Manan - Pain Of Love (chap 6 pg 15)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Glimpse:

A girl was sitting in her room crying over her fate...her lip was bleeding...as she was beaten by her own husband who hates her...but she still loves him like anything...after all he is her first love...no matter how many times...he says that he hates her...there is a hope in her heart that he loves her...

She was leaning with the window seeing the beautiful view outside the big mansion of a business tycoon...her husband...she was remembering their old moments...how he used to climb window to get in her room...how he used to get her chocolates every night...and fulfilled her every wish...a smile crept on her face...remembering the old them...

Suddenly a man entered her..no...their room...and saw her smiling...he got angry again..as he cant see her happy...The girl was so lost that she did not notice him coming inside...he came and roughly pulled her from her hairs and threw her on the floor...

Girl: aahhh...

Man: tch tch tch...dard hua kya...should I relieve ur pain??

Girl scared: Manik...no...ab main ne kya kiya?

Manik: kuch nahi...wo kya hai na...tumhari shakal dekhta Hun na...toh mujhe ghussa a jata hai...u know I can't bare you...seriously...

Nandini crying: Manik..plz..don't do this to us...why r u ruining everything?

Manik grabbed her hairs in his fist...Nandini shrieked ...

Manik: I will torture you...u will never get free...u will bare this pain for a life time Nandini!!

Nandini: no...if u hate me so much..why don't u just kill me??

Manik: kill u...uh uh uh...no..I won't kill you..because tumhe aik hi bar mar dene se main tumhara pain nahi kam karna chahta...I want you to feel everything...

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So here is a short glimpse of my story...if the response is good...then only I will continue...so tell me if you like it...ill give you next part soon then...


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Chapter 4
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Posted: 9 years ago
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looks interesting..do continu...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Beautiful story
Totally different story
Eager to read more
Plss update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Omg such an amazing start great potential plzz update next part 👏😊
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ofcourse it is good,this kind of stories are my favourite.Plz update soon
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Hey interesting start...plz continue soon waiting eagerly
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Chapter 1

Nandini's Pov:
I was sitting in my room dressed in a bridal attire...I don't know my life will take a 360 degree turn...I'm not ready for this marriage but my parents..they forced me into this...I tried so many times to convince them that I love Manik and I'll only marry him...and mom says 'he's not good for you...loves n all...it's all rubbish' ...like seriously..love is the most purest emotion...mom dad they did an arranged marriage...they are always busy in their business and kitty parties...my dad even blackmailed me 'if I don't marry siddharth, they will never see my face..but I don't care...I only want to marry Manik...now I'm locked in my room and getting ready for this stupid marriage...

My phone rings...I pick it up and answered, 'hello?' ...Manik 'Nandini baby it's me..I'm outside...come to the window' ...I got so happy Manik came for me...I quickly went towards the window and saw him and waved my hand...Manik 'Nandini...u will have to come down from the window...we r getting married now'...Nandini: 'what?...from the window?' ..Manik: 'yes baby...plz for me...don't u want us to stay together?'...I did as he said...I tied a rope or a dupatta whatever...inside and hanged down...I was about to fall but my Prince Charming caught me in his arms...we had a cute eye lock...

I don't know what will be happening in murthy mansion...I just know that I'm marrying Manik now...we r in a temple and priest is chanting some mantras..I'm sitting with Manik...after all the rituals...he finally declared us as husband and wife...I was so happy...I touched my mangalsutra...n thought now I only belong to him...my Manik...

We went towards Malhotra mansion...I was scared what if Manik's mom don't accept me...we ringed the bell...I looked at Manik...he had a weird smirk on his face...I was confused...but chucked it...the door opened and saw Manik's mom standing with a thali...nyonika: 'hello Nandini beta..I was waiting for both of you...I'm so happy that u r my daughter-in-law now'...she also had a smirk on her face...what was going on...nandini: thanku aunty...then she did out arti...and I pushed the kailash and rice spread all over then I dipped my feet in the red colored water..and came in...then Manik held my hand tightly..it was paining...but why is he doing this...Manik picked me up suddenly...I was shocked...Manik: 'mom..I'm going to my room'...he smirked and aunty too did...then he went towards our room and entered inside and closed the door with his leg...a sudden fear came inside my heart...Manik went and threw me on the bed harshly...Nandini: 'aaahhh...Manik what r u doing?'

