Kaise Mujhe...:The Perfect Mismatch-A Manan RomCom Ch21-A B(@119 122) - Page 23

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mananneetu


hi...so i m a new reader...i read all the parts today and i m still laughing...they all were damn funny...!!😆
prt 1 where nandu was dreaming was too funny..and then drunk manik was damn funny yet cute..😳

part 2: loved nandu's idea...hehe manik ko tie kardia...i must say smart girl..!! and that manik's dialogue where he said " how can u do domestic violence nandini" really funny..!!🤣

then i loved that part where manik made her eat that spicy raita nd loved the way nandu so boldly kissed him... 😉
" thappad se darr nahi lagta sahab pyaar se lagta hain.." 🤣

hmm..then mujhe sach main koi idea nahi tha ki jaan is abbreviation of janvar...😆

then that sardar part was too good...even he was quite intelligent/...!!😆
KALIYA ...🤣hehe just loved the name...

drunk nandu ne toh itna hasaya ke i cant control laughing...indian games ka promotion wala part loved it...!!

tatoo..aww they r so cute...😳

waiting for the next part...update soon..and plz pm me...

and i have a suggestion for u if u dont mind..!!
woh actually na i think u shoyld change the title of ur story...because when i looked at its name i thought its a dark story with rona dhona and all..but its totally opposite/..such a funloving story..totally refreshing..😆 .so just give it a thought...

update soon
take care...❤️

Thank you...I m really glad that u liked it.
About ur suggestion even I m thinking to change it...if u hav a suggestion...please share.
Keep Reading... Stay tuned
abhilashaS thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
still waiting update karo na prachi...😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all I m really sorry @AbhilasaS...I promised u that today I will give an early update but...I was watching Neerja...believe me its an awesome... those who haven't make sure that u watch it...Its worth watching.

Chapter - 8

Manik's eye widen in shock.
M: Nandini what r u playing?
N: 50 Shades of Grey...u have watched it.
M: Aa...
N: Watch it again with me...I don't know anything... all my friends watched it in theatre but becoz of our wedding... I missed it.
M: Please start some other movie...I can't watch this with u.
N: I knew why will u watch with me...u will watch everything with ur Kaliya..!! (she starts crying).
M: Ook Sorry...don't cry...we will watch whatever u want.
She started the movie.
First 15 minutes of the movie was very peaceful as it was just when the girl goes to take Grey's interview. Both were concentrated on the tablet.
Then comes the lift scene... where they first kiss. Manik was getting very uncomfortable. She looked at Nandini...who was enjoying the site infront of her eyes. Nandini catches him looking at her.
N: Manik Movie can be seen in the tab...not in my eyes.
M: Yeah.
As the movie proceed I mean the make-out scenes started.
N: Eeuuh...How vulgar!! (She closed the movie)
Manik silently thanked God.
N: I can't watch this its vulgar...Eeeh...how can u watch this.
M: I haven't watched it.
N: Ok...forget that now what we will do?
M: Lets sleep.
N: No lets talk...u told ki u don't know anything about me...Ask anything...I will answer.
M: I just wanted to ask...U r born this intelligent or u hav done some Alia Bhatt course.
N: Again...Kaliya...I swear u again take her name...I will kill u.
M: Ok sorry I won't...I m tired lets sleep.
Nandini kissed his both cheeks and "Good Night...Sleep tight and hav my dreams"
M: Gud n8
N: How mannerless...I mean I kissed ur cheeks and wished and u are wishing like this...how rude??
M: Oops...( he bend down and kissed her cheek ).
N: U r really an idiot... I mean u kissed only one cheek of mine. Don't u hav sense.
M: So whats the problem... I mean kissing one cheek is a crime or what?
N: Idiot... If u will my one cheek... my other cheek will bulge out...it will swell.
M: But ur cheeks are already swelled...( he starts laughing ).N: U r very bad...I won't talk to u.
Manik kissed her other cheek and forehead. He made her wear his Tshirt.(as she had opened and thrown her top while asking Manik to make her the tatto). She sleeped on the top of him.
In the morning, Manik was the 1st to wake up. He picked the tablet and called someone.
M: Hello Aliya.
Nandini woke as soon as she heard Aliya's name. She pretended to sleep in the position coz she wanted to hear there conv.
M: Ya Aliya...our car knocked against a tree.
No we r safe in a cottage nearby... I will send u the link of our location...When I will come I will tell u my marriage story and I m sure U will understand me...but this is not done...Okay since u r going to the doctor for the child I m allowing u else u know I won't have allowed... Ok take care...Luv u...see u soon.
Nandini was having a strong headache due to hangover and moreover she was burning with jealousy.
N: Aliya is pregnant????
M: (happily) Yup she is expecting.
N: Wow...congratulations.
M: U tell her urself...she will feel very happy...(like Prachi who felt very happy after reading ur comments 😆).
N: When I will I meet her.
M: We r just leaving for her place... though she has an appointment with doctor... she will she us soon.
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Nandini POV
Even before going to Nani's house he is going to Aliya's place...How much he loves her.
She even know about us and is even pregnant... how much they love and understand each other...may be thats why he called to me reject the marriage proposal that day.
*****************
M: Nandini slept???
N: No was just thinking something.
M: About last night??
N: No...I m just having a headache.
M: Ya hangover...its common. But after what u did my whole body is aching.
N: (realized her condition that she was in Manik's Tshirt lying on the top of him). Excuse me man...what we did last night.
Nandini tried to get up but Manik held her tighter...
M: Baby...How can u forget...what we did...its not worthy forgetting...we watched 50 shades and...
N: (looked at his bare chest) 50 shades...and please tell me what we did...speak.
M: Sorry but I m feeling very shy...last night also u remember na how bold u were.
N: Manik I can't do anything like this.
M: But u were not in ur senses.
N: But u were and I trust u.
Nandini looked in his eyes and then they realized that how close they were... they can feel each others breathe.
Manik bends down to kiss her. Peee Peee.
"Sir Aliya mam has send the car".

