Hi,
I really don't know from where to start and how to write what i was feeling while reading the chapters. It was a very strange yet deep emotion that tingled in my heart when i began to read the chapters in one go. I had lone tears rolling down my cheek thinking about the agony and gloominess a patient like Nandini might go through.
The mood meter was apt and very nicely explained by you. But, Drashti we just discussed the medication process only, its your hardwork and creativity that got that chapter the required depth. I was just there with you, but still Thanks for giving me the credit even though it was you who did the work... Chalo koi nai, i am elder to you toh respect samjh ke thanks le liye mene ok 😆... Now, don't distract me from the commenting 😛...
You description about every single detail be it the medical procedure or be it Manik's care and concern was bang on. The recreational activity session and the interaction of Nandini with other patients was nicely described... It just touched my heart when i read that Nandini was smiling when she met Manik again after Mukti left... It showed the 1st positive step towards her life again and honestly, i prayed at that moment for her... However, the 42 page letter being read by Manik was i know quite a task and on top of it, if you need to lie about how you got the letter is a much more difficult process.
So, Manik loves Nandini and is ready to help her to come out of this illness back to her family, back to him and back to being Nandini...This will be interesting to read ahead how Manik manages to do it...To relive your past and by narrating it to someone is painful and here due to Manik's concern, Nandini was able to do so being calm. Even i was shocked by her calmness and was actually expecting her to be a bit irritated or emotional... Now, the past seems quite deep and yet, heart wrenching to me. I just hope you reveal it more in next chapter.
Drashti, I am just loving the way you building the character of Manik and trust me you have done a fabulous job. Nandini's character is something i guess you have by now got a hang of it so I know you can handle it easily now. But, the simplicity of Manik and the concern he has is just beautifully penned. It's not an easy task to add such fine layers in the characters, but you have done with so much efficiency and creatively.
What do I say now coz i will just repeat my words that you have really made me proud as a sister and i know you go places in life... Drashti i really feel you should think of writing sometime soon professionally coz you have the talent to do so and i have seen the growth in you which is nurturing with every passing chapter... Please, keep writing like this and make us all proud. This is a wonderful story and I hope everyone on the forum reads it to know how talented of a writer you are !!!!!!
Thanks a lot for waiting for me and not updating the next chapter so that I could catch up with the chapters i had missed when i was out of town😃...Aab update kar do...
Lots of Love
Ankita
Edited by ankita_t - 9 years ago
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