Manik: tch tch tch tch tch...bichari nandu...
I was confused what is he saying...
Nandini: Manik...what do u mean by this?...Manik came near me and held me from my arms..he was digging his nails in my skin..and they were paining a lot...
Manik: finally I got you...you know I have waited for this day for so long...I can't tell you...
Nandini: what..what do u mean...tears came in my eyes...
Manik: tumhe kya laga...main tum seand pyar karta Hun...uh uh...nahi...it was all a game...
Nandini was crying bitterly...
Nandini: Manik...plz don't...say that u r lying...plz...
Manik: it's the truth...I wanted my revenge...
Nandini: what..what revenge?
Manik: because of ur dad...my dad died...he shouted furiously...I was only 10...10 years old...my dad..he had faced a financial crises...in his business...we lost everything...he suicided because of ur dad...I knew ..I knew that I had to avenge his death...my mom was lonely...she had to suffer a lot...from then I worked so hard to reach this place...I planned everything...our meeting...our friendship...to make u fall for me...every damn thing was a plan...of marrying u and making ur life hell...
Nandini's tears were stopping...
Nandini: Manik..I'm so..sorry for ur dad...
Manik: sorry...is this sorry gonna bring my dad back??...no...
Nandini: Manik..but is me meri kya ghalti thi?
Manik laughs evilly: ghalti..Han hai na tumhari ghalti...ke tum us murthy ki beti ho...I know tumhe hurt karun ga...toh wo pachtai ga...hahahahah
Nandini got very angry and she pushed him with all her force...
Nandini: yeh sab game tha na...tum ne mujh se kabhi pyar nahi kiya...jhoot bola mujh se...mere pyar ka mazak banaya...I hate u Manik...I hate u a lot...
Manik: hahaha...u think I care...no baby...
Nandini: tumhare paas toh dil hi nahi hai na...tum kya kuch mehsoos Karo ge...u r pathetic Manik...just pathetic!!...she shouted...
Manik grabbed her hairs and she winced in pain...
Manik: u called me pathetic...now u will pay for this...he then slapped her hard on her face..that she fell down and hit her head...
Nandini again stood up...
Nandini: I won't stay here with you..I'm going back to my house...I want divorce...
Manik: hahahahah...and who will let you go from here?
Nandini ignored him and ran towards the door...but before she could open it..Manik pulled her and threw her on the bed...
Manik then came towards the bed...opening his shirt buttons...Nandini became horrified...
Nandini: kya ..kya kar rahe ho?
Manik smirked and threw his shirt in some corner..he was only left in his jeans...
He grabbed her again...and ripped her clothes off her...
Nandini: Manik stop!!!
Her shouts fell into deaf ears...he removed her dress completely ignoring her pleads...
Nandini: Manik I beg you..plz don't...
Manik: are I have full rights on you...don't u remember we just married sometime back...and husband wife ke saath kar sakta hai..don't u know?
Nandini: Manik agar tum ne kuch kiya..toh I swear u will pay for this...
Manik shushed her by kissing her roughly...and pinned her hands with the bed...
He also removed her inner wears...he was kissing her whole body...she was crying a lot...soon he occupied her completely...and Nandini was screaming a lot...due to pain...after some time Manik left her...and again wore his clothes...
Manik: next time...you raise ur voice against me...I will do more than this...saying this he went out of the room banging the door hard...
Nandini couldn't even move...in pain...her body was aching ...she somehow got up...and went to the washroom...she turned on the shower and stood under it..remembering his torture...she was crying a lot...trying to remove his dirty touches from her body...

Manik was at the bar and drinking...the smirk didn't left his face...
Manik thinking: finally my plan succeeded...I pity her that she has to bare everything...but I can't help it...she will pay for her fathers crime...she is a very nice girl...I know...but I can do anything for my mom...she wanted me to marry her...I agreed...and did as she told...first time when I saw her...she was looking so cute n adorable that for a second I forgot what I had to do...her innocence her everything...I just fell in love with her...I didn't wanted to do this...but my mom forced me into all this...I really really love her with all my heart...and will always do...I felt so disgusted with myself..when I said those bitter words...I wanted to kill myself...her tears...they were paining me...her screams...I feel like I can still hear them...I wish that I could just go back and hug her tight and say sorry to her..but I can't...I'm so sorry Nandini!

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So how was the first part...do give ur reviews...and should I continue with it?


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Posted: 9 years ago
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NICE UPDATE
LOVE IT
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazinggg update
Nycc start
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...
manik took revenge from her but still loves her.It's really very interesting.
Do continue & plz plz plz update today if possible

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