MaNan SS: Love Illuminates Hatred [Chapter2/pg22] 28 April

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piyu008

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Its interesting. .n different

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Hey Garima..Chaitra here sure dear and we both will surely not disappoint you! :)

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Hiee Chaitra...This is Garima...I will wait for the mystry to unfold...

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Chitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Fabulous story do update it soon would love to read it thanks for this interesting story n thanks for pm👍🏼

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Dua_Chaitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 1A

A girl was sleeping on her king size bed when the sun rays started to disturb her... She was trying to sleep, she wanted to sleep, seems like she needed it... Not being able to sleep whole night she was trying to complete the needed amount of her sleep but it's not written in her fate... Until she will not complete the aim of her life, until she will not bring that person down.. Till that time she cannot get the sleep she wanted... The last haunts which don't let her sleep at night... Ideas of revenge are all over her mind, pain of losing someone close don't tel her concentrate on anything... The day she will take her revenge only that day she will be able to sleep peacefully... But right now to disturb her sleep completely her phone started to ring...

"Hello" she said picking it up from the side table still her face dug in the pillow

"Kahan ho? We are waiting for you in the college canteen..." On the other side a boy asked her and she sat on bed with a jerk...

"College... SHIT!!!" She metered

"I'm coming.. I'll be there in 20" Answering him she cut the call and rushed to get ready

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In college a gang of three people were busy disturbing others... The one who takes something from the canteen was not able to sit on the nearest table with his food save... Ink on rice or other thing which left the food uneatable, these all things were done by the members of Fab 4.. No one dare to challenge them or stand against them but today a person raised his voice

"Who do you think you are ??" He asked Cabir who was as usual in his naughty mood

"Cabir..." Cabir answered proudly

"And what the hell you are doing??" He again asked being irritated

"My work.. Don't you like it?" Cabir said in his usual prankster tone which irritated the person to the core

"How dare you?" He asked holding Cabir's collar in anger but Cabir remained calmed on his act and seems like he enjoyed

"Sahid ko ghussa a raha hai??" Druv said in a childish tone and Shahid looked at him.. He left Cabir's collar and gave angry glare to Druv but these threats and glares don't affect fab 4... They are used to it and they enjoy the efforts of these people to stand in front of them but no one can stand in front of Fab 4 and tolerate their tortures

"You know Shahid, tumhara pata nai but we are enjoying..." Aliya smirked

"You all..." Shahid was about to say but was interrupted by a voice

"Don't underestimate Fab 4" The girl entered in Canteen with an attitude look on her face...She walked towards the three and Cabir with the same attitude and standing with them she asked

Nandini's dress picture at last

"College main new ho?" she asked Shahid as he was trying to stand against

"Don't you know Nobody... Nobody messes with Fab4" Nandini said and the way she was looking at him made shahid horrified... he was frightened just with her glare and what she was going to do next will not make him able to stand properly...

"What's so special in it?" Even scared of them shahid tried to be confident

"I guess you missed it..." and here comes Nandini's famous punch... Everyone in the canteen was left speachless after Nandini's punch.. Shahid eyes widened and blood started to oze out from his lips...

"Let's teach him a lesson.." Nandini said and Fab 4 circled around him... there was no way left to run.. Now he was in a big trouble... Time to pay for what he did...

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Edited by Dua_Chaitra - 9 years ago

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Dua_Chaitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 1B

On the other side a tall handsome guy with well built masculine structure was busy instructing his sister and Bestfriends and everyone were busy making faces with his continuous lectures..

Picture of Manik at last

''Arey bhai rukh jaa hum koyi olympics main nahi jaarahe hain..it's space yaar aur hum bacche nahi hain so relax we will manage" said Aryamann unable to bear the torture..

"Haan Manik Aryamann teekh bol raha hain tum itna hyper kyu ho rahe ho haan mujhe pata hain space main padna hum sab ka dream hain and we achieved it naa..toh itna saara instructions kyu yaar chill.." said Navya supporting Aryamann..

''Guys main hyper nahi ho raha hu it's just that it's a famous institution and we got qualified in that aur ham sab saath main nahi honge right we choose different fields to study and most of the time hum saath main nahi honge..so it's just that we need to support each other in this..bachpan se leke aaj tak ham panch ne har kaam saath main kiya..so lets continue here too and haan no involvement in unnecessary thing..." said Manik in a calm tone explaining his friends..and as expected the frowns on there faces turned into smile and Mukti jumped on Manik hugging him tight..

"Bhain you are the best.." saying this she kissed him on the cheek and continued

"par iska matlab yeh nahi hain ki aap ham sab ka care karthe karthe old ho jaaye..see I am grown up too and we can take care of ourselves..so please stop acting like father of the group my dear Brother" everyone chuckled to her comment..and Mukti broke the hug..

"Manik chill bro hum sab hain na we will manage together " said Abhimanyu patting Manik's shoulder..'

"and GUYS ITS TIME FOR GROUP HUG'' Navya and Aryamann shouted together and everyone hugged each other with a smile on there faces..

