MaNan SS//Dirty Deals//LINK for Thread 2 on Pg 1 - Page 26

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So here I come back with my view, comment to my dear SUMI .

NEVER EXPECTED THE STORY LINE TO BE IN THIS WAY. 😲

NANDINI MARRIED TO THE OLDIE MALHOTRA . 😕

AND MANIK IS JUST AN EMPLOYEE IN THE COMPANY...

HMMM !!!!! LOTS MORE TO COME FOR SURE SUMI. 😉

MR. MALHOTRA IS ALSO AWARE OF THE DEAL... OOPPSSS DIRTY DEAL.

WHY HE WANTS NANDINI TO HAVE MANIKS BABY AND NAME AS HIS ????

YA YA I KNOW WE WILL COME TO KNOW LATER ...

BUT OBVIOUSLY I AM CURIOUS TO KNOW...

TEEKH HAI JABH BATANA HOGA SUMI TUM BATA DOGI HI... 😊

AACHA YEH BATAO NANDINI MANIK KO GUNDO SE PETVANA KYUN CHAHTI HAI ???????

ITS A DEAL BETWEEN THEM A MUTUAL ONE , THEN ... 😲

WHAT NO RIGHT TO KISS... NANDU HAVE U FORGOTTEN ABOUT THE DEAL.

I THINK IT WILL BE INCLUDED IN IT.. 😆

SHIT !!!!!!! STUPID ME KHUCH BHI BOL RAHE HU... 😉

NANDU STOP GIVING THE SAME EXCUSE EVERY DAY IT WONT WORK.

GOSH !!!!!! THE MAKE OUT SCENE WAS DEADLY HOT...

SUMI WHICH HOLLYWOOD MOVIE DID U WATCH BEFORE GETTING THIS IDEA OF MAKE OUT .

😳 😉

NANDU PLZ DECIDE KARLO AND ADMIT IT THAT U R ATTRACTED TO MANIK .

MAY BE MANIK IS TOO.

SUMI CALM DOWN CHILLL

U NEVER REACT THAT EMOTIONALLY ON THE COMMENTS UR READERS GIVE U, SO WHY NOW DEAR.

U KNOW WHAT U WANT TO WRITE AND TILL NOW U DID LIKE U WANT IT TO BE.

SO CONT NEVERTHELESS WHAT READERS WANT.

PLZ GUYS IF ITS BECOMING TOO MUCH SWEET FOR U ALL TO HANDLE WITH EX'S AT WAR THEN DONT READ.

U CANT GET BOTH THE THINGS ROMANTIC LOVEY DOVEY AND TIFFF BETWEEN MANAN.

BUT SUMANA IS GIVING BOTH .

HATS OF TO U IF QUEEN.

OKK SUMI DONT BE DISHEARTENED

WAITING EAGERLY FOR BOTH NEXT UPDATE.

EHH !!! I FORGOT TO MENTION ...

WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN NANDINI GETS PREGNANT WITH MANIK CHILD ????

WONT MANIK BE ATTACHED TO THE LITTLE ONE ??????

AND EVEN WHAT WILL NANDU GO THROUGH ALL THIS.

I am one of the lot who mentioned that Ex's is getting super sweet and there should be tension. Not between Manan, but Manan vs. the world. But don't take that as a bad thing or get offended.

I will tell you why? have you ever gone through the comments on most of the stories in the forum. They are just 'Good update' or a few lines from the regular. But do you know why you get such passionate requests? Becoz you make ppl feel emotion that other writer necessarily can't. Thats why everybody pounces on you. That puts you in the category of exceptional writers. So realize that and understand that you have got adulation that most ppl can't even dream of. Man you get minimum 300 likes. and atleast a thousand check your page every Thursday for a promo.

Also you must have noticed that the readership has gone down, thats becoz most writers are not active and the ones active are not taking the extra step they used earlier. So pls reconsider not giving a promo or random moment.

Also one of the things I really like you about is that you are an intelligent adult who doesn't react to anything that her readers throw at her. But off lately that has changed with LDL ending and Ex's recent update. What has happened? Are you going through a rough patch or gloomy time? Let us help you if thats the case.

Lastly, there is a thin line between being exceptional and being legendary. You are standing on that line. You have worked so hard to get to the line and if everything goes as planned, you will be legendary soon. We love you and want you to be a LEGEND.

Love, Noor

p.s. I am PMing this message.

And they r together only for deal to get nandini pregnant

Different yet interesting story

Never imagined nandini like this

Waiting for nxt

I got an idea about Nandini being someone else wife n the first chappy, but I thought her husband is Manik's father because of the surname.

So Nandini z married to an oldie for money and power. Mr. Malhotra wants her to get pregnant so he asked for Manik's help, but there are several methods for that. Y can't he choose such methods. Sorry ,but you know curiosity.

So all are just more than selfish, I can see that. The way Manik behaving with Nandini, Nandini behaving with Manik. Everything.

Still not sure about the story, but I will give it a try because of you.

I love all your other stories, so I know this one will also be an awesome story.

About not giving pm and promo, am really hurt. Am a regular reader and also gives feedback regularly, it feels bad for me that you are not considering us. 😭

Really loved it

Do update soon

Waiting eagerly

So manan r not married...

Nandu had married a oldie for money...

Tht oldie wants nandu to be pregnant oh got...

So its jst a deal b/w oldie and manik...

Luved it..

Something diff..

Looking forward...

Update soon...

So manan r not married...

Nandu had married a oldie for money...

Tht oldie wants nandu to be pregnant oh god...

So its jst a deal b/w oldie and manik...

Luved it..

Something diff..

Looking forward...

Update soon...