#4 Vivah MaNan FF/PART 23A-PG 118/ Thread 5 link PG 1

First Previous

Page

Next Last

Frequent Posters

Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Very very interesting update. .

Both know each other pain. ..

Thanks for sharing this awesome update.

Stay blessed dear

Thanks.

Quote

tas456

@tas456

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Awesome update dear

Loved it completely

Take care and stay blessed

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

MaNan_Angel

@MaNan_Angel

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: tas456
Awesome update dear
Loved it completely
Take care and stay blessed

Ty... 😃

Quote

naziasiddiqui

@naziasiddiqui

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#234

awsmmm

superbbb

fab update

loved it very much

cont soon

waiting

Quote

MaNan_Angel

@MaNan_Angel

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: aishaph
interesting promo
update soon

Dear i already updated the part, you can see it on page 30.. 😊

Quote

MaNan_Angel

@MaNan_Angel

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#236

Originally posted by: naziasiddiqui
awsmmm

superbbb

fab update

loved it very much

cont soon

waiting

Thank you so much

Quote

MaNan_Angel

@MaNan_Angel

Voyager

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: Boomchelesa
Miss toh kiya...wo bhi bahot saara..!!! But finally aap aayi toh... 😳 Everyday in a hope ki aaj ko pakka update milega...!! But its okay i understand..!! & this Update was superrbb..!!!

I m loving the bond which u r creating btw both of them...!!! All tht manik coming back & wanting a hug from nandu...& then his promise for making their 1st kiss memorable... These all looks so much pure..!! Waise aur kitna wait karna hai for the kiss to happen..!!!! 😛

Vulnerable manik is intresting to see...but i want to see manik too helping nandini in her problems..apart from her parents truama...it wud b really intresting..!!

Waise loving this career oreinted track...!! And the last word..lost family.. 😭 Now thts tragic..!!! Keep writing UPDATE SOON..!!!

God bless u

Thank you so much dear...

Quote

prathyushaeluri

@prathyushaeluri

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#238

Loved d update

And it was superb

Can't see manik in such a state

It was Beautifully penned

Continue soon

Quote

archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#239

Awesome update. Nandini's restlessness and manik's helpless state were well penned. Manan's pov was fabulous. Way nandini consoled manik was phenomenal. Hug was amazing. Nandini know how to calm manik.last part was shocking. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. This story is getting interesting. Love to read further

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