MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04)

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mona

@cmamona

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Hey
Firstly...
Awsmstic chappy...
It blow my mind like where she is going she havnt slept for regular two days...
Is she going to have a problem if insomnia...

Manik is just a admirer or anything else...
I loved this suspense...
I m on the edge...
What's gonna happen next...
Is suvi going to play a big role in nandu's life and make her like this...
She us behaving odd cz of her craziness...

I m so excited to read next part...
But u enjoy ur family time...
And about the concept its mind blowing
Cz its different its just not a simple dreamy love story but a true story...
And I love it...
I guess ppl took tym to grasp the fact but I m sure they gonna come around eventually...
And I m toh gonna be there on every step...

Keep smiling
stay blessed

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Dhingli44

@Dhingli44

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Don't deserve it 😡 Aisa kyu bola..
This is the most unique story in the forum..never ever read concept and you say so!
People are mad 😕

Coming to the update..
Well..what to say.
Nandu seemed like a maniac.
Use stationery shop lagani thi kya..itna sab le liya 😆 Lol lame*
And I guess that HIM was Manik.
Maybe in Cochin they were together.
She rambled on for 42 pages...nd had that audacity to post it to.😲 I mean..anybody would think of her like a fool..but it was her best friend na. 😛 Allowed hai to be crazy.
And she started sobbing remembering him..that was cute.And Oh.Ok wala scene bhi..😛
Like really..this is very captivating.
Im so into it.N thanks to you u give quick updates 😛
Coming to Manik..when he was there I guess he should have met her.
But then it's ok..he should not let that intern of his slog n slouch 😉
Ab koi Manik ne kevanu k Nandu is also missing him (if only HIM is him) 😆
Can't wait to read further..
Sorry for being late.

Ab nai bolna ki this is not for the forum and blah bla.. 🤢
Okay!!
Thanks for the PM
😊

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pagolmeye

@pagolmeye

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

This story is just amazing amazing amaaazziinngg
Do continue. Already loving it. And I am sure that HIM is Manik

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Okay,

Those who wont PM plz Buddy me

i will add you and will Pm you.

And ya those who are expecting mushy mushy Manan Plz stay away as it is still after 10 or so updates.

I need to describe shades of Nandini and her changes..

this isn't a joke or a mere love story it is about hope and how determination can overcome even destiny.

And one more thing

I dont know how to delete the post i mean this thread.?

Plz do let me know.

Love

Drashti

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zara2124

@zara2124

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Your writing is absolutely brilliant.. infact i really dnt know how to put forward how i feel right now.. m speechless.. i hvnt read any story on IF which has so much depth and clarity..

The way u r wrting nandini s mental turmoil ( i dunno whether its the right word though ) , its brillant .. the things goin on in her mind n her actions , that insane energy that she has right now .. .. i feel like , boom.. she s gonna snap right now.. any moment ..reading the way u have described her state.. whats usually goes on n patients mind.. im telling you , u have nailed it wid absolute perfection..

Waiting to knw wat wud b maniks reaction on getting 2 knw abt nandini s condition..

Lpve reading it..

Ps : r u sending out pms ?? If so please send me too.. i would love to read tis story.. :)

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Pooja2899

@Pooja2899

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#86

awesome story.
your concept is different and just awesome.
you have written it very well.
nandani has so much energy that she does not even fell tired.
she doesn't sleep hole night.
she is doing all crazy things.
she is changing so much.
if you're going to send PM's than send it to me too.
waiting for next part.
continue soon.

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samanf

@samanf

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Heya...

So I came across dis amazing story of urs yesterday night...

Read it all in one go...wat to say...I am at short of words for ur appraisal...

Uh hav came up wid such a different n amazing concept..

First I waz skeptical in reading as far as going by da tiltle..uh kno to be very honest...as I m not a regular reader...n only read few ffs...among which ankita di is my favorite...

But den dere waz sumting dat made me go thruh urs..n I swear just by reading few lines I waz completely bowled down by ur writing skill...ur story has intrigued me badly...

Yeah...uh r right..ur story is not for dis platform ...but for a much bigger n wider platform my dear...uh hav no idea...wat magic hh hav in ur words...uh r one hell of a writer..or I shud say..EXCELLENT frm da lot...

I hav never ever read such concept before...n I am so excited to be a part of dis extraordinary story...

I seriously will make a point of being a regular reader of dis forum just coz of ur ff...I wanna read it more n more..

So please...its a kind request...donot hav a single thought abt ur writing skill...uh are absolutely fabulous..

Uh have an Aura to be a professional writer...

Go ahead wid ur story...coz dere z sum1 across da globe who is completely spellbound by ur writing skill...

Extremely ecstatic n exuberant for ur next update...

Take care..

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1044737

Hibernated

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Baby Doll aap kaha rehthey hai..😊

please tell me..

so that i can come

and learn how to write

flawlessly amazing..

Who is that idiot😡

who told you

don't deserve appreciation..

