MaNan-The revenge love story(part 50 pg-139)epilogue-140,04/07 - Page 83

awesome update. Manik n manan ki conversation is so nice. Manik manan ko very nicely handle. Manan sooo innocent . cabir tho cabir hai. waiting for next update.

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Part-50

Manik spent the entire day with Nandini,just like they used to spend before Manan's arrival.He helped her in kitchen,had lunch by feeding each other,cute nok-jhok and yeah Manik's teasing session and lots of love making at the end of day..

Next day,

Ma-Yaar mein Mannu ko le kar aaunga...mera mann nahi lag raha hai uske bina..

C-Uski koi jaroorat nahi hai Sir...yeh raha aap ka beta...

Cabir entered with Navya,Cavya and Manan.

Ma-Champ... He said excitingly while Manan jumped on his dad very happily.

Nan-Navya..kuch pareshaan toh nahi kiya hai na..??

Nav-Arey Nahi Nandu...he is missing Manik..iss liye le kar aaye hai..warna bilkul theek hai wo...

They sat and the father-son duo hugged,kissed,played as if they were meeting after ages.

Muk-Abhi...tum meri baath kabhi nahi sunoge na...

Mukthi shouted on top of her voice while entering to Manik's place.

Abhi-Acha...tum kya sunn rahi ho..??shaadi se le kar ab tak sab kuch tumhari marzi thi...aur ab bhii??

C-Guys...chup ho jaoo...Mukthi..calm down...what happened..??

Nandini tried to manofy Mukthi and just then Dhruv and Aliya too entered.

Muk-Dhekho Manik...I selected a name for my baby..and Abhi usko maan hi nahi raha hai...

Abhi-Oh hello excuse me...wo mera bhi bacha hai..mujhe bhi haq hai...

Nan-Mukthi...Abhi..plz relax...Acha Mukthi..what have u chosen...??

Muk-yeh Manan wali logic toh apply nahi hoga na hamare naam se...so I chose beta hua toh Manish,beti hui toh Avni...kaisa hai..??

Nan-Acha hai..Abhi..tumne kya socha..??

Abhi-Beta hua toh Advaith,beti hui toh Mansi..yeh kaisa hai..??

Nan-Yeh bhi theek hai...ab kya kare..??

She thought for a moment while everyone including Manik was eagerly waiting how she will solve this.

Nan-Acha mere pass ek solution hai...sunoge..??

Mukthi and Abhi nodded.

Nan-Toh phir...Manish aur Advaith jod kar Adarsh,Avni aur Mansi jod kar Manvi...kaisa hai...???

Everyone fell silent listening this.

Nan-Kya hua guys..??acha nahi hai...?? She asked slowly and then everyone clapped with joy while Mukthi hugged her tightly.

Muk- u always have the right solution for us...Thank u...

Nan-Pleasure is all mine Madam...Waise Abhi..tumhe koi problem nahi hai na..??

Abhi-Konsi problem Nandini..tumne toh hamara problem solve kar diya...

C-Waah...Nandini...maan na padega...but I think the main problem starts now..

He looked at Dhruliya and said "Iss ko toh twins hone wale hai...ab agar inn dhonon fight karna shuru kiya toh..??"

A-Cabir...tension math lo...we have already decided the names...

D-Ha Cabir..u don't worry..

Ma-Acha...kya decide kiya tum dhonon ne...humhe bhi toh batao...

A-Ladke hue toh Sathwik aur Saardhak

D-Aur ladkiya hui toh Saadhna aur Sanjna

Everyone clapped seeing them.

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One month later,

Manik opened his eyes when Nandini is cuddling into him more and more.

Nan-Happy Valentines Day Manik...

He smiled and said "Happy Valentines Day Jaan.."

They both sat on bed and Manik asked "U wished first na...So where is my gift..??"

Nandini held his hands and placed it on her stomach and said "Yaha hai.."

Manik was overwhelmed with happiness and said "Oh My God...!! Thank u jaan..u always know how to surprise me..."He said and hugged her tightly.

Ma-Confirmed hai..??

Nan-Karna padega...

Ma-Toh hospital chale..??

She nodded slightly with happiness.

In the evening,they shared the good news to everyone and Manik came up with another story to make Manan understand what pregnancy means.

The little soul finally understood that his little sister is inside his mumma and was very happy that his father fulfilled his wish.

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One month later,

Aliya delivered twins,one baby boy and one baby girl.This is one unexpected thing happened.

As they have already decided the names,they selected the rhyming names for them :Saadhna and Saardhak.

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Five months later,

It's sixth month for Nandini and Manik made sure that she won't run after Manan.He made Manan understand about the situation of his mother.

One fine day,

Ma-Par...itni jaldi kyun..??

C-Manik..pagal hai kya thu...??chaar saal ka ho chuka hai tera beta...ab nahi toh kab jayega..??

Cabir brought the topic of sending Manan to school.Manik who was very much attached to his son,couldn't even imagine spending a day without him.

Ma-Par..

Nan-Manik..bas bahut ho gaya...Cheenu...will u go to school beta..??

Manan nodded his head with happiness,much to Manik's surprise.

