MANAN FS...and I fell in love with a Bar tender EPILOGUE Pg~25

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nita24

@nita24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Hey lovely story
Happy ending
Thanks tc

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: UggliBuggli

You wrote half story!! 😆
You will the first person comment to their story!🤣
umm!!🤔
Maine bhi likha hai!😊
Meri tareef kalo!!😆
pleachjjj!!😃

Okay now that you are insisting so much..😉

i am praising you okay dont please me😛

Firstly i liked the concept of the story..

all thanks to your Grandfather😊👏

now coming to the update i always laughed and giggled a bit whenever there is a conversation between nandu's heart and mind..

Manik also has that lost it kinda disorder..

great! nanu ko maine kitna bura bataya na..

but u made anndu so sweet and determined to get manik in her life..

harshad nalayak kahi ka..

but bhai and all from his mouth sounds so alien..

ye nandu k saath reh kar dadu and manik to learned to play pranks kya..??

ese bimar hone ka prank kon krta haii..??

except for you😆😆

manik got to run after his lady love..

that jerk deserves it haina..?

but never mind all is well that ends well.😊😃

you really did justice to the story..

kudos to you my pranky..

Edited by Drashtiii - 9 years ago

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

awesome
amazing
fab end👏
nanaji made nandini kaam wali bai...just to see whether she loves manik or not
but he too was hurted giving his own grand daughter such work😔
finally nandini's patience and hardwork piad off😛
naanu accepted their relation😃
harshad was way too good than real harshad😆
and dadaji's prank😲
he knows his friend very well
but that prank rewarded manik with a tight slap🤣
poor boy😆
finally manan are together

thanks for pm dear
thanks for writing such beautiful story uggli
will miss you alot dear
pls try to give epilogue for this..pljjj

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ky2manan

@ky2manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

So finally manan are together
Nandini worked as a servant to prove her love for him
Loved manan moments
Nandu's dada is such a prankster
Her nana accepted her
Manik got a tight slap
Please give epilogue
Loved the story

Edited by ky2manan - 9 years ago

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shaan...

@shaan...

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Superb update...

Luved it...

Plz come up wid such stories soon...

Will b waiting eagerly...

Take care...

Stay blessed...

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anjali

@purswani50

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#166

hey! ..
Hwz u ... I know I m late ..plz maaf kar do..
Mje Sirf thoda sa Tim Mila h as in break from exams schedule so comment kr pa rhi hu ...
soon I will on other updates to...
U r seriously A Superstar n A Marvelous writer...
All d best for ur future n CA (DREAM)...😉

Now coming to d update...
Update was FABULOUS N MIND BLOWING ... LIKE ALWAYS... ...
Finally manan r together... n confessed Der love ...
Nanu' s testing exam of nandini for manik was difficult... but she did it... N love manik n dadu yr .. they helped her...
Harshad test was also good...
nanu is very much impressd wid nandini...

Hahaha my favorite part MANIK GOT A SLAP THAT TO FROM NANDINI Hehehe... 🤣 ...

Then d HAPPY ENDING ...
Thanks for such a beautiful n funny story...
loved it...

stay happy ...
stay blessed...
Thanks for d pm...
N will b back soon to comment on ur other updates too...
love u... 🥺

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1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: purswani50
hey! ..
Hwz u ... I know I m late ..plz maaf kar do..

Jeeksss!!
I am such a bad person.
I am reading your comment now!
I am sorry for late reply!

Mje Sirf thoda sa Tim Mila h as in break from exams schedule so comment kr pa rhi hu ...
soon I will on other updates to...
It fine dear!

U r seriously A Superstar n A Marvelous writer...
Thank you!
All d best for ur future n CA (DREAM)...😉
Thank you so much! :*

Now coming to d update...
Update was FABULOUS N MIND BLOWING ... LIKE ALWAYS... ...
Finally manan r together... n confessed Der love ...
Nanu' s testing exam of nandini for manik was difficult... but she did it... N love manik n dadu yr .. they helped her...
Harshad test was also good...
nanu is very much impressd wid nandini...
:* :* :* :* :* :*

Hahaha my favorite part MANIK GOT A SLAP THAT TO FROM NANDINI Hehehe... 🤣 ...
That idiot deserved! Who pulls such stupid pranks excluding me!😛😛

Then d HAPPY ENDING ...
Thanks for such a beautiful n funny story...
loved it...
😃

stay happy ...
stay blessed...
Thanks for d pm...
N will b back soon to comment on ur other updates too...
STAY BLESSED DEAR!
love u... 🥺
LOVE YOU TOO