Manan SS: My asylum is in your arms.

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Posted: 9 years ago
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PROLOGUE:


'Who said I love you, Nandini?' his words stabbed my heart. I could feel my heart breaking into pieces. I could feel myself breaking. I know I have done a mistake but I don't feel that I deserve to be punished this hard. This is hell. I don't deserve hell, I believe.
'Who said that I love you?' I split out the wrong words but I just couldn't break, I couldn't show him I am weak, I couldn't. 'It's not that I am saying that I hate you or something. Love is really deep and intense, it's a pure feeling. I thoroughly believe that I got feelings for you. I like you a lot. I know I have done a mistake but you got to trust me man.' I was cutted by Manik's loud voice, "TRUST? IS NANDINI MURTHY TALKING ABOUT TRUST? WHERE THE HELL WAS IT WHEN YOU SAID THAT I, MANIK MALOTHRA MURDERED SOHA?' Tears welled up in his eyes, he was hurt deeply and I was the reason behind it. 'Manik look I am sorry let's not mess things up it's going on the wrong way. Who said I love you and all are all wrong words that we are using right now. Just listen to me please! I got confused by the video I know I am at fault. I am sorry please.' I noticed myself begging for his forgiveness. I know I was at fault but not that much because I was being played but still that strong Nandini fell weak today. She needs Manik now. 'Look Nandini I don't want to listen anything just leave. LEAVE MY LIFE.' He yelled at me. He was shouting but I could see that how much it hurt him to say. I could see it in his eyes. I know he doesn't mean any of it but he said it. And my heart knows the truth but my mind overpowered it. I don't know how I got so angry but yelled back at him, 'LEAVE YOUR LIFE? MANIK YOU BETTER LEAVE MY LIFE. AFTER YOU HAVE COME I GOT INTO SO MANY TROUBLES, SO MANY. I NEVER COMPLAINED I KEPT ON LOVING YOU. LOVE YOU? HAHA! SEE WHAT TIMING. NOW REALIZATION HIT ME. OKAY, SO MANIK MALOTHRA NANDINI MURTHY IS IN LOVE FINALLY. I LOVE YOU MANIK. I DO. ANYWAYS, YOU KNOW WHAT? BYE! BYE FOREVER!' I spoke rubbish because of my anger. this anger is real shit. 'I don't care Nandini. Bye! FOREVER! Oh yeah, NANDINI MURTHY HAPPY VALENTINES DAY!' Manik's voice was cold. He was more hurt with my words. With that we both parted and went into opposite directions. Tears welled in both our eyes but we both controlled it. We weren't vulnerable. We just couldn't say that we both need each other to heal us. We were each other's wounds and also medicines.



So let's see what is written in Manik and Nandini's love story. To know more, keep liking and commenting.

So hey peoples. I am Shrabasty. This is my first attempt of writing a story kindly leave your opinions here about the story here. Thank you!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice concept plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome prologue...
Sounds interesting...
Wud luv 2 read more...
Plz continue soon...
Take care...
Stay blessed...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey! I just thought about the story and then I realize that I cannot finish it in a shot and thyere are more things that should be cleared. Felt like writing a fanfic and imagine Manik through it. So yeah here I go. I changed the name of the topic too. Please bear with my bad grammar it's actually bad and I also write bad.
Anyways, thank you lovely people. It really made me happy! thank youu! Will try to continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter 1:


'Okay I'm sorry toh babu.' No Manik, for you our first Valentines was a disaster. I so hate you for that.' I pouted and complained like a baby. I was so upset about the fact that our first Valentines were so bad unlike other couples. They did so much fun, their one was romantic and our one was a break up day! Not break up actually because we weren't on a relationship but we fought like we are rivals since birth. 'I'm sorry toh babu, I promise this coming Valentine will be very romantic and unique. I know the last Valentine was a blunder too since our exams screwed it.' Manik made a grumpy face while saying this to me. My concentration went to his cuteness from this topic. Manik was upset too because he also never wanted us to fight. Even now after being in a relationship for 1.5 years, he is still scared of fighting with me because our fights aren't small at all. Our egos always screw it and make it a large fight. He came close to my ears and confessed truly, 'ILOVEYOU!' I straight looked into his eyes and made an eye contact. His eyes said a lot to me that moment. He didn't want to me raise this topic as it brings bad memories and those pain with it. Those days when we didn't talk and how it killed both us. How we ignored, how we were close but yet far away from each other. We understood each other's value in those days; we realized our love for each other. He looked into my eyes and continued 'The only thing that matter Nandini is us being together not this Valentine day. You know I don't believe in them, you should express your love everyday not only on this particular day. Now please can we not talk about this and concentrate on Mrs. Smith's lecture now' with that he looked at the front and pretended listening to Mrs.Smith. I know he was hurt and was trying to look at me because I will read his eyes and those thousand emotions that he is hiding from me. He always tried his best not to fight with me because our fights were always extreme; he was scared of losing me. I could see through the corner that tears welled up in his eyes. I scanned the room and then I realized we were on our English class and me and Manik were sitting at the back. I saw my friends at the front and Mrs.Smith our language teacher blabbering something which I couldn't catch up since I was busy complaining Manik. The time Mrs.Smith move her head on another direction I took the chance, went close to Manik's face and kissed him on the side of his forehead murmuring 'ILOVEYOU' to him. I could see he was a bit relaxed with my sudden confession. I slipped my hand at the down of the table and hold his. I entwined our hands. He tightened his grip signaling me that he will never leave my side. I love him so much! It's been 2 years of that Valentine incident. We didn't talk for about 3 months and 10 days. We realized a lot, faced a lot in that period. Our worst days were finally over when Manik finally forgave me and proposed me in the examination hall. It was very embarrassing yet very cute. He just ran to me hugged me tight and cried. He kneeled down breaking the hug and said, 'I am sorry but I couldn't control. Nandini, I love you. I just can't leave without you. I mean it because I just couldn't stay alive these past months. It was really hard breathing without you. You are my heartbeat I realized it when you left me actually we both left each other that time my heart stopped beating. Trust me. I know this is so weird proposing in this examination hall in front of everyone but I couldn't control anymore. I love you. I love you so much.' Tears welled up in my eyes and I instantly uttered, 'I LOVE YOU MORE MANIK' and hugged him really really tight. I mumbled while hugging him 'Thank you for this embarrassing proposal Manik Malothra. Don't fight with me again and I'll try not to any more crime onwards. I love you.' I tightened the hug after saying this. I felt some droplets of tears on my cheeks that is the time when I realized that I also cried while hugging him. I remember those claps and blessing that were showered to us that day! Our friends were happier than us. They literally offered treat to all of the college students. With that our journey of love started. I'm happy that we are still going strong and it feels good to be everyone's favorite couple and I also feel proud to Manik's girlfriend. I actually love when I see girls getting jealous of me since they had to no chance being an inch close to him. I couldn't even allow. Please! He is my boyfriend. He is mine. With the slides of thoughts I didn't realize when the class came to an end and the bell rang. Mrs. Smith bid bye to us and went out. Me and Manik went out of the class holding hands and our friends at the back following us.



Ignore my bad writing and enjoy! Characters will be explained further in the story! Thank you! Keep your comments and likes going with the opinions.

Edited by Boo131 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome chapter
proposal in examination hall!!!!! who does that????
bt we cant forget he is a malhotra that also manik malhotra...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update

Superb update



Fab update



Loved it



Loved the update



Waiting for the next part



Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice start..
PM me too 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey that was awesome😃 loved it to the moon and back I really liked the concept to the core n pm me too 😛 do continue soon will be eagerly waiting for next update 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice story

Keep writing

Thanks

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