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vinitamakhija

@vinitamakhija

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1041

yaar really awsm loved it plz update soon

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eoincash

@eoincash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1042

its spectacular

excellent

Mesmerizing

etc etc

Loved the confession part

Finally nandhu speak with him

Nandhu is pregnant

I had a feeling tat something happen to their baby

Thnx a lot for pm

stay blessed

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manik11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1043

Hiii dear... awsm awsm update...it was so heart wrenching...loved it to the core...that church wala part amazing...Manik confess everything... finally Nanidini want to come back...i think nandu is pregnant...very emotional update...manik pov very nicely written... waiting for nandu pov...loved it...continue soon...

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twenkling

@twenkling

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1044

such an emotional chapter...

feeling crying at their fate...

finally manik confessed everything...

such an horrible past of him...

nandu wants to come back to manik..

there is something waiting for manik...

whatever u said at last, it feels something very bad is gonna be happen with manik...

update soon...

fabulous update...

stay blessed nd take care...

be happy...

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mananpreet21

@mananpreet21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1045

Super emotional part

Manik kitne pain mai ha
Wo nandu ke bina apni life imagine bhi ni kar skta ha

Nandu bhi kitni hurt hogi
Kitna ro rh hogi manik ke liye

Manik jab jesus se confssion
To kbhi happy ho rh th kbhi sad apni past ko yaad karke

Father ne kaha ki manik kuch precious kho dega
Kya ho skta ha wo

Finally nandu ne call kiya
Manik kitna khush th nandu ke call se

Nandu sad aur khush dono th
Wo bhi manik ke pass wapas aana chhti ha

Shit nandu is pregnant
And manik apne baby ko kho dega

Yahi wo ha jisne bare mai father baat kar rh hA

SHit agar baby ko kuch ho gy to manik khud ko kbhi maaf ni kar paega

God manan ke sath aisa kaise kar sktr ha
I Hope mai galat hu aur aisa kuch na

Waiting for the nxt part

Love u

Simran

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MussuKhan

@MussuKhan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1046

hii mawara...muskan here
do u remember me?...I was ur big fan on insta n just joined IF to praise ur work...I hope u still remember me :P...do let me know yrr...u r such an awesome writer. ...love u n ur writing 😛

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badgarlriri

@badgarlriri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1047

OMG Nandini is pregnant 😲

This is so shocking

Awesome update

it takes a lot of courage to expect ur faults

I just hope that the baby would be safe

Don't know y butt I have this feeling of fear ki

Something is going to happen before Manik reaches Nandini

Waiting for ur next update Already

Come soon 🤗

Love 🥳

Ritika

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Miheeka Chaudhary

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1048

Oooh My God!!!!such a heart wrenching update doing nothing except crying throughout😭...,can't appreciate u enough for ur writing skills u r more than ossom!!!!!now coming to the update,...god it was hell helll emotional manik's condition drenched me into tears n that confession part was just brilliant 👏...,u portrayed his emotions soo welll like sooo sooo well...,n end mei jb nandini ka call aaya toh i got sooo happy bt I think this is the calm before a disastrous Strom...,nandini is pregnant right..,hoping their baby would be safe though m not getting good intuitions bt have full faith on u to do justice in each part..., continue soon...,keep smiling n lots of love 👍🏼

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1049

Tonight I will update Sequel-Home! Family! Blessing!

And maybe tomorrow maybe on Tuesday I will try to update Mafia!

Promo

"Please!!! Don't kill me!! Please! I am pregnant! Please!" I shouted as they threw me again on the floor..

I was begging for my baby! For our baby princess!

"Pregnant? Wow that's a very good news!" Soha shouted sarcastically as she grabbed my hair again. "You heard it Francis? Your rival is going to be a father!!!!" Soha again yelled and I heard Francis's laugh..

Disgusting..!

How cruel...?

They were real Mafia's...

My Manik is an Angel...

"Please don't kill me! Please! I want to have this child! Please! Manik wants her please!!!!!!!" I sobbed again holding my stomach and crawled back...

"Her? You think it's a girl?" Soha's tone was full of poison.

"That's non of yours concern bit**! And dare not to call my baby 'it'!! She is her Daddy's princess! And he is coming for her! He will kill all of you!!!!!!" I yelled and yelled until my throat hurt...

I will fight...

"Mind your tongue!" Soha yelled and pulled me by hair again making me get up.

"Soha! He is here!" Suddenly I heard Francis fearful shout and before I could register anything she threw me on the floor that too on my stomach.

I screamed loudly and the pain spread across my whole body..

"My baby!" I shouted as loud as I could holding my stomach and vision started getting blur.

I was losing her...

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Sometimes! Happinesses are short lived! You know why? Because god has planned something better for everyone! He takes exam of his most loveable children to see whether their faith in me is as strong as they show apparently or do they really mean it? Same is happening with MaNan!

Am sorry! That's all I have to say!

Have faith in me!

Love,Mawara

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1050

Oh God..
So Emotional Promo 😭..

Poor nandini..
Or Manan Ki princess 😭 ..

Oh God...ye happiness itni choti..

Mujhee Rona Aa Raha H 😭 .
Manik Or Nandini ka kya hogaa ??.
Manik chodega nhi kisi ko...

Waiting for it so eagerly !!
I have full faith in u mawara..

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