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Posted: 9 years ago
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Ty for d pm...
Gosh mish u r d heights...haha...I died out of laughing...
I ssly fell off my bed reading nandu n mukti talks...
U were amazing...
Loved it to d core...
Tysm for these amazing one shots...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It was so amazing
Haha
Bold nandu
Shy manik
Manik was blushing ...so cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hi...,
seriously mukti (you) such an insane!!!!! she is really want to know about nandi's first night... :v for this she was done all the preparation... best of luck nandini (Tanya)
...:o you make shy nandu as a bold one... transformation is really awesome... osthirrr (Bengali) :p flushed manik.. *_* bamboo splitting!!!!!!!!...such a tease nandi ... ...
cold coffee is reminding me my bitch... ^_^ I'm missing her like hell after reading this... :'( :p waiting for more craziness...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: etuu

hi...,
seriously mukti (you) such an insane!!!!! she is really want to know about nandi's first night... :v for this she was done all the preparation... best of luck nandini (Tanya)
...:o you make shy nandu as a bold one... transformation is really awesome... osthirrr (Bengali) :p flushed manik.. *_* bamboo splitting!!!!!!!!...such a tease nandi ... ...
cold coffee is reminding me my bitch... ^_^ I'm missing her like hell after reading this... :'( :p waiting for more craziness...



Hahhahaa!!
Thanqu dea!
Yes even more crazyness is awaiting for u in nest part which i will be upating around 11 tonight!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
Hie earthlings!!!
First of all THANKYOU SO MUCH! Thats you guys genuinely gave so much love to this random os series.

Problem yeah ho gaii! You guys enjoyed them to the fullest but for whom i wrote this she made my life hell... I really feel blessed that i dint meet her all the days between! Nahi toh ap apna pakao writer kho dete!

And tragic part is, my life is still in danger after this part... So you guys enjoy!!

PS- sorry for rough presentation... Actually my ipad isnt working so i am updating from my cellphone! Will do thats by tommorow morning! Till them please bare with me!




SHOT - 2 (B)

'FINALLY' MOMENT...



"Ghana angrez bane sey!"(huh! Trying to be over smart) I huffed under my breath as i heard Manik sitting just an inch away from me and shooting orders in most professional and stern way with excellent command on English. And one thing that very few people know about me is that I, out of blue start speaking mummering swears and curses in my native language, haryanvi that is... when i am highly annoyed or i want to strangle someone to death but i feel helpless as i am unable to do that. I can pin point exact time or thing out that what gets into me while doing that but maybe its because my conscious is aware that people wont understand my language properly. So it's better to get tagged as an idiot talking and huffing within myself than to be tagged as a lunatic killer. My mind automatically trigger the Haryanvi tigress in me. And i am pretty sure my husband who has hardly even visited Haryana not more than 10 times in his entire life would ever understand what i am saying and that is a plus point. But the bonus point on it is that Manik will definitely require his rest of life to understand what i am saying.


And right now, i want to kill him for putting me in such situations. Its so shameful and embarrassing that i have to cook up a story for my friends about my first night.

Worse part is i am exactly sitting beside him reading erotic romantic novel to cook my first night story whereas i should be putting all this theory in practical use. All credits goes to my dear lovely -touch -me -not - husband.

I started reading the context from the novel and was making points what all to be cooked as a story to be serve Mukti hot that could make her believe my words.

"Bored!" A husky monosyllab ran through my ears. Its was a 'finally' moment for me.

"Nope! I am enjoying myself completely sotting beside a busy bee!" I said sarcastically to which he smirked and shock his head slightly.

"What are you reading Bdw!" Manik asked me with curious eyes and finally he got to notice that even a human exist beside him.

"Bared by you by sylvia day!" I replied coldly and went back in reading.

"The crossfire series?" Completely bewildered Manik asked an that exactly made me look at him.

"You read them?" I questions.

"No... No really but i do know about the plot and the content in it!" He answered not being sure of what exactly to say.

"Oh! Thats great... At Least you are good at theory if not practicals!" I shamelessly said with dripping sarcasm and fake surprise smile.

"Your not gonna read it!" Said Manik sternly making me look at him with a crooked eyebrow.

"Come back again!" I said bit furiously.