Manik's pov:

As it's the first day of the college..we 5 entered into the space academy to fulfil our dreams..Mukti and Mom they are my only family I was in this thought but then I met these 3 Aryamann,Navya and Abhimanyu..they became my family too..My only family aur Space is not only our dream but our destination..I know we all will surely succeed here..and as per my sister ladli Mukti's order we went to explore the college..we first went to the library then we proceeded towards canteen but it's no less than a ruckus..

I can see all other students standing in corners scared and there were four people who were having there back towards me..wait a sec then my eyes fell on the canteen walls..there was food spread here and there..and I can see a boy sitting on his knees hanging his head below..and then 3 of them turned towards us with a evil smile on there faces and I can see a guy with a funky vest having something in a bowl in his hands..and he was about to bend down to reach the height of a guy..but then I heard

''Biraaa wait yeh bhi add karlo, yeh bowl main " the forth member said and with that the 4th member of them turned towards us.. she was beautiful.. but what she gave that guy made all of our eyes pop out what is this.. it seems like some acid..

''Guys it is sulphuric acid " said Abhimanyu and we narrowed our eyes at him as we are not medical students..

"Oops sorry guys it is too dangerous..it can burn the skin if it gets in contact with the skin.." he explained We all were beyond shocked but what are these people doing with the acid..

''Nandu you be the best bro'' said the guy and added the acid in the bowl while that girl was having a evil smirk on her face..

''Yeh lo bhai drink this" said the guy Bira or something..

"Oww poor baby have it naa you will surely love aur tumhara luck hain infact we all made this delicious thing just for you have it naa.." said another girly girl from these 4..

"Haan baba drink it you will never forget this in your life.." said the other guy with a cap..

"Arey guys bechara dar raha hain he will surely drink it haina shahid?" Said that Bira guy..

"No no Cabir ussey request kyun kar rahe ho if he will not drink it this entire thing will directly land upon his body and this will teach him a lesson to not mess with us,he should have thought before messing with us..issey pata hona chahiye ki how it should be when he messes with us the Fab4... sab log darna chahiye hamse baath tak karne keliye" the girl who gave the acid spoke with anger in her voice...

How can one be so insensitive that too a girl..mujhe pata nahi hain kya kiya uss ladka ne par no one has right to torture others in such a manner... I can see Navya Mukti Aryamann and Abhi gossiping among themselves as they all being calm till now is impossible... that girl jo bhi hain she has no right to play with other lives..aur woh baki log usse supoort kar rahe hain?She should be ashamed of doing such stupid things... bullying others what happiness does she get from that and disgusting people on the first day of the college.. ragging is banned par yeh log why everyone are scared of them..and whoever that girl is I literally hate her mentality and behaviour they 4 look no less than psychos aur mainly woh ladki..God no way I should warn these 4 about that Fab4 or whatever!

Manik's POV ended

Edited by Dua_Chaitra - 9 years ago

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Dua_Chaitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Chapter 1C

"I am sorry, I will never do like this please let me go.."pleaded a horrified Shahid...

"tch tch you should have told this before you laid hand on my bhai..himmat kaisi huyi tumhari Cabir ke collar pakadne ke you loser.." said Nandini with full anger in her voice..

"Please mujhe nahi patha tha yeh tumhara bhai hain.." said Shahid..

"if not you would lift your hand on Dhruv or Alya? Bolo! Guys dekho mujhe iske intentions teekh nahi lag raha hain " Said Nandini innocently in a sarcastic tone!

"Baby yeh shahid he want to hit me it seems.." said Alya to Dhruv!!

''Ale ale meli baby ko yeh baby marega kya!?" said Dhruv and all the fab4 members broke into huge laughter mocking the poor soul!!

''Ab galthi hogayi naa isse toh sajah milni chahiye" said Cabir!!

"Please guys I have a future don't spoil it I will do anything please I can't drink this it contains acid in it! Please.." Shahid again pleaded for his life from these monsters... he was really scared.. now it the end of his tolerance.. he was sweating badly.. if they will not stop he would faint there only

''Accha kuch bhi karega?" Cabir asked him surprisingly.. pressuring the word kuch bhi as it can be ANY THING... really really dangerous for him

"Nandu baby what should we do now? "asked Cabir to Nandini where an evil smile was continously playing on their lips..

''Ramesh'' Nandini called the name and the canteen owner came running to her..

''jee madam boliye..'' go and get green chillies'' said Nandini..and the owner was still staring her..

"samajh main nahi aayi I want them right now!" Shouted a furious Nandini and the owner went and came running with a bowl of Green chillies... Even he was scared of this side on Nandini Murthy

''Babes what's going on your mind!" asked Alya with amused smile on her face to Nandini..

''My sassy queen ab yeh chomu green chillies ko red chilli powder main ke saath dip karke khaayega!" Said Nandini in a cool manner! And the entire people in canteen were shocked to the core and Manik and gang were beyond shocked and everyones mouth opened except Manik's who was staring them with shock and disgust!!

''Nandu bhai what an amazing combination!" Said Dhruv appreciating and supporting Nandini's idea And Cabir continued side hugging Nandini..

