Manan ff.. Smoker & Smoke Hater chapter 1 updated page- 2

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey...
I'm new here...
And have a weird story line in my mind...
What'll happen when a girl who hates smoker will be forcefully tied in a knot with a chain smoker..??

Should I continue..?? Lemme knw guys please..

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>chapter 1- page 2
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Sanskruti164 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Update then
will luv to read
pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It has been 4 days since I have met him... His eyes looks like if he is addicted to smthng... I dn't knw why but yeah I litterly started hating him... Yeah d grt open minded NANDINI MURTHY hates people addicted to drugs, alcohol & last but nt d least smoke...
Ewww... They smelt so bad...
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tringg tringg..!!
Arrggghhh...
This bloody alarm...
"mary... Mary... Shut dis good for nothng thing...!!"
"ji manik baba.."
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Hey... I'm The Manik Malhotra... Only heir of Malhotra Industry and the most youngest business tycoo in asia...
One thing u must knw abt me is that my mrng start wid cigrt nd end wid cigrt... Yeah I'm a chain smoker... I can't even imagin my life without dis... Until I met that useless still useful girl...!

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here u go wid prologe...
Plz do like nd cmnt...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
Hhahahhah my god i just luv d idea
Seriously i m v excited for this story of urs
Do plsss continue with it
And
Plss pm me
Waiting for it
uv
Cheers

Jas
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey nice concept.

I would love to read this story further. Even I hate smoking and drinking.

Wanna see how nandu gonna make manik quit smoking.

Plz continue and update soon.

Plz Accept my buddy request and PM me whenever u update.

Stay blessed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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...<< chapter-1>>...
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"What d hell does he think about himself... Huh... Janta h wo... Achi tarah se janta h wo ki I hate smoking par phr v... Phr v why on d hell he smoke in front of me...!!"
a beautiful lady cursing her husband, well dressed up in peach color ciffon saree... Walkin to & fro in frustation, anger nd what not...
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"Mrs. Malhotra... Mrs. Malhotra come out right now..." shouted extreme hot & smart man in mid twenty... But why d hell on d earth his very own "Mrs. Malhotra" is going to response him..
"Nandini... I said come out..!"
"I m not coming out at any cost Mr. Malhotra... Do what ever u want.."
"Will u stop calling me Mr. Malhotra... It sounds as if I m here for some deal or what...!"
"I m going call u Mr. Malhotra only cz I don't like ur name 'MANIK'(Lier lier pants on fire) so forget it..."
"Arrggghhh... Pure duniya yehi mushibtt mili thi dad ko... Okie fine... Don't come out... Tm andr hi sado..." after saying dis he stromed out of his mansion...
"What d hell... Aaj ki trh apko kv v apki cigrt pack nai milne wali Mr. Malhotra... Be ready..." said Nandini to herself confidently...
"Aap log soch rhe hoge ki ye kya ho rha h...? Then lemme clear uh... Yestrday only I got married to dis useless nd smoke addictor... Huh... Appa very clearly knw that I hate smokers still he forced me to marry him... I seriously hate u for dis appa... Nd yeah come to my the so called 'suhagraat'... He litrelly smoked 4 cigret in 1 hr... Like seriously... I coughed like an old lady sufrng from T. B... I very clearly told him that I hate smokers and u have to leave it... Nd he was like nyc joke wifey... What to do wid this asshole...!"
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Okie... Chotu update... Giving my 12th board na islie... Nd thnq for ur response..!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear,
Thanks for the PM.

The update was nice. They were fighting like kids... Lol

But the update was really chotu. Considering ur exams I will manage with this for now but plz once u exams got over I want big updates.

All the best for exams.
Come soon with the nxt bigger update.

Stay blessed.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Interesting concept
Cont soon
Plz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: Princeraj1425

Hey dear,
Thanks for the PM.

The update was nice. They were fighting like kids... Lol

But the update was really chotu. Considering ur exams I will manage with this for now but plz once u exams got over I want big updates.

All the best for exams.
Come soon with the nxt bigger update.

Stay blessed.


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Yeah... I promise... I'll give bda bda update after 31st march for sure... Nd thnq for ur cmnt... Stay tuned...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Loved the concept as well as the first chapter

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