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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#971

Oh how much I missed this story.

Loved the update.

Awesome one.

Manini baby is the cutest thing ever happened to these two.

I loved how she managed to bring that smile on both her parents faces just by her presence.

So typical manik.

Not listening to nandini & jumping to conclusions.

But I won't blame him only.

Both are equally at mistake.

I don't believe in this sacrificing thing, whatever the reason may be.

There might be some other way definitely rather than staying apart.

I believe in if you want something then have it by hook or by crook.

So yes, I was pretty much sad when Manik left them at airport & then looking at Manini.

But then thank you.

It'll be fun to see them stay together again.

Especially with two mothers & not to forget Manini baby.😃

Loved the update.

Thankyou,for the pm.😃

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AngvilJesfer

@AngvilJesfer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#972

OMG!!!! So u r back n of course with a bang. U dnt have any idea hw i missed ur weekend updates. And coming to the update, Manini... hw can sum1 be so cute? N Manik's entry ws truely unexpected. Haa I knew ki it wil be difficult fr him to stay away bt I didn't think he will realize it this soon. Or is there any other reason fr his return? Time fr our Cabir to tell him the truth. I dnt want them to fi8 more. Bt anyways take the turn of the story as u wish. N haa update when u feel like. Bt will be more thn happy if u update every week. N all the best fr ur job n all. Thanks fr the pm. Take care. Love u

Edited by AngvilJesfer - 9 years ago

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simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#973

omg omg omg...
m i dreaming...wohhh
u r bck...
tht too wid an update of exsss...
wuhhh...
lvvvd the update dii...

reading exs aftr so long...
evryday waiting to see if u hv updated it...

manik s angr...
ufff..
volano erruption se b dangerous h...
hahah rewa ki kya bnd bja di...
bt manik is intelligent he guessed it all right tht y nandu ws behaving like tht...

n manini baby is always their to calm down his daddy...

lv u princesss misheddd u shooo mch...

the airport part nandu being lost...
manik ignoring hr...
n in plane...
nandu trying to gain manik s attention bt still nthing happened...
n thn manini baby u r too awsm hahah bechare uncle...

lvd reading it...
seatbelt part aww still angry bt possessive ha...
lvd it...

n thn cab prt seen i thought manik will really ignore hr
bt hw cn i frgt they r unprdictible...
hshah...
n atlast...
ufff
i dnt need any one s prmission to cm to my own house...
omg manan undr same roofff...
ahhh cnt wait to read more...

lvdd it..

cntinue sooonnn di...
lvd it..
ty fr pm..
u rocked once again...
muahhh ..
tc...
n hope u gt setteled in the new place comfrtably..
will wait fr u...
bye

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kajalgupta4

@kajalgupta4

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Posted: 9 years ago

#974

Heyyy fightng bulls r bckkk again...but yeahhh its fun to watch thm in ths mode too...& manikk s bckk to home...soo yeahhh sumthng gudd is around d corner...sooo plzzz try tp update once in a week plzzz...& ol d bsssttt fr ur future... 😊

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#975

Awesome update
How stupid of nandu to go to airport without passports visas n pprs
Manik ne sab sambhal liya aake
Awww Manini is sooo cuteee
Bechare uncle ko seat change krne pe majboor kr hi diya
Dono mom's waah
Yehh manik bck home
Thnkz 4 the pm

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Sudha14

@Sudha14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#976

Welcome ji welcome👏

Koto je miss kori tomake di, ta r tomake kibhabe bujhabo???

My weekends have lost their charm without ur updates😔

Promo porar por theke ki je restless chilam update er jonno!!! n OMG what an update u've given!

U had me holding my breath from the very beginning..I never thought that manik would actually rescue nandini from that airport detention! We already knew how furious manik was from the promo. But thank God he reached on time.

The flight scene was the cutest...manini standing on that uncle's thigh, clasping a bunch of his hair in order to see her daddy dearest😆😆

Manini seriously is the best thing that happened to these impulsive idiots. Love love love her.

Coming to the flashback..why is Manik always on the edge..always jumping to conclusions n always getting so mad??? 😲Pura kahini na jenei ekebare furious hoe boshe ase. The only thing keeping him sane is manini, or else he would have gone mad by now!!

It's high time cabir steps in and narrates the entire truth to manik.. because manik's indifference n cold behaviour towards nandini is just too unfair .

Nandini's mom already hates manik..I just hope she is not here to make matters any worse😕

But seriously, thank u so much that u made manik come back to his place.. no matter how much they fight now, they'll at least be staying under the same roof..n our manini baby will take care of the rest.

Waiting eagerly for the next part.

Keep writing, keep rocking.

Love u.

Thank u so much for the pm. All the very best for the new place that u r going to.

Stay blessed.

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itssamy

@itssamy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#977

missed u dearly...

Lovely update.. u manage to keep it spiced up all the while 👏

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monstermanik

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Posted: 9 years ago

#978

time for new thread...heheh...

congo for story success as well as job success...

stay blessed

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Dashreyaa

@Dashreyaa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#979

I always miss your stories more than kyy show...

coming to the update...the airport scene was so nice with Manini and her teddy bear...god finally manik was there...still he was so pissed with nandini...manik handle Manini more easily...

Then we get the flashback scene...I liked when manik scold rewa...then nitin involve create more ruckus that the fight was witness by others...

Manik just cant stand the fact nandini say lets stay away for some time that he get very angry on her...

flight scene also Manini's part was treat to read...poor uncle

then comes going back home...manik said he will never look back at her...shows he is really pissed off...

uff both mothers waitng for nandini...hmm nandini share everything to manik's mom...

and then my most favourite scene was manik comes there with his bag saying its my house so I can come anytime...

my favourite dialogue is " and you said he will never look back at you...

kya ending tha...I just like it so much...now I am veryyy eager to know what will happen in the story...

okey no problem update whenever possible...

finally...thanks a lot for pm...this time I only get to know u updated by your pm...

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

#980

Awesome update. Airport part was amazing. Manini's teddy part was too adorable. Hehe she has complete right to fight for her teddy.nandini was totally confused and manik was hell angry with nandini. Nice combo. Super excited to read further updates. Flight part was mindblowing. Wow nandini's plan got succeeded. Manik sat next to them.manini's work in nandini's plan was phenomenal. She did it perfectly. Manan's convo was heartbreaking. Nandini was totally numb.manini's longing for her daddy was emotional and well penned. Wow manan are going to stay under same roof.this is going to be super exciting. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.love to read further

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

No problem. Take ur time. Update wen u can. Will wait