and looked for seat number, as soon as he pointed his seat he went towards his seat but someone dashed him and his bag fell down. He didn't care to see who dashed him and bent down to take the bag but before he could reach the man who dashed him picked it up and gave him. He took the bag and looked up to mumble a thanks.

The man who dashed him instantly said "hey I'm sorry it's my fault."

He while waking towards his seat replied "its okay."

He quietly went and sat on the seat which is near window. The man who dashed him sat opposite to him and looked up "By the way hey! I'm Cabir Dhawan"

He smiled "hey! I'm Manik Malhotra"

Cabir smiled back "Nice to meet you bro. Where are you going?"

Manik took a moment and replied "I'm going to Brindhavan. What about you?"

Cabir smile grew wider at the mention of 'Brindhavan' and told "what a coincidence! I'm going there too. I have my family there and who are you going to met there??"

Manik smile vanished at Cabir's question and stammeringly said "ahh...I...just a visit." He said in one go. While Cabir raised his eyebrow in suspicion and seeing his suspicion look Manik instantly covered it up "I mean I just wanna explore India because I just love exploring"

Cabir smiled at him "That's nice to know. I mean I'm surprised...never mind ."

They talked for a while and cracked jokes laughed at them and in minimum time they became good friends as if they are friends from ages.
At the middle of the conversation Cabir spoke as something stuck his mind "by the way where are you living? I mean I'm sure you won't find any Hotel there."

Manik rolled his eyes upwards as if thinking and replied a moment later "I will get a house I guess"

Cabir thinking
Hmm...bade papa ko bhi ek payed guest chahiya ..I don't know for what reasons. So I think I can ask Manik about this I mean he needs a place to live and bade papa needs payed guest. Awesome I will ask him.
End

"Manik why don't stay at my house?"

Manik thought for a moment or two and replied hesitantly "no, thanks I can manage" and Manik thought 'How can I stay without paying money'

Cabir smiled as he caught what Manik's thought "you can stay as a payed guest and waise bi main tumhe paise lene ke bagair jane nahi donga." He said the last line to cheer him up

While Manik chuckled and thought for a moment and told "fine if you say so and waise bi tum chodna wala main se lagathe nahi ho." Both laughed out loud and continued their conversation.

It was around 10:00 at night both ended their conversation and lied down on their seats. Cabir took the upper bed and Manik in lower bed.
After tossing a few times both drifted into a deep slumber.

It is 4:00 in the morning both woke due to alarm as they should get down at 4:30. Both again started chatting, soon train stopped in railway station of Bhrindhavan. They got down and took an auto to Cabir's house. It hardly took 15min to reach.

Once they got down Manik jaw dropped seeing the view in front of him. There is a big mansion covered with white and the fountain just added to its beauty. The nature is cherry on top. Cabir patted his back which bought Manik out of his trance but one thing confused him "Cabir as much as I know you are dhawan right then why it is written Murthy Mansion?" (Imagine it is written on the Mansion in the picture)

Cabir sighed but again took a long breath and told "I live with my dad's friend as my parents passed away and before you ask me how is that possible let me tell you, my grandfather Prakash dhawan and Venkatesh murthy are best friends so they married each other sister means my grandpa married Venkatesh dadaji's sister and Venkatesh dadaji married my grandpa's sister so basically we are relatives and after my parents death my relatives refused to adopt me..you know I was just 5 yrs old that time I don't know what to do then Venkatesh dadaji adopted me and treated me like his own grandson not only him everyone in the house treated me as their own and seriously I'm blessed to have them. And you know what my dad's best friend is one of the son of Venkatesh dadaji, actually my parents and dadaji's second son and wife died together in a car accident. Anyways, I live here." He gave a slight pause and then continued "so basically I'm dadaji's best friend's wife's daughter's brother's sister's son." He expected Manik to get emotional and Cabir was ready to cheer him up and so looked at Manik. When he looked at Manik he was already staring at him. Cabir opened his mouth to say something but is cut of by Manik

"Woh..." He thought of consoling him but later thought of cheering him up but on the other side Cabir waited Manik to say some emotional words to console him.

"Woh kya hai Manik batha na..." Asked Cabir eagerly waiting for his response but what Manik said next shocked him

Manik while yawning " yaar woh bahut lamba tha and you know mujhe neend bhi aa raha hai" he said while still yawning. Next moment Cabir tried to jump on him but Manik escaped and ran towards the Mansion.

"Abbhe tere liya maine ithana emotional story sunaya tho tujhe neend aa raha hain...rok batata hoon." Cabir huffed and ran behind him.

Both reached Murthy Mansion by fighting with each other. Cabir rang the doorbell and a maid opened the door as soon as she saw them she instantly welcomed them.

They both walked inside and Manik was totally impressed by the interiors and loved the Mansion. Cabir showed Manik his room and once again Manik was impressed by the infrastructure of the room. Cabir left after telling Manik to rest as it was a long journey.

Manik tried sleeping but was unable to sleep so he went into balcony and let the cool morning breeze touch his warm body. After standing there for good 5min he thought of going for a walk.

He left the Mansion and slowly disappeared in the big thick tall trees. He walked for 10min and was about go back but he heard a melodious voice which grabbed his attention.

Ahhh ahhh

He forgot everything for a moment and only concentrated on the voice, he slowly followed the voice.

Ahhh ahh

He tried to reach near the voice as soon as possible.

Main waari jawan

He heard her sing and stops at the place where he is and turns back.

Main waari jawan
Sathoon ki hoya ve khasoor re

He sees her in ghagra choli but her face is covered by a tree. He only sees her doe eyes which he wants to drown. He tries going near her.

Main waari jawan
Main waari jawan
Dil tho hoya majboor

He goes near her and at once she turns but she covers her face with with her hands filled with bangles, only her pouty lips can be seen. Manik's hormones raged at light speed and only wanted to taste the flavour of those luscious lips.

Main waari jawan
Main waari jawan

she slightly lifted her ghagra such as only her feet are visible and she is running from here to there while her anklets are making ghan ghan sound which touched Manik's ears and instantly he felt a sharp attraction towards her

She opened her mouth to sing but she heard her sister calling "Nandu kaha chali gayi itni subhah...ab chalo jaldi subka utane ka time ho gaya hain."

Nandini smiled and replied "kuli hawa main njoy karna kitna acha lagtha haina Navya di" (its over very own Navya murthy Nandu's sister.)

Navya smiled and Nandini turned to go with her sister. While Nandini turned Manik watched her silky hair which made him want to caress those silky hair and tuck the tresses behind her ear but he couldn't do it so made a cute sad pout. But one thing made him smile is that the picture of her as he clicked them when she is doing cute antics but none of the picture have her full face. He decided to go behind her but she vanished, when he was returning he hit something and looked down there is a medium stone which is half dug in ground half above ground and after seeing that he was about to go but something caught his attention when he looked in the direction he saw anklet with some beads on it and some beads which make sounds and he instantly recognized the anklet to be hers. He slowly picked it up and kept it in his pocket and returned to Mansion all the way smiling like a fool.

On the other hand while Nandini turned to go with her sister she again turned back as though there is someone and was watching her but Navya's gentle Pat on her shoulders brought her back from the trance and she walked out with her sister.

While walking Nandini thinking 'why did I feel like that as if someone is gazing at me, someone admiring me, someone longing for me and wanted to see me...Nandini tu kuch zyada nahi soch rahi! Now just shut these thoughts and go' ( while Nandini turned Manik turned back leaned to the tree thinking about so Nandini couldn't see him as the tree trunk is big enough to cover him)

Both the sisters went to Nandini's room after getting inside Nandini abruptly stopped and looked at Navya from top to bottom. Navya is wearing a green ghagra choli and she freshened up soo early and that stuck Nandini and she with a naughty smirk said "di appko nahi lagta ke app ki dress kuch..." She left the sentence in middle as she know what's going to happen.

After listening to Nandini Navya started panicking "Nandu kya hua yeh dress acha nahi hain kya" with that she started adjusting her dress.

By now Nandini couldn't supress her laugh and burst out laughing like a maniac but controlled herself as she has something important to do "di maine isa kab kaha ki app buri lag rahi ho and waise bi yeh tayari app kiss ke liya kiya ho woh rajkumar nahi aa raha hain." As soon she completed she saw Navya have some frowns and was sad but she immediately said

"Aise kaise nahi athe 2 mahine ho gaye aur ab bi nahi anna chatha hain" she said with a angry pout.

How would Nandini let this chance go so she instantly said "di app itna desperate hain use milna ke liya"

And now Navya was caught and she turned crimson red while blushing but she tried to cover it and said "Nandu...aisa nahi hain"

But Nandini took two steps back and said "di cabir bhai ayaa hain" and started running by now Navya was furious at her teasing but also blushed and started running behind her. They were running everywhere in the Murthy Mansion. Their laughs echoed in the Mansion but Nandini went upstairs and started searching for place to hide as she know if she is caught she has to face her angry di. Soon she saw a room on her right and went inside as she has no other option. As soon as she went inside while running she collided with something hard and fell on the bed. She closed her eyes in fear but she felt two strong arms secured around her she slowly opened her eyes...

To be continued...

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Edited by Tejamanaswini - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you all of u
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update
loved cabir
cabir & manik became friends
manik will now stay at murthy house
now nandu bumped into manik
cont soon
pm me plz
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Originally posted by: Tejamanaswini


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