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Edited by Prachi55 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it
but bahut chotu Sa tha..
Plz try to update a bit lambaa na..
Anyways this was also really funny..
God..yeah kaliya I mean aliya.😆 I'd pregnant but with whose child ??
I mean manik said na ke he is a virgin..toh phir she must be dhruvs wife and dhruv must be his friend..or something like this..
Anyways update soon
Waiting
😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
First of all I m really sorry @AbhilasaS...I promised u that today I will give an early update but...I was watching Neerja...believe me its an awesome... those who haven't make sure that u watch it...Its worth watching.

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super awsome prachi 👏👏👏and its ok...your chapters r worth waiting...😃❤️.

M: I just wanted to ask...U r born this intelligent or u hav done some Alia Bhatt course.
N: Again...Kaliya...I swear u again take her name...I will kill u

this part literally made me roll on the bed drunk nandu is really something ...🤣

N: I can't watch this its vulgar...Eeeh...how can u watch this.
M: I haven't watched it.

and manik said he didnt watch 50 shades of grey then how does he know that something gadbad is there in the movie...hmmm😉😉😉

Nandini kissed his both cheeks and "Good Night...Sleep tight and hav my dreams"
M: Gud n8
N: How mannerless...I mean I kissed ur cheeks and wished and u are wishing like this...how rude??
M: Oops...( he bend down and kissed her cheek ).
N: U r really an idiot... I mean u kissed only one cheek of mine. Don't u hav sense.
M: So whats the problem... I mean kissing one cheek is a crime or what?
N: Idiot... If u will my one cheek... my other cheek will bulge out...it will swell.
M: But ur cheeks are already swelled...( he starts laughing ). N: U r very bad...I won't talk to u.

how cute nandu is so cute and funny humor if only one cheek is kissed the other one will sweel and buldge out...🤣🤣


keep writing and i seriously will love to know what happens next

yours,


abhilasha😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
I m really sorry aaj bahut jyada late ho gya update krne me...coz I was crying badly...the movie stirred my heart.
Guys I need ur suggestion...one of the new reader pointed out that the title is not appropriate for my story...even I felt this...so I m thinking about changing the title... should I do that??
If yes, please suggest some name.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi55

I m really sorry aaj bahut jyada late ho gya update krne me...coz I was crying badly...the movie stirred my heart.
Guys I need ur suggestion...one of the new reader pointed out that the title is not appropriate for my story...even I felt this...so I m thinking about changing the title... should I do that??
If yes, please suggest some name.

how about kaise mujhe tum mill gayi..😳😳
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: abhilashaS


how about kaise mujhe tum mill gayi..😳😳


Its really awesome...I can surely think about it.
Thanks 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Prachi55


Its really awesome...I can surely think about it.
Thanks 😃



most welcome...😃😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
hmm..how about "Shadi karke phas gaya..!!" 😆
or "MY BOLD WIFEY.."
😉

they are quite bakwash i know/..but they had popped up in my mind when i was reading ur story.
😳

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