"I . said. you. Are . Not . Gonna . Read . It!" Manik stress at each word with a challenging look. Seriously, nerve of this man. How dare he... Here i am completely frustrated ad tensed about the question answer session which will be held by Mukti as soon as i place First step on the other ground. I am trying to prepare myself by reading erotica novels to prepare myself for that just because of HIM. And still he is throwing this shit of an attitude.
Bloody hell.

(Calm down! Nandini calm down! You don't have to sound like a desperate woman. Get a grip on urself even if your husband is completely useless.) i thought and sighed heavily making my nerves calm.

But the very next moment i so wanted to beat the daylight out of him as he took the book away from my hands.

"Give me the book back!" I gritted my teethes between the words trying really hard not to sound rude.

"Nope!" Said Manik as he hung his hand with the book high in the air on the other side.

"Stop testing my patience! I am reading is because of my useless husband... And even if i read or not... Thats my choice!" I nearly lashed out at him as his antics were making me lose it. After doing nothing he still has audacity to stop me from reading the erotic novel.

Just then an air hostess interrupted exactly when i was getting mad at my husband giving him at sweetest if sweetest smile and worse part was that even Manik reciprocated it with a smile. Arghh! I will throw this man out of the window...

Before she could say anything to me, i rose my hand and stopped her for saying anything further.
"Taai, tu bech mein naa pad!" (Dont you dare interfere between us!) now i was back to my Haryanvi mode which probably means i am mad as hell so dont mess with me while the airhostess looked at me with scared and confuse look.

Shocking part was manik was still smile bright! Has he lost it.

"Mahry lugaai ghani bawli sey!" (My wife is bit crazy) Manik said looking alright into my eyes with a lopsided smirk playing in his lips and shining victorious eyes while mine widened as large as saucer.

"Thank you! We shall take it from here!" Said manik still looking at me with smirk to which air hostess went away while i was still shocked to wits.

"Never underestimate your opponent! I used to understand each and every curse and swear you use to whisper under your breath but i never reacted to it!" Manik said as his smirk widened now.

"But how do u know it... Does people in Bangalore speak haryanvi!" I asked Manik to which he actually pinched my cheeks As if i asked something cute.

"No! First you tell me why are you reading this novel!" Manik asked.

"Because i don't wanna be a laughing stock in front of Mukti. If she comes to know that i never did IT then she is gonna tease me till death." i said and could see Manik was still trying to make sense out of my blabbering.

"See! Today Mukti is gonna question me to death about my first night and if i say that i never had then its highly embarrassing for not only me but you too.!"

"Wait! Wait! Wait! What did you just say? First of all why is she gonna question about it and secondly then why the hell are you reading this novel and thirdly why the hell will you share such private moment with your friend that happened between us!"Said Manik looking at me as if i just have grown horns on my head.

"FINE! so firstly, Mukti is my best friend and so she is likely to know each an everything what i do... We both don't keep secrets. Secondly i am reading the erotic chapters of the novel So that i can explain Mukti what all happened when it actually never happened because of someones uselessness! And thirdly! How the hell it became a private moment when it actually never happened!" I ended panting hard still red with anger. While Manik was stiff at the tigress woken in me.
I didnt sound desperate! Why would i be... I dont give a damn.. Go to hell for all i care.

"Unbelievable!" Manik almost whispered while handling me the book back. " you seriously are a nut case!"


"Huh! Why you twisting things? Why dont you just admit that you are jealous that you wife is drooling on some other guy. By the way! Gideon is not only hot, sexy, and possessive, but he's also broken and a bit frightened as well, which makes him even more loveable. At least for me. And ofcourse they f**k like bunnies ALL. THE .TIME! But i tell you he is the best kisser ever!" I blabbered as i started with anger but ended up being all dreamy about gideon guy.

"Stop it! Not a word... Let me change you misconception!" Manik whispered as his eyes turned dark.

Manik not giving me a second to think or act and in swiftness captured my lips. He gripped my waist tight and devoured my mouth wildly. The kiss was slow, with deep kisses, erotic nips with his teeth, his mouth gliding, slipping and sliding over hers. He caught my lower lips tugged lazily away, returned to catch it again, then slanted his mouth firmly over mine, plundering. He bit my lower lip and i let out a small moan and gasps which gave him entry to plunge his tongue into my mouth.

He sucked my tongue, while i buried both of my hands in his hair. I was losing all my sensation, my knees felt like it would give away any minute, if he had not been holding me into place. He abruptly left my mouth and trailed hot-open mouth kisses down my throat, nipped the skin at the base of neck which made me whimper at the assault. He instantly darted his tongue out and soothed the place with a lick.

I felt hot fire burning in my stomach; i wanted more and kept on pulling his hair strongly, while his hand tightened even more on my waist. He brought his lips back up to mine and kissed hard. He was pouring all of his anger, rage and jealousy into that kiss. It was to tell me that i was only HIS and no one else's.

He gently broke the kiss he opened his eyes and what he saw left him breathless.

I was completely flushed, my lips swollen and above all i was turning crimson red all over face. My eyes were still closed, i surrendered myself to him, but something in me snapped and i opened my eyes. She looked at him and whispered, "I bet... You changed my misconception!"

To which Manik smiled and planted a peck on my lips and said " i knew what you are hinting at all this while but pretended to be oblivious of them!" Making my jaw touch the ground.

"Hww! You meano!" I smacked his arm and continued " such a tease you are!" I huffed to which he smiled and said " see! Thats what is similar in us but the only difference is!" As He looked at her not saying a word, trailed one of his fingers from her lips down to her throat and landing at the red mark at the base of her neck. The bite he gave her had now left a red, soaring mark on her body and spoke again " everyone knows that you are such a tease but only you know that i can be a tease too!" Said Manik huskily giving me goosebumps all over my body.

"And about IT! We can put your theory into practical use as soon as you want it to which i know you are eagerly waiting for!" Manik said with a smirk.

"Shameless!" I said smacking my novel on his arm so that i get time to hide my blush.

"Look how is talking!" Manik taunted and then broke into fits of laughter to which i joined too.

As soon as we sobered ourselves Manik asked "by the way! From where did you get this book?"

"Mukti gifted me these whole series and in was supposed to read them prior the wedding! But it skipped my mind then!" I told him and giggled while Manik couldn't help but face palmed at this.

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@tanya_solanki

Bae! So here is the surprise, no actually the surprise in surprise. Let me open the suspense.

Tommorow i am gifting you a sylvia day's complete Trilogy as your surprise present which is not any more a surprise. Hahahahhahaaa! And i am serious.

You better put them in a god use and don't tell me any fake story about your first most awaited night.

Like .Dead.serious.

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Guys! How was it!!! Good better best worst...

Even more craziness is waiting for you in upcoming os's.

Till then keep dropping your genuine views an dont frget to hit that sexy sexy 'like' button.

Stay happy stay blessed

Mishshergill 😃 😃
Edited by mishshergill - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
Reserved!
This reserving thing males me feel like stray dog!!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Congratulations Tanya, for your impending marriage and to you our dear author, to make us a part of both of your's journey.
I would be lying if I had said that I didn't reread this, because this is gold.
I laugh out half of the times and the other times, I'm trying to hide my blushing face.
Reading an erotica novel, sitting next to a certain Manik Malhotra and waiting for action, this is certainly a Nandini we do not know, as I see that this has been characterized on someone, I feel sorry not to know you personally.
The kiss or the mini-makeout session was HOT!
Manik and Nandu are as ready as they will ever be to bring practical into theoretical.
(Sorry, If my comment offends anyone of you in anyway.)
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Posted: 9 years ago
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I was laughing like lunatics in the middle of the night, and my rommies were just staring at me as if I have grown some horns...
This girl really has wits to make her husband fall flat on his face...
And how can she underestimate him that he never understood of spoke harvanyi...
But the way Manik snapped back at her was hot with a capital H...
Darling you know what I am so in love with this series like seriously...
I just can't get enough of reading it..
Would really looking forward for the next...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: LoveIsManan

I was laughing like lunatics in the middle of the night, and my rommies were just staring at me as if I have grown some horns...
This girl really has wits to make her husband fall flat on his face...
And how can she underestimate him that he never understood of spoke harvanyi...
But the way Manik snapped back at her was hot with a capital H...
Darling you know what I am so in love with this series like seriously...
I just can't get enough of reading it..
Would really looking forward for the next...




Aaa!!!! Thnquuu D!
Oh i remeber ur initial of your name!

I am glad u are liking it so much!
Will be updating soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
nandu thought manik don't know haryanvi but he knows😆
manik's demo part was hot☺️
thnks 4 pm
cont soon

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