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abhilashaS

@abhilashaS

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1011

first of alll sorry di for late commenting i was in the hospital as mom is there for an operation ...kya di...kitna rulate ho aap...ufff anyways i am happy that finally nandu maan gaye and ...hummm?does that mean ki nandu is pregnant with maniks child ??if yes then yehhh...i am so happy and di i wanted to tank u aapki wajhe se hi mein ne mann mayal you tube mein dekhna chalu kiya and u wont believe i am in love with it...it is superb...and the title track ufff!!just love it...anyways do update sooon...

luv u

your reader,

abhilasha

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GAYATHRICR

@GAYATHRICR

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1012

Oh my God such an emotional update u made me cry. Bechara Manik he went through so much. Excited to know about Nandinis pov.

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lovlytuli

@lovlytuli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1013

i'm still crying...its so emotional...😭😭

u perfectly written it,,,,its so touching...😭

best part bt emotional is the confession part...⭐️

its confirm that nandini is pregnant,,,,n i think manik will going to loose their child,as the father said...bt i wish it never happen...bcz manan went through so much pain...

hope all will fine soon...eagerly wanted to read next part...

n tysm fr this superb update...hope next it will be a little emotional...i dont like manan's pain...

again tysm fr the pm...love u n ur stories...keep writing n keep smiling...😊

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1014

Please don't let happened anything to both Nandu and the baby also,
yeh price toh definitely ho sakta hai,
please pretty please...

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1015

Amazinggg
Suprrbbb
Mimdblowinggh update
Manik ne itna suffr kiya hai pr fir bhi wo ache logon ko kch nhi krta tha...god ne manik ki sunli khta hai na ache mann se maango yoh sb kch milta hai aur manik ko uski shimmr mil gyi...m sure nandu pregnant hai...lovd it
Continue soon

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Sofiafarooq

@Sofiafarooq

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#1016

Again an amazing update.
This whole chapter was much needed.
Realisation of a mafia manik malhotra.
As she said we are waiting. Means manan going to have their dream princes. May b.
It will be so cute.
At last their fon convo was so cute full of care and sadness.
Next part soon plz.

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Mamiza

@kitkat5756

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1017

maw tune than liya rula ke choregi kya ?
omg i literally cried reading ur update ufff u killed it sach mein
tujhi great ho sachi mein
penned every emotion beautifully
haw manik went through a nervous attack ya Allah
cabir and navya supported manik very well
hay manik sach mein dill se pyaar karta hain apni shimmer se even nandu loves manik a lot
the flasback was really touching yaar...
flawless maw dil jeet liya tune apne word se
haw one month kaise bitaya hoga yeh dono ?
manik's hallucination of nandu wa so soulful yaar...
loved this line "

"I am not away from you Manik! Find me! Find US! I want you to get us back! Don't torture yourself get up and look in the mirror! You will get the answer!"

love ne manik ko khuda par trust karwana sikha diya ...awesome
the church moments omg its just touched my heart ...through out the whole confession i cried...manik so badly wants his shimmer back in his life ...his every words to khuda was so soul touching...father's consolation was really nice ...manik's story mind blowing maw u killed it ...but father's one word was scaring he has to pay a price what does that mean ? he have to lose sth precious omg that was hell scary...finally manik got a hope by father's word...oms nandu called manik yeappi...their convo was really super nice just loved it...they love and care for each other so much...she wants to come to him ...is nandu pregnant ? mujhe aisa kyu lag raha hain she is pregnant and wants to tell to manik ? "we" am sure nandu is pregnant but dont snatch their baby from them ...the father's word were very scary manik has to pay very precious hope thats not their baby finger cross

maw u just killed it
hey dont cry
its ur story we trust u
i am also getting some negative vibes but i know u wont separate our manan and will give some lovey-dovey moments
dont cry please
we trust u
tc
update soon
with lots of love and hugs

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navneetdhandal

@navneetdhandal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1018

its heart wrenching update plus i m still crying after reading it..

A BIG THANK U that ur giving update in 2-3 days nahi toh i would get mad thinking about situations they have to face..

i hope manik won;t have to loose his baby in form of payback for his sins...

i hope they come out of this together and remain together holding each other in every situation and fighting back..

really emotional update

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#1019

Awesome chapter. ...

Manik confessed all his sins!

And now nandini wants him back

But I have got a bad feeling

A really bad one!

That John guy is somewhere out there near nandini

And he has set up a trap for manan

Pls keep them safe!

Loved it

Continue soon

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satron

@satron

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#1020

It was an heart renching update:-( :'(
Di you are an amazing writer.
Each of your story has its different charm.
Eagerly waiting for your next update.
I'm getting impatient ;-)
*I'm praying for Manik, Nandini & their unborn baby *

Love you Di

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