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Posted: 9 years ago
Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: ac2000

Cant say liked the promo😭. Enough rona-dhona ho gaya Nandini should take out her anger on Manik but forgive in the end. Please do not take long for that. Stay blessed.😊



You'' be surprised after update that I really didn't take too long (;

Originally posted by: nanoNikki

Why nandu is so hard on Manik...i mean I understand that what Manik did was very wrong...all taht misunderstanding and...whatever but ...i think there is ...anyway continue soon waiting eagerly take care



Glad you like it 😊

Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Huh.

m sad.

Ye promo pdkr to ..
Plss naa..

manik kuch to krega.
sb tthik krne k liyee.
apni kitten ko trust krvane k liyee.


waiting for update. .



You'r e Right ! Definately Kuch To Hoga 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: nanoNikki

Hey...why nandu I so hard on Manik ...i mean ...i completely understand that i completely understand that what Manik did with...her ...bkz of a stupid misunderstanding...its not easy for her to forget her pain...but still ...is there is another ...misunderstanding or something like that bkz of which nandu is behaving that way...I'm just curious...anyway...continue soon waiting very eagerly take care



For That You have to read Next Chapter😊

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

U knw even I dnt believe in 'Let go n forgive' policy..
So Acc. to me Nandu is ri8..
let her show him hw mch hurt she is..
Plz dea make nxt chaptr longer enough to cover all d manaofying session n ofcourse d re-union too..! ;)


I hope you like next chappy and about reunion you have to wait for next chapter😉

Originally posted by: shindesweety

ummm'

i want an update that too long wala
pretty please
and i hope u wont disappoint us
waiting for next update
manik deffo need punishment for not trusting her
but dont keep them away from eachother for too long
i think nandu should teach him a lesson😉
and update thoda jaldi 😃😛


Ok Long Wala Update Done😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Right!

Originally posted by: kavyach

Sad promo...

Nandini is so serious on Manik and she is correct...


Yes She is Right at her Plac😊

Originally posted by: sws2

Ye kyaaa ho gaya??

Poor Manan
Nice promo


ty😊

Originally posted by: za90

Hey loved your story
Read all the parts in one go

Sad promo
Manik has to win nandinis heart

Hope for the best

Waiting



Glad You like the story😊

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazinggg promo
Update soon



Ty😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Sandhya098

Hello there nice teaser ...manik is apologizing... Waiting for the update...

Continue soon...

Please pm me...



Originally posted by: shaan...

Interesting teaser...

Plz continue soon...
Waiting eagerly...
Take care...
Stay blessed...



Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Love the teaser
It feels great when you individually acknowledge our feedback



Ty GUys For LIking this SS soo far😛😛
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: KYYian

yes i liked it..i liked d teaser...kisi ko pasand aaye na aaye..i liked it ..oh gossh i cant see or read manan in pain but

manik deserves this only...

kitten kitten bolke nandini ka dil dukhaya..ab bhugatana to padega hi...

update asap plz



Mujhe Pata Tha koi like kare Ya na Kare tUmhe Jaaror Pasand Aaya!!!😊😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Aakifa_Hussain

Nice song..
My di used 2 watch dis serial- IPKKND
I jst lykd dis song in dat serial..
N I loved it as u used it on MaNan..!
Awesm chappy..
Aww.. Manik is really very guilty..
Plz update d nxt part soon..!



Still In love WIth IPKKND 😛
GladYou like the chapter and Song😊
By the way I like your signature perfectly Suit Me😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: dhillon90

Amazinggg update
Sb manik se naraaz hain...lovd it...continue soon



Originally posted by: gtilwani45

Amazing. .
all r gussa on manik...
n manik is alsoo really very guilty..
Hopee will do something .
really big...
Waiting for next update



