MaNan SS||*New Life with Shrink*||Chap 14:pg 85(22-04)

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_MonsteR_Stuff_

@_MonsteR_Stuff_

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Posted: 9 years ago

#591

hey Drishtii

nice update
i really enjoy and like it
thank you for pm

take care

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mona

@cmamona

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Posted: 9 years ago

#592

Hey
I m back...
I have read it...
It was so beautifully penned...
Nandus condition...
Uski recovery and what she is thinking and feeling...
Like on each word u touched my heart...
And that goal part was mindblowing... and the hard reality...
I can feel it too... so much of fear she is having regardung her own parents...
But the best part was she trust manik...and inly him...
He is taking her back to life giving her hopes...
She is making new friends...
Loved it...

But after seeing maniks this condition i have a feeling that a big revelation or twist is coming in our way to give us attack... hehehhee...

But i know it will be aesmtically awsm...

Egarly waitaing...

Ooopppsss... yr missing my that tym when i used to spend hours here and do chat with u...and etuu...
Love u...
Miss u

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#593

Beautifully written..
How u expressed everthing...

Sorry for only two lines.. Got stuck somewhere...

Thank u
Keep smiling

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rimi

@elsaanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#594

hey Drashtii...while reading your update..mujhe bohot sari new things,word pata chalta hein..how do you do tht?

itna hard work...it's commendable..

mood meter things was totally new to me..it's cool..

nandu phir se painting karna start ki..

manik is so caring...i hope"we are just friends!!" zone se bahar aye..

nandu's routine is interesting...

keep writing dear...

stay blessed.

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divtan

@divtan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#595

Patients get confusedbin such situations

Here u have to deal with anqndini very carefully and not fully gv up...and..

I'll just wait to see how it turns out

I faith in U...

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Charmi98

@Charmi98

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Posted: 9 years ago

#596

Hey Drashti.

Lovely update. ..

Nandu's frst day at nre wing was quite interesting. ..nysh to knw she is trying n cuming out of her cocoon...dis she is really recovering. ..

Yeh sab acha bata k baad me manik ka aisa pov

Bt koi ni I hv faith in u ...ul mk it mch mre interesting

Really looking forward fr d nxt update

Jaldi jaldi update kar dena if possible. ..

Take care

Lts of luv. .

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chinnichitti

@chinnichitti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#597

nandini pov is always amazing ufff! So many questions waiting for unfold thanx for d pm

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crazypranu19

@crazypranu19

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Posted: 9 years ago

#598

Awesome update. Nandu is getting normal and she also started to paint . But missed manan. Manik is missing her badly and cabir is cool and funny like always.Happy to see Nandu interacting with other people. Will be waiting for next update.

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Vandyandy

@Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#599

😊 Hey Darshti ..

Hello dear ...

I'm new to ur ff..

Gosh !!!!! It's terrific.

How do u manage to think what nandini is thinking and what she wants to do in life..

Manik was Shattered in pieces when he saw Nandu in that horrible state of mind.,

It was killing him knowing Nandu tried to kill herself twice...

That much she was bearing ...

Manik was sensible and thought wisely n took a desi ion to admit Nandu in the hospital where he was a Doctor..

He was her secret admirer, he just wanted CURE Nandu and bring her back to normal...

And he did well, helping her slowly with her depression.

It's really such a difficult concept for u to narrate it

Giving nandu's POV though she is still recovering.

Manik can't take the next step towards Nandu as he loves her so much.

Hats off to u dear for pulling out such heavy story

Can't say it's DARK but...

Okk so Nandu made new friends that's a good sign.

She started painting much better...

Hope Manik ki help hojaye...

Will be waiting for the next one

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syami

@syami

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Posted: 9 years ago

#600

loved it
was so awesome

the way nandu remembered
maniks each words
she got itrriatated
coz she cud not meet him
all his caring was been missed

awww poor manik
he truly loves her
its hurt to see ur love as frnd
awww
he sud confess
even nandu loves him rite???
but its OK will wait for it

can't wait for next update
Tc
xoxo