Please keep

some piece of meat in HIS/HER

top floor.. 😡😡

You are simply amazing dear..👏👏

People who are not reading this story are missing so much GOOD

nah-nah AMAZING nahi-nahi MARVELOUS uh-oh

EXCELLENT

OUTSTANDING

EXTRAORDINARY

REMARKABLE

AWESOME

MARVELOUS

BEAUTIFUL

AMAZING

EXCEPTIONAL

infact I am not getting words to tell how beautifully you penned..

sorry in advance..😭

Honestly,

When I saw the title

I thought it would be

boring.. 😒

After few hours I thought of giving it a try..

And that was one of the best decision i took..👏👏

And the more I read

The more I wanted to read... 😎

You are just amazing girl..⭐️⭐️

I am seriously scared of nandini..

koi ithna padai😲

kaise kar sakthey hai rey..😲😲

I wish that Professor was in our institute too..😊

so that i could have

slept with eyes open in my maths lecture..😆😆😆

This is completely a different concept..😃😃

I have read many

FF,OS,SS,FS,TS

in this forums but not even one like this

You have chosen an amazing plot..😃😃😃

The way you present is marvelous

And writing about a person for about

42 pages

in one night😲

I am zoned out

after reading that paragraph..

Is she a HUMAN BEING??😕😕

I doubt it!😕

And kya is she found of stickers??

matlab 70 packets of stickers...seriously..😲😲

Honestly I came today on forum only for reading your story..😉😉

I told I will post today..

But kya karu viral fever was missing me it seems..😭😭😭

issliye mere paas agay..

jane ka naam he nahi le rahi..

ziddi kahika..😡😡

Issliye no update.😭😭.

And thanks for double dhamaka.😃😃

Ithna beautiful story ke liye one praise in my mother tongue

KATTI KIRAAKKK...😉

to know the meaning ask anyone who knows telugu..😉

You are simply superb babe.. ⭐️

Never under estimate yourself..👏

Love you loads..

TAKE CARE!

STAY BLESSED!!

KEEP SMILING!!!

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Username padhlo

@mishshergill

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Originally posted by: Drashtiii

Ya i have added a lot, deleted few but never messed much as it could ruin the real meaning of it.
about expression i have read from it and wrote what i felt.
Since as far as you few are with me in this journey i wont quit.

And about Nandini i can say only one thing,

IT's JUST THE BEGINNING

You will see more shades of her
or you can say a complete different nandu that what she is right now.
that is y i am mentioning all this as it will play a vital role in the coming updates..

Naah! That book which i threw away had a work 'life' in its title... I guess so... And even the girl died in the end... And what is up with you now that u wanna remove the story... Let it be here... Let people rather sane people read it its really an interesting and fresh idea to read... And ur line "how determination over comes destiny" has raise my interest to another level. Its too early for u too decide that you should pm ot or not... Hell its just 3 chapter!
You are not writing it for comments and praises! Cool enough!
But do continue it over here... So that people out there can learn and read sth fresh good and utterly differnt!

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ankita_t

@ankita_t

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Hi,

For the first time on the forum i had commented on someone's story as an individual who has some experience as a professional creative writer in the past... Someone who knows atleast a bit more about the preparation required for writing a story.

And, yes that someone is you and this is not coz you are my younger sister. Your work compelled me for the first time to be more precise about my views and have an exchange of thoughts as 2 adults... Well, on the forum i don't write as an experienced person for a reason and that's coz the audience out here is quite young. That was my decision as an individual.

However, i feel content to read some good piece of work which is fresh and yet has a unique style of narration. I pointed out the research thing coz i could clearly see what efforts you have put in with adding the details of every possible nuance... Perfect!!!

It's a very known yet unknown fact i must say- life is like a wave, with its crests and troughs indicating our different phases of life. Some people in a lifetime can't understand the basic core of living and some do. Your characters somehow are in a phase of reaching from a crest to its next trough.

What's more interesting is that you tried to depict a picture for your readers as a guide with every stroke of your brush and we follow the arcs painted... What i like most as a reader is when i am completely aware about the entire role play and the background set-up done by a writer. And, you fairly succeed in doing it.

I feel 'the descent' of an individual starts with warning signs and i could feel this motion from your words... the vulnerable emotional anxiety of such a character 'Nandini' gave me an insight to what might follow ahead and made me more curious.

The 'HIM'- i guess the rational thoughts behind adding your own inputs to his character through Nandini's words gave me a slight glimpse of what kind of person he would be... the situations in past and the human connect to it.

Everything was beautifully narrated, yet i'll say to you- don't think people won't accept and just write. Remember when i started Humsafar i hardly got any response till almost i completed 11 chapters i guess. I knew people take time to understand and comprehend such subjects, though my story is a simple one nothing amazing lol, nor my writing is that good.

So, please don't say you won't get response or the topic is not appropriate for forum, i am sure you will and see slowly everyone is picking up😳 ... have faith and just narrate the story and yes i am there with you always.

Lots of Love

Ankita

Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago