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Posted: 9 years ago
hey...finally m back from holidays
read all the updates from chapter 4
all were awesum
loved the way nandini stopped in front of truck to make manik come in front...their friendship period...the way nandini depicted her story and how she felt
she kept manik above her parents also...how sweet
thank god rishab gave him second chance
loved it
plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
rishab's pov was perfectly penned👏
the insecuritites of a brother
and then he thought that manik is the only one who can make his sis happy
and finally he thought of giving him a chance😃
loved bro sis bond
and when he asked her whether she loves him😆ofcourse she loves him
manik is too happy that he gave him a chance
and poor cabir has to bring that ring😆

waiting eagerly for next update
will be waiting for manan moments and manik's birthday and romance😉


my favorite scene was rishab asking nandini whether she loves manik
and rishab manik's convo
and cabir bringing the ring😊
Edited by shoana - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
It's an wow update

A brother POV 😊😊😊😊

So written so well that i can't expect from u...

And the bro n boyfriend convo

Rishab is a such a gem he loves both and can't see them both and finally cabir 's italiano 😆😆😆😆 is so good hats off for him better than manik 👏👏👏👏👏


Waiting for next update...mawara

Love u

Aarzoo
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally rishu accept manik
Superb update
Cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update...
Lived rishab's & manik's P.O.V...
finally rishab has forgiven manik...
Cabir, I just love his comments...
Awesome...
Continue soon...
😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Loved it.
Can't wait for the next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Beautiful update dear .. Loved it
Continue soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE DEAR
Love it
rishab and nandu's bond is soo pure
rishab care soo mush for nandu
plz continu soon
take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey mawara
Thnx for pm
Update was awesome...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Don't forget to tell me about your fav scene!

Chapter7-A- Firework!

"You know Manik..!" She grabbed my attention by tapping my chest and I brushed few strands off her forehead. We were lying on the grass near the lake and her head was on my shoulder..


How beautiful...


"What?" I asked softly and she shifted on my arm, turning her face towards the sky.


"I want to fly!" Her voice was dreamy. "So far in the sky! And I will do this!" She continued flapping her arms like a bird and I laughed..


"Acha! And how will you do this?" I asked lowly staring at her excited face. As soon as I asked this question a tint of blush spread across her cheeks and she turned back to me. She leaned forward, cupping my left cheek she placed a soft peck on my nose..


"With your help..!" She whispered with closed eyes and I smiled. "We will fly together! Far away from this cruel world! Just you and me!" She said in a bit emotional tone and rested her forehead over mine.


Hmm! It's not a kind of wish I can't fulfill..


"Sure! You know we can do it!" I said caressing her hair and her eyes shoot open..


Aww! Baby..


"Howw?" She exclaimed suddenly and got up with a jerk while I chuckled following her.


"Well! Through paragliding!" I said pulling her in my lap and she was going insane with excitement. She sat on my lap with legs on my either sides and encircled her arms around my neck.


"Sachi?" She exclaimed loudly and I smiled.


"Muchi Bella!" I said pulling her nose. She hugged me so tightly that I lost balance and fell back on the grass with her over me. "Nandu!" I scolded her playfully and she giggled.


So innocent..


"No Manik tell na? Can we really fly like birds?" She asked, again flapping her arms excitedly.


"Yes! Just like birds!" I assured her and Oh God..! She was so happy..


"When when? When will we fly?" She asked loudly and I held her arms in my tight grip which she was still flapping as if she was really flying.


"Soon! But phir mjy kya mily ga?" I asked naughtily and suddenly the excited face become flushed. She was about to get up from me when I held her more close through her waist. "What happened faccia d'angelo?(Angel face?)!" I asked huskily and she looked away shyly.


Oh God..! I love you!


"Jaany do na!" She whispered lowly and tried to free herself.


Keyword:Tried.


"Kahan?" I asked seductively and reached her neck. She was about to say something when I placed my lips on her neck. For the first time I had came so far. I switched our positions and now she was under me. I entwined her hands with mine and her soft chest heaved under my . My eyes went on her pendent which she was wearing in her dainty neck. Actually for the first time she wasn't wearing winter clothes. It was a little warm now so she was wearing a very pretty floral knee length frock which was almost sleeveless. So her milky neck and arms were clearly visible to me. I bent over her neck and grazing my teeth lightly over her soft flesh I took the pendant in my lips. As soon as I grazed my lips on her neck she gasped and it felt she stopped breathing. Her body was so responsive to my touch. I tugged the pendant a little up and she arched her back..


"Manik...!" She moaned breathing heavily..


Oh how sexy..


"Yes angel?" I whispered leaving the pendant and it fell back over her neck with a little faint sound..


"Please!" She moaned as I again breathed over her neck making her feel tingle.


"Please?" I demanded in her ear and she dug her nails in my knuckles.


Just a little torture and you are already so turned on. How will you react when I will make lo----!! Shh! Silence Manik! Don't scare her already.


I smiled at her reaction and pecked her forehead then kissed her lips softly. Then I laid beside her and she didn't left a second to snuggle back in my chest grasping my T-shirt tightly.


"Hey! Cara Mia! Relax! I won't do anything without your consent!" I hummed in her ear caressing her hair but she didn't reacted.


"Shimmer! Look at me!" I demanded and a little annoyed..


"You know I can't!" She whispered meekly and I sighed..


Shit..! Sorry..


"You know very well what I meant!" I said a little angry but the reaction was same her face was still dug in my chest.


Ahh this girl..


I fisted her hair in my finger and tugged lightly taking care so that I won't hurt her. This forced her to raise her head..


"Can I kiss you?" I said innocently and suddenly a smile spread across her lips a sign for me that..


Yes Manik you caaannn!!


I gently placed my lips on hers and the kiss continued for hoursss!
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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago

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