Kaam HI aisa Kiya ki naraz and Gussa to hona hi Tha !!!
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: thamannamanan1

actually I missed last 2 parts
toda I read it peacefully

loved druv nandini moments n thr frndship

manik insulting nandini


druv as a true frnd trying to help nandini

even navya also was with nandini

manik want to inform Aliya that druv is cheating on her but Aliya gave him a superb shock

now he wants his kitten back
he want to apologise to her

but she is not ready for it
waiting to c how manik will win back his kitten




You Analysis two part very beautifully.
Happy that you like the update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
OK Guys I'm Back !
Sorry Sorry Sorry But Kya Karu I really don't have a time to Update the chapter.Sacchi.
I know I should Have inform all of you beforehand but Me Na Bhul Gayi ...
Chalo Keeping everything aside I'm here with New Chappy !Hope You all will like it.
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PART 11
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"Nandani are you stupid? What was the need to cry in front of Manik?"Nandani mutter as she walk back and forward in garden.

"You are such a dumb girl. Can't keep your emotion in check?"Nandani scold herself for crying in front of him.

"Remember! You have to become angry on him. But he look too sad and broken and I should ...STOP .Just STOP and remember that you have to be angry with him. He can't just comeback after releasing his mistake and except me to be Ok with it. When he wants he came and talks with you and when he doesn't want then he doesn't even listen a single one word from you."Nandani told herself in a determined voice and keep her face hard.

"Kitten "Manik called Nandani as she has a back to him.

"It's Nandani! "Nandani replied back arrogantly and turn around to face Manik.

"But you're my Kitten."Manik told Nandani while taking a step toward her but stop when she take a step back.

"You lost that right Manik when you thought that I am leading you on."Nandani told Manik in a stern voice and see hurt flash across his eyes.

"I know Kitten and I am sorry for that. I just saw you telling NK that you love him and dump me for him and I just lost it."Manik told Nandani while looking down.

"Oh ya of course your ego was hurt .Right. How can such a useless girl like Nandani can dump great Manik Malhotra "Nandani spat loudly, anger clear in her voice.

Before Nandani could utter anything more Manik voice cut her, "I know I was wrong Kitten. And I know any amount of sorry will not justify what I did that day."Manik spoke guiltily, "I was hurt Kitten. I just love you so much and then seeing you telling that 3 words to Dhruv that I want to listen from you just break my heart and I got angry and leave from there. When you come to my college I want to hug you, Kiss you because I miss you so damn much but then I saw Dhruv and then his concern for you and I again lost it and tell you all that thing which I can never ever dream to tell you."Manik told Nandani and then making eye contact with her cup her face in his hand.

"I am so sorry Kitten; just forgive me one last time."Manik told Nandani tenderly removing her hair which is disturbing the view of her beautiful face.

"Your any justification will not make me to change my mind Manik. You hurt me really bad Manik. I don't know if I can trust you anymore."Nandani told Manik while moving back from him.

"What should I do Kitten to get back your trust. Just Name it and I'll do it."Manik asked Nandani.

Nandani looked thoughtful as she taps her chin and then giving him a serious look utters the words that shock him to the core.

"I want you to stay away from me onwards. I don't want to do anything from you. You're no one to me. We are just Strangers from now onwards. "Nandani spoke loud and clear.

Manik stood there num as Nandani word registered in his mind. His Kitten never wants to see him again. He accepts that he does the mistake, a big sin but his Kitten can't punish him like that buy taking his life away from him.

"Kitten..."Manik stuttered out as tear slip from his eyes.

"Kitten, Please, I'm sorry. "Manik spoke brokenly chanting again and again as he sit on his knees in front of her, tears streaming down from his eyes.

But Nandani didn't give ear to Manik pleading .Her eyes hard and cold as frozen lake take look of Manik and then she walk away leaving Manik completely broken.

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Manik was broken completely. He can't believe that his Kitten want him to stay away from her. He knows that he committed the sin but his Kitten can't Punish him like that.

Manik was still on his knees as tears are continuously from his eyes and uttering again and again that forgive me kitten. Plz.

"What the? I was waiting for you from like half an hour."Nandani voice make Manik look up to find Nandani standing in front of him with a pout on her face.

"Kitten?"Manik speak more like question not believing his eyes that she is standing in front of him.

He gets up and goes close to her.

