MaNan SS :Cabirmon With Manan Episode 3 pg-4 - Page 3

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Wow</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">What a concept yaar</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">I just love it</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">It's like treat to read</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">For that u deserve</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Much more👏👏👏</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Continue soonnnish</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Love you</font>

<font color="#cc0000" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="5">Diya😛</font>

Thanks for ur precious comments...

Originally posted by: Prachi55

i mean seriously...what a concept... what an idea sirji

Thank you so much behalf of beauty idea uska tha main toh only duologue likh rehi hu...

Originally posted by: Sjmanan

Amazing story...loved the concept!!

Just one correction...its not yumiko its jaico!! actually my bro watches so i know...

And are you a rajasthani??

Thanks.
I will change this name..
I am bengali...

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Loved it. Wow nandini is going to past to know what happened with manik.nandini's painful state after seeing wounded manik was well penned. Continue soon.thanks for pm

Keep writing

Stay blessed😊

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{Recap - Jab Nandini aur Aliya Manik ko injured halat main ghar le kr aye tab Cabir bahot darr gaya.. Cabir ne Nandini aur Aliya se pucha but wo kuch nahi bata PAYE ke Manik injured kaise hua..}

Abhi dekhiye aaj ka Episode 3

Tab...

Cabir ne apne future pocket se EYE ZARA SUNGLASSES nikala.. Uske baad Cabir ne wo glasses Nandini aur Aliya ko vi diye.. Fir sab ne wo glasses pehenke dekha..

Flashback :

Jab Manik Aliya ke pass baitha tab Harshad aur Aryamaan eke dusre se kuch baat kar rahe the..

Harshad - so Arymaan o done raha
Aryaman - bilkul harshad done dona done'''''

Teacher - Manik thodi mehrbani mujhe pe karo ge
Manik - ji sir kya karna hai
Teacher - apni test papers apne pass le jaoge o kya hai na itne jada number aye hai o bhari ho gaya hai mujhse nehi hil raha hai

Manik - yes sir [manik reply with a sad face]

Then manik test paper lene jata hi hai...
Manik hai & e story doreamon ki copy hai toh kuch toh galat hogai na

Aryamaan ne apne pair lagake Manik ko gira deta hai aur sab log hasne lagte hai..

S1- o dekho manik gira
S2- abhi toh start kiya dekhna pure din mein kitni bae girta hai... ''''
S3 - Manik ka kuch nehi ho sakta hi hi hi

Teacher - class chup ho jao. Manik aaj hi papers loge or 2-3 din lag jayegi

Fir Manik teacher ke pass jata hai aur apna paper leke Jane he wala hota hai tabhi

teacher-manik dekho phir itni kaam marks kya hoga tumhara manik kab samjho ge.
Manik all time kaise kaise itni kaam marks lana mange karte ho hume bhi toh bolo...

.. Firse sab log uspe hasne lagte hai.. Fir teacher Ek Ek karke sabko paper date hai... Nandini class main 3rd aati hai.. Aur Dhruv second ata hai.. Sab ke papers dene ke baad bhi teacher Aryamaan ka paper nahi dete hai.. Aur nahi first student ka naam batate hai..

At Halftime :

In Play Ground

Manik- nandini kya tum mere sath lunch karoge..

Nandini - yes manik. Maine aaj fruit cake layi hu or tum.

Manik - capsicum ka paratha with brinjal manchurian mom ne aaj phir experiment kiya hai..

Nandini- chalo test karte hai

Manik aur Nandini bench pe baith ke apna lunch share karte hai..

Tabhi waha pe Harshad aur Aryamaan waha pe aate hai aur
Harshad - Nandini tumhe Aliya bula rahi hai...

Aryaman - jaldi jao usse kuch important kaam hai...
Nandini - ok bye manik main thodi der baad ati hu...
Nandini ke Jane baad wo Manik ka Lunch box niche gira dete hai..
Manik pov
Thank god aaj mujhe iss food se bachane k liye...
POV end
Manik- harshad kaya kiya Harshad????
Aryaman - harshad se reason pucha harshad dekho manik ka himmat kitni ho gaya hai

Harshad - toh Arymaan manik ko itna saja de de...
tab Harshad Aur Aryamaan usko bahot maarte hai.. Aur jab Manik niche gir jata hai tab Harshad usse bolta hai..
"Aaj ke baad agar meri behen ke was paas bhi dikhe toh Jaan se maar dunga.."
Aur fir wo waha se chalo jate hai..

Flashback end

Yeh sab dekhne ke baad Cabir, Nandini aur Aliya teeno ko bahot gussa aaya hai..

Aliya- Bhai aapne e tik nehi kiya. Main apko kabhi maaf nahi karungi... Main mom ko sab bol dungi...

Nandini- Harshad & Arymaan tum dono ne e tik nehi kiya. Dekha cabir manik ko harshad & Arymaan ne kaise mara. Cabir hume kuch karna chaiye

Cabir - Aliya tum apni mom ko kuch nehi bolna, nandini tum chinta maat karo main sab tik kar dunga main saza dunga Harshad & Arymaan ko...

Scene Change :
Khurana House

Ting tong.. Ting tong .. Doorbell bajta hai..

Rose apne servants pe chillati hai door open karne ke liye.. But koi nhi hota hai toh wo khud hi chalo jati hai door open karne ke liye..

Rose pov
Oh god kitna kaam karna parta hai abhi maine
nail ' '''''color lagaya or door bhi khona hai. Sare servants kaam k time gayeb ho jata hai.
Save me god meri nail color kharap na ho jaye...

Aur jaise he wo door ka knob turn karti hai carpet se uska heel atak jata hai aur wo bas girne he wali hoti hai tabhi door open hota hai aur koi usko hold kar leta hai..
Jab person usko dekhta hai to bas dekhte he reh jata hai.. They shared an eyelock..

{Bg - Tuje dekha toh yeh jana sanam
Pyaar hota hai diwana sanam}

Fir wo person Rose ko Stand karne main help karta hai.. Aur
Rose- who r u?

Person-"Hi I'm Trilok Prasad Chourasiya.. Main aapke bete Aryamaan ka principal hu..

Rose bahot seductive tarah se wink karke bolti hai..

I'm Rose"

"Hi Tiluka, tilai oh kitna mushkil name hai main aapko Tiluji bolu plzzz.

Tilu- as ur wish rose jiii

Name sun k hi Tilu chala jata hai dream land
{bg- Koi mil gaya
Koi mil gaya
Mera dil gaya }
(Tilu dreamland- Rose ek red short'''' dress pe Rani ki tarah guitar k sath ati hai and Tilu uske sath dance karta hai)

Rose - Tilu ji kaha kho gaye ayi na but arya baby toh frnds k sath playground gaya hai

Yeh sune Tilu uthke Jane wala hota hai tabhi Rose uska haath pakad leti hai..

Bolo bolo kaisi hai Episode 3...
#bena [beauty & Purna] comments k liye wait kar rehe hai...
Jaldi jaldi bolo

hehe... 😃

Nice update.

likee it .
its really awesome..

waiting for next update

Awesome update. Flashback was well penned. Manik was humiliated because of harshad and aryaman. Hope cabir teaches them right lesson.eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm

Nice update...

Amazing update..