MaNanSS:The Mafia and His Shimmer LinkToThread2/PG1/25th-March

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Swarna

@manancraze

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Wow...

Totally enjoyed the update...👏.

Manik is really a heartless person... But feeling sorry for him to about his past...

Nandini really a inspiration... Loved her confidence, will power.... Proud of her...😃.

Manik FINALLY has been fallen for " HIS SHIMMER " 😳.

Loved the update...

Cont soon.

Take care...😳

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stars-fireflies

@stars-fireflies

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Awesome update :)

The last bit made me sad :( hope she will gain her eyesight ...

Manik a mafia man.. But he is definitely not bad from heart .. Nandini will definitely change his life :)

Please continue soon ..

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styletheworld

@styletheworld

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Nice concept and amazing chappie

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esh ;)

@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Oh freakkk

Phli meet me hi ye sbb

Goshhh

V awesmmee stryyy yrrr

Doo cntnue soon :)

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Aishwarya

@aishu8794

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Accidental meet... wow!!!

He called Her Shimmer from first itslef..
didnt expected that while reading prologue...

eagerly waiting to see wat happens after knowing abt nandu's blindness

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abhilashaS

@abhilashaS

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

superb di!!...but somewhat sad...how hard life must be for her i can literally feel her pain...any way i know its a short reply but can only manage this much now ...nahi toh mom kachha chaba jayengi as board exams r going on and i have to study for my history exams par phir bhi kya kare aapke stories padhe bina humara guzara hi nahi hota toh issliye currently mein terrace pe chip ke sirf aapke story ka update padhne aye hun so isse pehele ki mein pakdi jaun aur mujhse mera phone chin liya jaye bye...after exams pukka lambe wale comments...sachhi abhilasha promise...anyways thanx for the pm...

love u loads...

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Dua Arafat

@dua_arafat

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Was waiting for this on wattpad...

Will comment after reading... Here only😉

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momy290691

@momy290691

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Wow fully different nd new concept nice update tnxxx

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Antranitisingh

@Antranitisingh

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Bhut cuteu sa chpy tha...
Loved nandini innocence nd her bonding wid rishu...
Nd yeah manik's strong personality was awsm...
MaNan's cnvrstn was damn cool...
Waiting for the next part already...
Update it as fast as you can...
12th board xam k gap me apka story pdhne ka alg hi maja h... Thnq nd gud nyt... :)

Edited by Antranitisingh - 9 years ago