Manan-Popa..mein shool jaunga unifolm pehenke...

He said so cutely that Manik couldn't back out.

Mukthi delivered a baby boy and they named him Adarsh as decided.

3 months later,

Manik got habituated to Manan's school schedule.He used to make him ready,drop and pick him from school and helped him with his homework.Manik literally enjoyed this phase of being a father too.

And as per the wish of that little soul,it's baby girl for them in the second attempt.

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"Aa gayi meri doll..." Manik uttered these words with so much of happiness seeing the cute Barbie doll in his hands.

Manan's happiness has no bounds seeing his sister.

Unlike first time,Nyonika and Raj too took part in their happiness.

At Naming ceremony,

This time too Manik has hidden the name he has chosen for his doll.

He followed all the rituals and then announced the name holding his delicate doll in his hands.

"MAINA...MAINA MANIK MALHOTRA..." He said seeing her.

C-Manik baba...explain the name...

Ma-Well Cabir...Maina means intelligence and origin of god...So according to Manan,Maina is originated from god...and moreover,Ma se Manik aur Na se Nandini...

D-What about "I" in between buddy..??

Ma-Wo...She brought me and Nandini closer again right...? So she will proudly say that "I brought my mumma papa together again.. That I' reperesents HER..."

Nav-Kamaal ka soch hai bhai jaan...

Nan-Sach mein...what a name...!!! Simply beautiful...like my daughter...

She said and was about to take her from Manik and then she started crying indicating she doesn't wanna leave her dad.

Nan-Ab yeh kya..socha ki beti toh apne mumma ke side par hogi...!!!

C-haha...Nandini...lo ab dho se theen ho gaye shaithan...sambhal lena...

D-Manik...Don't u think it's a perfect time for jamming...??

Muk-Ha yaar.. hamari family pictures complete ho gayi yaar...jamming toh banthi hai...

Nan-Haa Manik..bahut dhin ho gaye..plz..ek song..

Ma-Arey tumhare liye ek song kya..hamara jaan bhi haazil hai...

C-Cheesy man...come let's start...

They took their instruments while Mukthi and Aliya handed over their babies to Navya and Nandini.They sat to enjoy.

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Manik started

Yar milte hai pyar milte hai
Hamko yarro nasib se
Ek duje ki adate bante dil ko chute karib se
Har hassi be aansu pe de de jo pehra
Ek din kyu chale hain jate chod ke tanha
Yeh dosti... milti nasib se
Yeh dosti...milti nasib se
Yeh dosti... milti nasib se
Yeh dosti... najuk hain narm hain
Yeh dosti... yaaro ka karm hain

They had a group hug and Manan came running to his dad.Manik lifted him in his arms.

Manan-Popa..mujhe bhi play karna hai...

Ma-aww...tumhe bhi play karni hai..but yeh sab toh bade bade hai na...so let's do one thing...

He brought a chatter and gave it to Manan.

Ma-Yeh lo beta...we'll sing now..and u play this accordingly...come I'll show u...

He signaled Cabir to sing a song to which he can play the chatter.

Cabir started

Roothe khaabon ko mana lenge
Kati patango ko thaamenge
Haa haa hai jazba
Ho ho hai jazba
Suljha lenge uljhe rishton ka manjha
Hmm ka manjha, hmm ka manjha...

Manik knelt on his knees to match Manan's height and held Manan's hand to play that chatter according to the rhythm.

Soyi taqdeere jaga denge
Kal ko ambar jhuka denge
Haa haa, hai jazba
Ho ho, hai jazba
Suljha lenge uljhe rishton ka manjha
Hmm manjha...

Manan nodded his head that he will play by his own.So Manik stood to continue the song.

Ho ho barfeeli, aankhon mein
Pighla sa dekhenge hum kal ka chehra
Ho ho pathreele, seene mein
Ubla sa dekhenge hum lawa gehra
Agan lagi, Lagan lagi
Toote na, toote na jazba ye toote na
Magan lagi, Lagan lagi
Kal hoga kya keh do
Kis ko hai parwah
Parwah... parwah...

Roothe khaabon ko mana lenge
Kati patango ko thaamenge
Haa haa hai jazba
Ho ho hai jazba
Suljha lenge uljhe rishton ka manjha
Hmm manja, hmm manja...

C-Sach mein...rishthey na always makes us win...

Manik started singing alone looking at Nandini.

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, haan khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main

To his surprise,Nandini started singing holding Maina in her arms.

Sindoori rang suhagan saccha
Saccha re sarmaya jo paaya hai woh
Tu dil mein maahi aaya hai
Maine maahi paaya hai
Nazar laaye naa, koi nazar laaye naa

Dil ne shagun manaaya hai
Ishq parauhna aaya hai
Nazar laaye na, koi nazar laaye na
Nazar laaye jo tumko jal jaaye woh
Chaand le jug begana ho
Nazar laaye na..
Nazar laaye na..

Manik took Maina in his arms and sang again seeing Nandini.

Maine haara, main tera saara main
Meetha meetha tu, khaara khaara main
Tera saara main, saara main

Muk-Wow...Nandini...u r amazing...continue...plz...

