MaNanSS:The Mafia and His Shimmer LinkToThread2/PG1/25th-March - Page 106

No problem. .

Great work!

Would love to read rishus pov

Hey honey pot..!
M soo happy dat I got to read d update..
Otherwise I tou thought 2 din tk wait krna pdega..
I ws dying to read it..!
N d update ws Excellent..

N its soo difficult to choose jst one scene..nearly impossible..!
Soo m nt gonna tell u my favrt scene bt SCENES..! :D

Okay..So 1st one ws wen she said dat sge never complained to god for snatching her vision.. N she wanted to see his face..
Dat ws soo emotional scene.. Bt still loved it..

2. As alwys loved ManRish scenes

3. Dat Money wala scene tou stole my heart..! Fabulous Mao.. Jst dnt hv words to tell gw mch I loved dat scene..

4. 'Kaash Cabir tu Gay hota'- dis cracked me up badly.. 🤣

5. Wen Manik ws begging Rishabh not to tell Nandini abt him.. Ws very touching..

So over all I liked d whole chappy..
Really loved it..
N yeah m ok wid rishabh's Pov..
No problem at all.. :)

So keep writing n keep smiling..:)
Love ya..

YA DI ITS COMPLETELY FINE AS LONG AS U KEEP IT INTERESTING BUT STILL MANAN POVS WILL BE STILL NO. ONE FOR ME HE HE...😃...FOR A CHANGE LETS SEE KI RISHU KE DIMAG MEIN KYA KHICHDI PAKTE HAI...🤣 ...

Suprb part

Nandu ne kitni beautifu way mai apni life ki stry ko
Ek stry ki tarah sunaya

Nandu ne bht pain suffer kiya ha apne childhood mai
Manik nandu ki stry ko sun kar rone lag gy th

Wo nandu ka pain feel kar skta th

Cabir is an awsme frnd
Wo manik ko khush dekhna chahta ha

Jab manik ne kaha kash cabir gay hota wo part bht funny th

Wow manan gf bf bn gy suprb

Oh god nandu ne manik ke liye apni mom ki di hua gold ring ko sell kar diya


Taki manik apna debt chuka sake

Manik kitna guilty feel kar rh th

Shit rishu ko sab pta chal gy

Aur wo nandu ko sab batna chata ha

Manik nandu aur rishab dono se bht pyaar karta ha
Wo dono ko khona ni chahata ha

Lets see ab manik kya karta ha

Mera fav scene ha money wala
Jab nandu ne manik ke liye gold ring sell kar di

Apki stry bilkul bhi boring ni hoti ha
And i think rishab ka pov dena chahiye

Wo nandu se bht pyaar karta ha

Waiting for the nxt part

Love u alot

Simran

Such a fabulous story yar!!!!!keep writing...seriously its awesome

I haven't read ur all stories yet but girl ur this manik took all the points like seriously how do you do that I really love this story...and the scene for today is manik sneaking in her school and asking her to be his girlfriend 😳

I would love to read rishabs POV