"behen hain kiski!!" He said baing proud of Nandini.. praising his name

''Guys I am begging you please,just let it go!!'' Shahid keep on pleading... May be this time they wil show mercy on him

"Let it go,let it go can't hold it back anymore..." sang Cabir loudly to which Alya giggled..''

"haan hogaya let it go..eat naa time waste mat karo hamari we have lots of work you know!" said Cabir! And shahid started eating them with most difficulty and tears were continously flowing from his eyes and he was coughing loudly everyone was feeling pity for him including Manik and gang! He want to stop this entire thing but he don't want to get ineracted with unnecessary things he saw Mukti,Navya,aryamann and abhimanyu talking among themselves to go and stop this but he showed his hand to them and to which they made faces..

''and here goes the count 1,2,3" said Nandini and shahid fell on the floor unconscious after completing chillies and the fab4 smirked evilly and then Nandini took money from her purse and threw it on the floor on him and shouted "Ramesh" again and this time he came even more fast..

"isse sick room main admit karo..lets go guys.." saying this the four with attitude in there walk and style started walking out and all others gave way for them and they passed side of Manik and gang who was literally shocked with the entire thing happened in the canteen! And Mukti,Navya,aryamann and Abhi face palmed themselves when they saw Manik turning towards themselves to award them with speech which might get lengthier this time!

"Manik plz.. No lecture this time" Mukti spoke before Manik could start his lecture... His friends very well knew him

"Main lecture nai dene laga main just yehi keh raha tha k we don't need to get involve in these stupid acts..." He started and everyone made faces

"Humain pata hai sab Manik... Now let's leave and we should move to our classes.. It's first day..." Abhimanyu said... Everyone agreed to avoid Manik's lecture as well he had a point to Manik also agreed... Nodded everybody moved to their classes

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Dua_Chaitra

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Chapter 1D

Manik was gonna enter the door when he saw Nandini was walking towards the class only... she was taking back steps towards the class as she was facing Cabir and was engrossed in talking to him.. she didn't bothered what is behind her or not.. for a moment Manik kept looking at her but then shoving away his thoughts he turned his face from Nandini to class.. he was about to step when BANG!!!! Nandini bang with him as she was walking carelessly... Manik held her protectively as she was about to fall.. her hair touching Manik's face mesmerised him... everything started in slow motion for both of them...

Manik looked at Nandini's face which looked innocent due to the fear of falling.. she closed her eyes... but then finding herself safe in some one's arms she opened her eyes to look at the handsome face,he could see some unknown pain in her eyes... TRING TRING TRING... the bell rang as class started and both came out of their trance.. but before Nandini could stand Manik left her in hurry and she actually fell THUD... Realising the situation Manik made and 'O' face that what he did... Cabir helped her stand and she burst out on Manik

"Dekh k nai chal sakte?? Bloody blind... And what u did?? How dare u hold me... And pagal ho kia? Aese chor dia? Agr fracture ho jata ho? Seriously a big idiot... Brainless" Nandini said continously giving him angry glares.. But he was not horrified by her scolds infact he was enjoying... She was looking cute to him... Not remembering what just happened in the canteen he was lost in the present

"Oh hello Mr..." Cabir's voice brought him out of his thoughts

"Are u insane... Blind.. U know what u did.." Again Nandini tried to show her anger but this awakes the angry Manik

"Seriously.. You are talking to me... Have u seen your self... It was your mistake.. Dekh k tum nai chal rahi thi.. So keep this Anger with u only... I'm not interested in this crap.." Manik replied to her which left her shocked... She was no where right to just burst on Manik even when she herself was on fault

"You know whom you are talking to?" Nandini asked and expected him to be afraid of her after knowing her identity

"Yeah! I saw u in canteen... Such disgusting people you are.. And specially you both.. I am not one of them who gets scared of you people and your stupid pranks" Manik said showing his thoughts and it left both shocked... Instead of being afraid of them he was telling how bad they are.. Saying this when he was about to enter the class Nandini held Manik's arm, made him turn around

"Excuse me Mr..." She said furiously

"Manik... Manik Malhotra.." Manik completed her sentence telling her his name...

"Excuse me Mr. Manik Malhotra... I will show you the real me, and trust me.. You will regret this day... It's a promise Nandini Murthy's promise" Nandini warned him showing him her finger.. She promised to make him regret showing this attitude towards Nandini.. And that's how Manik came to know her name

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Edited by Dua_Chaitra - 9 years ago

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Dua Arafat

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Posted: 9 years ago

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archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Awesome update. Manan's intro was fabulous.wow fab4.loving nandini and cabir's bond. Love to read more.poor shahid got stuck with fab4.wow nandini seems to be a dangerous person.Manan's first meet was phenomenal. Manan's convo was amazing and interesting.Manan's attire was superb. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.super excited to read further.Loving this story.

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mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Amazing amazing amazing... Loved the update... Just too good to be cho one. . nandu ka minster attitude... Manik ka I don't get scared wala feel... Enjoying every bit of it

Loved the update so so so much

Thanxx for this fabulous update

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