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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Different concept!
Looking forward to read it ^_^

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Garima

@Luving_Gari

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Hayeee... Awesome storyyy didu...
Just loved it...
The concept is "hatke" just like you...
I was visiting forum after days and got this...
Yey...I am shoo happy...
Saara Xam ka stress dur ho gyaaa...
You r a stress buster didu...
Btw howzzz uh???
N how were your Xams???

Love uh...
muaahhh...
babyeee...

Pariii

Ps- I am nowadays not getting PM's...

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Wow new story , mafia wali😆

Manik as mafia and nandini blind , nice concept! Hope he will tell her the truth now!😳

Loved the hug between them , how she was snuggling in him and he kept on thinking he wasn't good enough for her!

The name of nandu ,"shimmer" , nice yaar👏

Love the strart of the story and waiting for update of Dheere dheere! Do update it soon!😉

P.S. Congratulations on becoming dazzler! The colour suits you😛 even I want my dazzler colour back😭 I hate my colour!

Edited by Aayu27 - 9 years ago

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Claire_D

@Claire_D

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

I'm so excited! New story & that too written by you! The first prologue was damn interesting. Manik a Mafia & Nandini blind.
Can't wait for the chapter's!

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#65

concept is too gud...
manik is mafia...
nandini is blind... n she is manik shimmer...wow...
nandini dont knw abt manik reality...
waiting for chappy...
excited for new story...

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Naj91

@Naj91

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Hi Mawara,

After a long time I m in this forum
Well..like always I m already in love with this amazing and unique concept
I wonder..kar kaise leti ho bacha
It's really really beautiful
Har time Manik and Nandini in different form..not only for story but they r so different from each other's character also
Shimmer..amazing nickname
Well..now I m just eagerly waiting for u to come back
I love this Manik for Nandini
Please come back soon
U know I miss u bacha
Love u

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stars-fireflies

@stars-fireflies

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Another owsum story by u :)

U will rock it for sure as like your other stories ..

Please continue soon ..

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Mawara_Ejaz

@Mawara_Ejaz

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Promo for Chapter 1- First Meet!

Don't know for how long I kept running and finally I saw a cottage! Light lamps were flickering there that means I can get help all my energy felt drained as I stumbled towards the cottage. Yellow light was creeping out of the window it was the back of the cottage and maybe it was a kitchen window..! I felt my vision blured but I opened my eyes wide trying to shove away the dizziness..! I slowly reached the window all I could see a girl with long black silk hair whose back was towards me working in the kitchen..! I was unable to see her face!

"Beautiful..!" I murmured...

Wow Manik! Great! Here you are fighting with death and still your flirting is on!!!! Shhh! Quiet!

Wild thoughts kept lingering in my head before I tap lightly on the window and fell on the floor with a thud...! Everything was Blank...

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So how's it? Hope you all must be intrigued! I hope I Will be able to put out my best! Pray for me and stay with me! Do drop comments in the box below!

Love, Mawara!

Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago

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Aayushi

@A.Green

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#69

Ohh superb promo!!😳 flirting going on😆

Awaiting the update

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Aakifa Hussain

@Aakifa_Hussain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#70

U'l give flashbacks first!?
cool..!
needed it..
pta to chale hw d story of The Mafia n his Shimmer startd.. :D

Awesm promo..
wil b waitng 4 d chaptr.. :)

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