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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thank you so much friends for liking this scary manan ts...
here is the last part...
happy reading...

Marriage with Scary ATMA

CHAPTER 3

Part A

FLASHBACK

When manik was pursuing his masters in music from a very famous Space Music Academy'. He was a very famous on those days also. At that time soha, one of his friends proposed her. But he denied saying that he didn't feel anything for her. But soha was kind of obsessed with him so she didn't understand his point. She kept on pleading him but when manik didn't gave any budge to her pleading, she told her father who was a trustee of that college. And then soha's father came to manik and told him something which was a shock for him.

Manik still remember that helpless father's words. He told him "Hello beta. I know you are fed up of my daughter. But I am also helpless in front of her. Actually she is obsessed with you and I need your help to send her to a mental asylum. Soha is suffering from mental disorder. But she is not ready to leave from here if you can help me then it will be easy for me to send her there."

Next day as per soha's father's request manik met soha and said "I know you love me. And I love you too and I will also merry you if you go where your father is sending you." And being a mentally sick person she become happy with manik's words and happily agreed to go to asylum.

But as destiny was planning something else, when she was going to asylum, she met with an accident and died on the spot. Next day manik herd about her death he felt bad about her.

FLASHBACK END

Then as day passed he forgot that incident. But today after hearing this name again he got quick flashback about whole incident. He had only tell cabir about this. So cabir also become shocked with her name and that too from nandini's mouth.


Cabir somehow composed himself and muttered under his breath "Lekin... Soha to mar chuki hei?" And listening his words Nandini again smiled evilly still hanging to the wall and said in a harsh tone "Lekin mei wapis ayi. Mere manik se shadi karne k liye. Aur dekho hamari shadi bhi ho gayi."

While this time, that panditji was chanting some mantras holding a Holly water' and then he suddenly throw that upwards and as soon as it touched her body she screamed and shouted furiously "Ahhh... Mai wapis aungi... tuje chhodungi nahi mei..."

And with this a black shadow came out of nandini's body and she fell on bed. That black shadow disappear in air through the window. All run towards nandini, she screamed in horror "Manikkk..."

Manik immediately took her in his arms consoling her "Shh... shh... You are okay... I'm here jaan..." But she was so afraid what just happened with her that she is not able to hear his words. She was continuously saying amongst her tears "Ma... manik... I was there..." She point her hand toward the ceiling and said "Manik.. How can I... how can I go there up? Mani... muje kya huwa hei manik please tell me..."

Manik took her in a bone crushing hug and said "Shh... tumhe kuchh nahi huwa hei nandini..." then he said in determined tone "And I promise mei tumhe kuchh hone nahi dunga. Nandini Promis." She became relaxed with his consoling words and asked "Will we be together manik? Forener?" He said looking deep in her eyes "We will always be together nadini. Forever. Humesha."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Marriage with Scary ATMA

CHAPTER 3

Part B

Manik then made her lie down on bed and make her sleep patting her head. And soon she fell asleep with her unconscious state. Then manik saw that Cavya is discussing something with panditji sitting in the lounge area of room. He came towards them and asked painfully "Kya hogaya hei meri nandini ko?"

Cabir make him sit beside him and then panditji started "Dekhiye... muje lagta hei ki jab apki shadi huyi nandini k sath tab soha ki ATMA nandini k sharir mei moujud thi." He then look towards cabir and said "Jeiseki apne bataya cabirji, marne se pehle soha manik se shadi krna chahti thi aur tab uski ye ichha puri nahi huyi. Isliye wo marne k bad bhi wapis ayi jab manik ki shadi ho rahi thi. Usne manik ke sath shadi Karli aur jab ki usko mare huye char saal ho chuke hei to muje lagta hei ki wo kafi shaktishali ATMA hei isliye hi to wo nandini ko kuchh bhulne nahi de rahi hei."

He then hand over a holly thread in manik's hand and said "Ye ap nandini k hath me bandh dijiye. Jab tak ye dhaga uske hathme rahega tab tak use kuchh nahi hoga." Then he said in a little scared tone "Dekhiye jaha tak muje pata hei agar koi ATMA kisi insan k sath saat phere leti hei to wo usko kabhi nahi chhodti. Lekin firbhi mei apne guruji se bat karunga. Agar wo koi samadhan nikal paye to mei apko zaroor bataunga. Iske alawa abhi hum kuchh nahi kar sakte."

