MaNan Series of OS:~ SHOT 4 page 26 (8/4) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Haahaahaha... Ohh god this was hilarious...
Soo good it was...
Agar nandini Sach me aisi hoti to..!!
I can't even imagine Kya hota... Sachi...
BTW d update was really good...
Muktis character to is quite interesting...
Stay blessed...
Stay happy...
Keep smiling...
Keep writing...
Continue soon...
AVNEET... (AVI...)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Mish I'm so sorry. I couldn't comment before was stuck between Exams & Practicals.
I did read both the one shots & I lived it.
The blush OS made me blush & I just found it way to cute.
This OS had a daring Nandini which is amazing. Manik's started off the game to distract her but Nandini being bold was something.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
This is definitely a first!
Manik Malhotra blushing out of embarrassment on these things!
Some one get Nandini an oscar to achieve the inevitable.
Lol!
This series is definitely a laughter riot!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Wowooo awesome superb amazing new concept😛 totally awesome plz keep writing thanks for pm😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ankita_t

Hi Misha,

Hieee diii


So finally we meet on your story and i know i am quite late coz you have written 2 shots already. Misha remember how we started our out of the blue conversation and trust me it was one of the best things that happened... We chatted and chatted like there was no tomorrow... 😆...
Yesh Yesh yesh!!! How can I forget that!!

I am so glad that I am here and sharing my thoughts with you on your beautiful body of work. Your write ups are something we all could relate too. We have made communications like that in our life at some point and when we read it in your shots it just makes us travel through that memory lane again. The analogy of newly wed bride and her blushing is just as the budding flower with a few droplets of water on it.

( yes actually! I kept that in my head to give theses os series a real touch to which any girl can relate! You know I am feeling so ecstatic tat u liked my work!)

The second shot - aahhaaa... ok...i just hope i get a good husband first lol... only then i am gonna speak ahead.

( hahhahahaa! Trust me on this di... I myself was 'hairan pareshan' when I got to see such a guy few days back as my best friends fiance... My friend is Kangana Ranaut in reality and juju is no less then sharma ji... But only in nature he is killer by looks!!! Ufff! So agar di usko mil Sakta hai toh kisi ok Bhi mil Sakta hai... App a Bhi number anee wala hai)


Misha i have no idea if there can be any guy who can make me blush lol... coz i am the most unromantic girl and all blushing is really i don't think i'll be ever doing. Well, forget about me...

( awee!! I toh just blush at even a name mention of Adam Levine or Karan jotwani)

I really enjoyed both the shots and trust me i like episodic updates which narrate a single incident. The humour just comes out with a spark when we have just a small memory to write. I think you have done a fabulous job.
(Kitniii tariff karoge... Aaa!!! Thnqu thnqu thnqu)

Just keep going Misha and i am so happy that i could express my views on your stories. I know the one i had promised long back is still pending. However, i will be penning it down soon.
( yooo! No worries di!!! Jab Marji kro...)

Hey don't forget to now send a PM to me and plz Mishaji don't delete me from your friend list.
( diii!!!! That's so embarrassing!!! Taunt maar Rahe ho!!! Lol let me send u a buddy request first!)


Lots of Love

Ankita
( thnqu so much for reading di!)



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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: LoveIsManan

Ahh!!! Nice..
It's always kind of fishy when your friend gives you an unexpected treat and that too on the end of the month..
And the promise of sharing anything and everything can really put you in trouble...
Man this women is a trouble...
She is way damn bold for her better half..
He fully flushed, this is s kind of role reversal from the last shot..
That was too damn fun too read..
Really waiting and more egarly waiting for more such shots...


Hahhahahaa! Yes... And when it's Misha Shergill offering that then there is definitely something up for sure!!
Thanks for reading

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
jst read ur both shots!!
so came up with concept of writing one shots haan... no tension to update n finish d story!!
nyways whatever suits u i jst want some good writing to read...
coming to ur shots...
arranged marriage!! a different concept... liked it..
i liked d difference u gave about arrange marriage n love marriage..
i jst laughed out loud whn nandini was waiting for manik's reply n muktii on call started blabbering about adam levine!!!
i love d song khoobsarat hai woh itna... its one of my fav...
along with nandini i too was blushing throughout reading d update...
coming to second update
so mukti want IT details..hmmm
poor nandini too worried to ans when IT actually never happened!! but even after so much tym before marriage to get to know eachother n even after marriage why it didnt happened???????
nandini n her questions!!! bechara maanik embarrased hogaya n even blushed!!!
last update mein nandini ko blush karwaya n is update mein manik ko!!!
bold nandini is always a treat to watch!!! l
lets c what u have in store for other part!!
waiting eagerly to read d nxt part!!
try to update soonish!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: alinaansari

jst read ur both shots!!
so came up with concept of writing one shots haan... no tension to update n finish d story!!

(Alina di! You CAUGHT ME!! I actually thought same while writing!!)

nyways whatever suits u i jst want some good writing to read...
coming to ur shots...
arranged marriage!! a different concept... liked it..
i liked d difference u gave about arrange marriage n love marriage..
i jst laughed out loud whn nandini was waiting for manik's reply n muktii on call started blabbering about adam levine!!!
i love d song khoobsarat hai woh itna... its one of my fav...
( mine too!! I am hard core retro all time evergreen old songs fan)

along with nandini i too was blushing throughout reading d update...
coming to second update
so mukti want IT details..hmmm
poor nandini too worried to ans when IT actually never happened!! but even after so much tym before marriage to get to know eachother n even after marriage why it didnt happened???????
nandini n her questions!!! bechara maanik embarrased hogaya n even blushed!!!
last update mein nandini ko blush karwaya n is update mein manik ko!!!
bold nandini is always a treat to watch!!! l
lets c what u have in store for other part!!
waiting eagerly to read d nxt part!!
try to update soonish!!!


Will update soon di!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Hahhaha.. 😆
Well written .
Thanks for the PM 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Awesome update
The story is so interesting
Hehehe MaNan's pre-wedding talks
Amazing
Superbly written
And she blushed hehehehe
Thnkz 4 the pm

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