Hey, mawara
Finally I read the whole of it... I have classes early in the morning, at 7, but I still read today itself, as I was so excited for it...
Starting from the office scene, I loved it when manik have priority to his wife, in front of his staff, the way she asks for a day with him.
And then their outing, manik's constant blabbering about his childhood.
The beach party and Manik's and nandu's indirect confession there...
Then the way he asked for simmi di's help... hesitant but caring brother and husband...
It was really sweet when he himself sat with her and ate the sargi...
Then the cute little romantic scene in the bedroom, with a little twinge of shararat... that's where we got to see our naughty manik...
The kitchen scene with Majnu manik was really adorable... pls keep giving these kitchen romances more in the upcoming update...
And then the sweet warning of romantic plans for the night was just awww...
All in all the first two parts were LOVE, AND PURE LOVE... loved reading them..
And then that sadu villain entered and spoiled the mood... I guess it was his big fat ego.. he was just not happy to see manan happy together...
Anyways he was paid well by a nice beating from manik... he tried to mess with manik's girl, definitely deserved this...
But all is well when end is well.
Seriously I got so scared that they might separate but no our writer is very humble, she gave us our manan happily...
The cottage is beautiful and so was the bed... perfect research u have done...
The moments were really MAGICAL, BLISSFUL AND LOVING...
there was nothing vulgar in it, it was beautifully penned...
Manik was so vulnerable in whole of it, loved this part actually..
The angry super powerful hulk will find his solace in a little girl... And yes the love confession was so strong and impactful...
I JUST LOVED EVERY BIT OF IT...
HATS OFF TO YOU FOR WRITING SUCH A LONG UPDATE IN A SHORT TIME, AND WRAPPING SO MANY THINGS IN ONE CHAPTER THAT TOO BEAUTIFULLY...
KEEP THE GOOD WORK UP...
waiting for the next update eagerly..
Take your time, but pls give a short promo...
We can now sleep peacefully, as it is all sorted between our hero and heroine..
Bye and thanks for keeping your promise of updating tonight...
Take care and update soon...
Cheers...