Saying this he left leaving a horrified navya, tensed cabir and an expressionless manik behind. But when Cavya look at manik's face navya said with concern "Manik tum..." but manik said cutting her words in between "Tum dono jau... Guestroom room me jakar so jao. Mei nandini k sath hu."

He then came towards nandini and tied the thread' on her wrist. Cabir came from behind and kept his hand on his shoulder saying "Sab thik ho jayega manik..." then she and navya went out of the room and manik held nandini tightly in his arms.

Next Morning

Manik woke up due to sun rays falling on his face through the open window and saw nandini sleeping hugging him tightly. He finally sighed in relief. As he thought that after that thread on nadini's hand, she didn't get affected by soha's ATMA.

He was looking at her when she woke up and said "Manik..." and listening her tone he understood that she is still disturbed with last night's incidents and want to talk about it so he instantly said "Nandini... you don't need to say something. I know what you wanna ask. So let me tell you ki ab tumhe kuchh nahi hoga."

He then held her wrist and show her thread' and said "Ye thread panditji ne diya hei. Use tum please kabhi mat nikalna." Then he told her about soha's incident and then look at her guiltily and continue "I am sorry nandini. tumhe meri wajah se ye sab jelna pada. I don't..." but nandini put her finger on his lips stopping him to say further and then said "I love you manik." Manik rplied in no time "I love you more jaan."

The day passed like this. Manik took care of nandini and her wounds which she gets by her own nails and hands. And to their good luck other two days also passed like this. And they thought that now soha's ATMA wouldn't bother them because of holly thread'. But they were wrong. Totally wrong.

It's been two weeks of their marriage and now they are happy that soha's ATMA is not bothering them and they have almost forgot about their first night incident. Now manik is sitting in hall and preparing to go to his office after two weeks. And nandini is in kitchen.

Manik was about to call nandini when he heard some voices of broken glasses from kitchen. He run towards kitchen and what he saw made him scare like hell. Nandini was about to cut her hand with the knife.


He run towards her and jerking her hand away, causing knife to fell down. He immediately hugged her tightly being scared. While she was just standing there doing nothing. He then hold her and shouted "nandini... tum kya kar rahi thi?"

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Marriage with Scary ATMA

CHAPTER 3

Part C

But instead of nandini he heard soha's annoyed voice "Manik... mei nandini nahi. Tumhari soha hu." But listing her voice manik step backwards looking her and uttered in shock "Nandini tum..."

But she became furious and shouted angrily "Mene kaha na me soha hu." Then manik look at her wrist and was the thread' is not in her wrist. And he understood that soha is again back. He instantly came out before she could do something and lock the kitchen.

He call Cavya and inform them to come with panditji ASAP. They reached there in no time and this time guruji is also came with that panditji. Manik explain everything to them and they came towards kitchen and as soon as they enter they saw nandini is eating chicken with her both hands like a maniac.

Manik, navya and cabir was in shock to see her like that as nandini is pure vegetarian. She never ate nonvage in her whole life and today she is having chicken. But as soon as her eyes fell on them she smiled evilly towards them and ran towards hall area.

As soon as she came in hall guruji throw some holly ash' towards her. It seems it didn't affect her a bit. She only became more furious and shouted angrily running towards upstairs "Kuchh nahi hoga muje. Suna tune... kuchh bhi nahi... hahaha..."

Till the time manik and cavya is also in hall and watching her. Manik's face was expressionless seeing his wife in such pathetic condition. And he was so helpless that he couldn't do anything. He was just standing there watching her.

Suddenly that guruji again try to throw ash towards her but he couldn't. Because she grab that guruji's neck with her one hand with so much of furious eyes and throw him towards wall. He fell down tribally and hurt his head. He became half conscious. Everyone rush towards him when they heard her voice...


She was climbing the pillar in super speed. Everyone's face became horrified as well as shocked. But before they could react anything, she roared like hungry tigress in her ever scary tone "chale jao sab yaha se, ye ghar sirf mera aur mere manik ka hei. Jao sab yaha se."