A-Ha Nandu...one more song for us...plz...

Nandini looked at Manik and started

Zehnaseeb, Zehanaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Mere kareeb, mere habeeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

Tere sang beete har lamhe pe humko naaz hai
Tere sang jo na beete uspe aitraaz hai
Iss kadar hum dono ka milna ek raaz hai

Manik held her hands and started

Huaa ameer dil ghareeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb
Zehnaseeb, Zehnaseeb
Tujhe chaahun betahasha zehnaseeb

He came to halt and looked at Nandini.

D-Buddy...one more for Nandini...

Manik smiled and started while remaining supported them with music background.

Tu Hi Meri Hai Sari Zameen
Chahe Kahin Se Chalun
Tujh Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukun
Tere Siva Maun Jaun Kahan
Koi Bhi Raah Chunu
Tujh Pe Hi Aa Ke Rukun

Tum Mile To Lamhein Tham Gaye
Tum Mile To Sare Gum Gaye
Tum Mile To Muskurana Aa Gaya

Tum Mile To Jadoo Chaa Gaya
Tum Mile To Jeena Aa Gaya
Tum Mile To Mene Paya Hai Khuda

Immediately Nandini took the lead and sang

Uljhi si baatein dil
Mujhse bhi baantein
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya
Khud hi samajh ke mujhe samjha de
To mehar.. mehar.. meherbaniya

Manik took the next step

Ho meherbani jo dil de zubaani
Keh de wo jo na kabhi kaha hai

Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu
Aise Tera Main.. Jaise Mera Tu..

They rested their heads on each other.Everyone clapped for them including junior rockstar while the little soul in Manik's arms threw her cute little smiles seeing them.

Nandini took Maina and was about to leave and then Manik started

kaise tujhse mila tha
main kuch jhagdo mein tujhse judaaa tha..main..
phir nazre teri meri nazro se mili..
pyaar tera meri har khushi bani...
aur tu meri zindagi bani..

and then switched to

Janam janam janam sath chalna yunhi
Kasam tumhe kasam aake milna yahi
Ek jaan hai bhale do badan ho juda
Meri hoke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Meri subah ho tumhi
Aur tumhi sham ho
Tum dard ho tum hi aaram ho
Meri duaon se aati hai bas yeh sada
Meri ho ke hamesha hi rehna
Kabhi na kehna alvida

Nandini held Manik's hand and sang (The song from PK movie)

Tumsa mile jo koi rehguzar
Duniya se kaun darey
Chaar kadam kya saari umar
Chal dungi saath tere

Bin kuch kahe, bin kuch sune
Haathon mein haath liye
Char kadam bas char kadam
Chal do na saath mere

He hugged Nandini and lifted Manan in his arms while Nandini held Maina in hers.

It's a complete family picture...The walls of Manik's favorite farmhouse is now filled with his children's pictures...

And the princess lived happily ever after with her monster...

Done...

I got the much awaited comment @mehak and here we go...

Last Part...

Time for bye bye...

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Epilogue:

Two years later,

"Meenu,ruko beta...lag jayegi tumhe..." Nandini ran behind her ever so cute daughter just to make her drink milk.

Yes,that chotu war started again.

"Mumma...mujhe dho...mein pilaunga..."Manan came to her rescue as he became a very good daddy's boy and even more lovely brother to his cute sister.After all,it's his wish to have her.

Nandini,smiled a little seeing this responsible angle in her chotu monster and handed the glass to him.

"Minnu...come and have this...milk mein vitamins hothe hai..aur tum jaldi bade ho jaogi..."Manan said convincingly which he has learned from his dearest father.

Manik,who came out just then,stood there staring at the most blissful sight.

"Aise kya dhekh rahe ho aap..??"Nandini asked after a while as Manik isn't even blinking his eye seeing Manan's convincing nature.

Much to Nandini's surprise,Maina drank milk from Manan's hands and he cutely wiped her milk-moustache.

"Kitna bada ho gaya mera beta...Dhekho na..."He said seeing him proudly.

"Haa Manik...Aur aapke beti bhi sirf uski bhai ki sunn rahi hai..."Nandini complained.

Maina came running to her daddy and he lifted her in his arms and kissed her cheeks.

"Daddy...mujhe bhi guital chahiye..." Maina said.

"Ok Meri doll...anything for u...jao bhayya ke saath khelo.." Manik said while caressing her hair.

"Ok daddhy..." She said and hopped down.

"Chalo Minnu...khelthe hai...go get ur shoes.."Manan said to his sister.

"Ok bhayya.."She said cutely and ran to get her shoes.

Manik and Nandini still stared at them while Manan made her wear her shoes.

"Kitna kuch badhal gaya hai Nandini inn 7 years mein..." Manik said slowly entwining his fingers with hers.

"Sirf ek cheez nahi badhli...Hamara Pyaar..."She said and kissed Manik's hand.

Manan and Maina ran to play in the lawn.

Manik hugged her happily seeing his family getting completed.

They looked back just to remember and re-visit the happiest moments they have spent together.

The Revenge Love turned out to be a Never Ending Love Story.

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