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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Interesting prologue...

Those kids r manan...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Amazing update...

Manan as kids r cute...

Luved it...

Plz continue soon...

Waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

CHAPTER 2

Next morning Manu's papa arrive in the haveli...

Hariprasad(nandini's papa) was standing for awaiting him...

Hariparasd: are aao aao mota Bhai...swagat hai hamare ghar mein...

M papa: are hariya...kaise ho Bhai...

Hariya: are him tumse bahut ghussa hai...america ja kar tum muje bhul gaye...

M papa: are bhula nahi that ...BA's kam se chutkara mile toh kuch karo...

Hariya: acha chod under chal...

M papa: acha manu kaha hai...

Hariya: yahi toh that...yeah aae raha hai udhr she...

M papa: mera beta

Here comes nandini...

Nandu: papa meine kitni bar mana kiya hai muft ke meheman ko hamare ghare mein na ghusane me liye Lekin ap meli sunte kaha hai...use yeah hai kaun...

Hariya: maf karna Bhai yeah bacchi hai...

Beta yeah manu ke papa hai...

Nandu: hai hai...galti ho gayi...dry uncle...

M papa: its OK beta...

And nandini left from the plot...

M papa: muje Teri beti bahut pasand ayi hai...many me liye muje tumhari beti ka haath chalhiye...

Hariya: par yeah to abhi bacche hai...

M papa: abhi khali rasam kar date hai...baki proper age hone me bad hi yeah Dino sath rahegne...

Hariya: thin hai bahi...

M papa: nake kam mein deri kuin...an hi kar dete hai...

Hariya: thin hai...are nandini ki maa sunti ho...

N mama: ayi...

Nandu's maa came

Kya hai kuin bulaya muje...

Hariya: yeah ek khus kahbri hai...

N maa: peheliyan mat bujhaiye ...boliye na jaldi...

Hariya: are yeah mera dost many ki saddi nandu se karna charts hai...

N maa: itni choti umar mein...

Hariya: are khali rasme hogi Bali bahu toh who badi hone ke bad banegi...

N maa: par gauin wale kya kahenhe...

M papa: bahbi abhi yeah bath him kisiko nahi batayenge...yeah hamare bich secret rahega...

Guys do comment and tell me weather u liked the dialogue and plot of my story...see u all with soon...

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zarakhanarlover

@zarakhanarlover

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Amazing concept. Do continue soon
N thanks for the pm

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

CHAPTER-3

Manu in his room is changing dress's...when nandini enters...

Manu: are are are kaisi ladki ho tum dekh nahi rage ho mein kapde basal raha huin,...

Nandu: mein tumhe khah thodi na jaungi...usse meine suna hai ki aga ham dono ki saddi hone wali hai...

Manu: acha yeh shaadi kya hai...

Nandu: are buddhu tumhe itna nahi pata shaddi woh hai jo meri maa ne mere papa se kiya hai...kehete hai jab saddi karte hai toh ap jo mango apko milta hai...

Manu: acha jo mangu milega...phir toh hum dono saddi jarur karenga...

Nandu: aja peheli baar tumne meri barabari ki batt ki hai...

Acha hai...cholo kapde pehenlo...

Manu: ha ha thik hai thik hai...

In the night...during the ring ceremony...

N papa: are nandini ki maa jaldi she nandini ko le ago...

Aur tab take mein many ko lata huin...

Then nandini dressed up with a beautiful ghagra choli and manu with a beautiful dress were ready...

M papa: mein apni bahu ke liye yeh ring laya huin...

N maa: humne bhi hamare damad ke liye ring laye hai...

N papa: are cholo cholo ring pehenayo...

Nandu: bapu yeh kya mera ring itba chota aur uska itna bada...

Manu: kuinki mein kadka huin meri wish oehele puri hoti...

Nandu: aoo jara maidan mein mein bhi dekhon iss dedh gram ladke mein kitna dum hei...

N papa: beta nandu dekho tumhare ring mein diamonds hai...par uske ring mein nahi hai...

Manu: papa uske ring mein diamonds hai phir mere ring mein kuin nahi...

Nandu: kuinki jo sunder hote hai diamonds usse milte hai aut tum to...and started laughing...

Manu:acha tum khud ko sunder kehete ho...kya sunder hai tumme...billi jaise ankhe ...crow jaisa nak...bander jaisa munh...akdam choti bandariya...hehehehe...

Nandu: tu bhi do bander ki tarah khata hai...

M papa: bas baccho bas abhi jaldi se pehenao...

Nandu took the ring and put it on manu's hand and after that manu took the ring and put it on nandu"s hand ...both were smiling and looking at each other...

GUYS IF U LIKE IT PLZ KEEP UPDATING ME WITH YR COMMENTS...

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mairaallauddin

@mairaallauddin

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Presenting small manik/manu...

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

This is our beautiful small nandu

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MadhusmitaMm

@MadhusmitaMm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

CHAPTER 4

After the engagement...

Manu: nandu mein kal gaa raha huin...

Nandu: kaha gayoge tum...

Manu: america...kabhi naam bhi suna hai...

Nandu: oh hello...muje pata hai...

Manu : acha ...

Nandu: ha...

Jao jao america jao...

Manu: hehehe...

Nandu angrily went from the room...

M papa: manu dress pack kar diya naa...

Manu: has papa kar diya...par maa kaha hai won hamare satth nahi jayegi...

M papa: tumhari maa bhagwan me pas chalk gayi hai...won kabhi wapas nahi ayegi...par tumhare liye ek nai maa hai...oh tumhara khayal rakhenge...

M papa left the room ...

Manu went to the window at night

Manu : maa ap kaha ho...kehete hai jab koi baghwan me pass jatahe tab won star ban jata hai...ap kaun so star ho...mein apse naraj huin ap muje akela chod kar kuin chale gaye...meri nai maa muje bilkul pyaar nahi karti...

Suddenly he sees a image of his maa...

Maa: mera beta...

Manu : maa ap kha chale gaye ho...plz aa jao na...

Maa: mein kahi nahi jayi mera bacca...mein hamesa tumjare sath huin...

Manu : toh aoo na maere pass...

Maa: mein wapas nahi as Sakta...mein bahut dur chalk gayi huin...an mein tumhe maa kya payaar nahi de sakti huin...par koi batt nahi beta tumhare papa aur nai maa hai naa...oh tumhe pyaar denge...mein jaa rahi huin ...

And suddenly the image that was in the sky disappeared...

Manu started crying and screaming...

Maa maaa...plz wapas aa gayo ma muje chord kar mat jao...ma...

Manu came inside the room...

Meri maa muje chod kar chalk gayi...who aur kabhi wapas nahi ayegi...yeh San us nai maa keliye hua hai...I hate u new mom...I hate u new mom...