Everyone started to walk backwards showing her horrific acts. While manik somehow gathered himself and goes near her. He uttered some words lovingly which were shocked for everyone "Soha..." And as soon as she listen him, her facial expression changed and she immediately came towards him and stood in front of him and said dreamily "Manik... mei soha hu. Tumhari soha..."

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Marriage with Scary ATMA

CHAPTER 3

Part D

Manik thought of playing with her, that's why he called her lovingly and again said in same tone "Soha, hum hamare kamre me chalet hei. Muje tumse koi bat krni hei." Saying this he held her hand and started to walk towards his room. And soon as they reached there, manik pushed her inside with his full strength and lock the door.

But he had it enough now. Now he can't bear more pain. He just fell down on the floor palming his pain with the immense pain in his heart due to his nandini's this condition. But cabir hug him and said "Tumne bilkul thik kiya manik." Navya also set besides him and said "Nandini bilkul thik hojayegi manik. Don't worry."

Then she continue "Us guruji ko chot lagi isliye wo dono chale gaye. Lekinn jate jate usne ek akhari upay bataya hei." Manik look at her to continue and she tell what guruji told then again said "Manik... iske liye tumhe bahot hi prepare rehna padega. You have to be so so strong manik. Ho sakata hei ye karte huye tumhe pehle nandini ko hurt karna pade par agar tum is kam me successful huye to soha hamesa ke liye tum dono ka pecha chod degi."

And manik said "Me ye karunga navya. Aur me apni nandini ko wapis abhi launga." He stands up and told cabir to prepare for everything ASAP in garden and he went inside his room.


He saw she was sitting in corner hugging his knees and as soon as she heard his footsteps, she look upwards at him very furiously but manik said in loving convincing tone "Soha... baby tumhare liyeek surprise hei mere pas. Garden mei chalo."

And listening his loving tone she melted and said "Muje surprise bahot pasand hei. Chalo chalo..." manik came out in the garden holding her hand and there he saw the set up.


There was a fire of sat pheras. As soon as she saw this she tried to escape but she couldn't free herself and as manik was wearing a holly thread' in his hands and he grabbed her hand with his that hand and dragged her towards fire.

But this all the time she was screaming in fear "chhodo muje manik... mei nandini ko bahot hurt karungi." Saying this she started to scratch her own face with her free hand. Manik's heart was bleeding seeing his life in such condition but he was determined to save her so he kept on dragging her towards fire.

He again took sat pheras' with soha's ATMA but this time anticlockwise as per guruji's instruction. And as soon as this sat pheras' ended, they saw a black shadow coming out of nandini's body. But before it goes away, cabir and navya were standing there with panditjis. Panditji was holding a glass jar.

Manik made nandini wear a holly thread' and gathered her half-conscious body in his strong arms.

While panditji chant some mantras and that black shadow goes inside jar, and he close that jar with some wooden piece. Then he look at everyone and said "Ab soha ki ATMA hamari ked mei hei. Aur jesehi tum nandini k sath wapis sat phere' le longe ye tumhe kabhi paresan nahi kar payegi."

Manik pick up nandini in his arms and take sat pheras' with her again. And then that panditji left. While cabir and navya came towards them and cabir said "Ab sab thik ho gaya manik." Navya also said with happy tears in her eyes "Han... ab hamari nandu bilkul thik hei."

But manik smiled faintly and walk in the mansion picking nanidni in his arms. While nandini was gaining her conscious back. He place her on bed and wipe the blood from her face and she said "I love you manik..."

And listening her words as if his all stress flew away and he smiled happily and said "I love you too nandini... hum jeet gaye... humara pyar jeet gaya nandini..." saying this he took her in bone crushing hug and she also reciprocated with same intensity.

After that day soha's ATMA never came again to bother them and MANAN live happily ever after with their friends.

THE END

so finally a horror story ended...

i tried my best to give proper end but if there is mistake then pardon me friends...😊


Lots of Love

NISHU

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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Scary update
Nandu was hurt
But now Soha is gone
Loved the ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
scary update..
soha gone forever..

loved ur ts...👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Wow. . Nyc ending..
Really enjoyed it
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow awesome update..
Finally all is well the ends well...
Finally the soha is out...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing chappy
At last that soha is out
poor manan and especially nandu had to face alot coz of her
but all well if ends well
but the ts was awesome
do write more
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awsme superb ending manik is soo brave soha chale gae

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