"Kitten. Did you just call me Kitten?"Nandani exclaimed loudly.

"Ya. I called you that."Manik told little confused not understanding anything.

"Why did you call me that? I am no one kitten."Nandani told him while throwing her hands in the air.

Suddenly Manik mind reply the exact scene which happen on his second day on Job Fair.

"You're no one Kitten. Only mine, cute, little Kitten."Manik told trying to check the water and in reply get the sweet smile from his kitten.

"Kitten you forgive me?"Manik asked slowly and again get sweet smile from Nandani in return.

"What the?"Manik asked shocked as he took in her smiling face.

Nandani give Manik raised eyebrow.

"You forgive me Kitten."Manik state after some time again.

"I already forgive you Manik When I got to know that what make you behave badly with me. I agree that even If I saw you with someone else and that to saying I love you then I will also react in the same way. It's neither your fault nor mine. It's just the circumstance which break us apart."Nandani told Manik and cup his cheek wiping away his tears.

"I'm soo sorry that I make you cry but Next time you would remember that if any misunderstanding comes between us you should first ask me about it before going on any conclusion."Nandani scold him, "I love you and you love me. That's all matter right now."Nandani told Manik and then shyly peck his cheek twice.

Manik look bewildered and shock looking at Nandani who is looking down shyly and then wide grin spread across his face.

"I love you to Kitten. No need to be sorry. I'm jerk and I deserve it for whatever I made you go through."Manik told Nandani while pecking her cheek repeatedly.

"Stop it!"Nandani giggle and push Manik away and run from there. Manik also smile run behind his Kitten.

There laughter echoing all around.

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"Are you a Magician?"Manik asked Nandani when they both are waiting for the Result.

"What?"Nandani asked Manik shockingly.

"Because whenever I look at you, everyone else disappears!"Manik smirk at Nandani.

"Are you high Mr.Manik? "An amused Nandani ask Manik.

"I'm not high; I'm just intoxicated by YOU."Manik replied Nandani cheekily.

"Well then consider Doctor.I advice you."Nandani bit back to Manik.

"My doctor says I'm lacking Vitamin U."Manik told Nandani stressing on U.

Nandani laugh wholeheartedly as she told Manik."No one can win from you"

"You already win my heart Kitten. Is there something more you want to win?"Manik replied Nandani tucking her hair behind the ear.

"I...See result out."Nandani told Manik excitedly and point to the stage where jury and Dhruv is standing.

"Ok guys so here the result."Dhruv told loudly while waving the piece of Paper and crowd cheer loudly.

"So today competition Winner is Nandani Murthy for song I need your love'."NK announce loudly and spotlight fell on Nandani.

Nandani jumped excitedly and engulf Manik in a hug.

Manik hug her back and then Nandani made her way on stage and take a prize from jury and thank them.

As Nandani make her way back to Manik after hugging Dhruv, Navya and Alia she come to him grinning.

"I hope you don't get jealous when I hug dhruv" Nandani asked Manik with the teasing voice.

"Kiitten, you're going to throw that at my face at every chance you got" Manik ask her.

"Yup every chance I got."Nandani reply.

"Do you know what my shirt is made of?"Manik asked Nandani showing her shirt.

"NO."Nandani replied Manik.

"Boyfriend Material."Manik told Nandani grinning like a Cheshire cat

Nandani looked up Manik up and down and then replied, "Really! What a coincidence. My made up of Girlfriend Material."Nandani winked at Manik.

Manik laugh as he pull Nandani toward him and said, "I love you"

Nandani looked up at Manik brown eyes and say the 3 word that he want to listen so badly, "I love you too."

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THE END

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Ok I think I even forget to mention that this will be a last Part.

Ok Sorry Again😛

Next will be Epilogue which I don't know when I will post...

Just Kiddding 😊I'll post the Epilogue before the end of this week.Pakka PRomise.

Love all of your reviews 😊😛

Ty my Cupcakes😊😛😉

Continue showering your love on this SS👏😊😛

Peace Out

Ana

Edited by AnnaSyed - 9 years ago

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