Manan FF - The Possessive Brothers (note on pg 69) (Discontinued)

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LovelyKat

@LovelyKat

Beginner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

Promo:

Nandini crying:Parth Samthaan is in love!!!!!

Manik:what???...he's in love with you????

He asked angrily...

Nandini:no!!! U idiot!!!!

Manik:then why u r crying?

Nandini:he's in love with Niti Taylor!!

Manik happily:really????

Nandini:u r happy?

Manik:uhh no...aww so sad for u...now tumhara kya ho ga?

Nandini:I know what I will do now...

Manik:what will you do now?

Nandini:suicide!!!!!

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Nandini and navya both are in the living room talking...and some girl entered!!

Girl:Manik!!!!

We looked as who is shouting and calling Manik's name...Manik too came there listening to the voice...

Manik:Soha?

Soha ran and hugged him tight...

Soha:aww I missed you so much...

Manik thinking:oh God...yeh chipku...phir tapak pari na jane kahan se...

Nandini was burning in jealousy as no one has the right to touch her Manik...but she will have to realize that...

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Nandini:I'm pregnant!

Everyone looked shocked...

Nandini:with Manik's baby!

Soha stood up:what the hell???

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Here is a promo ...thank you those who commented and liked my story...I'm happy u r liking it...

Ab nandu suicide kare gi?

Soha ke saath nandu kya karne wali hai aur wo pregnant kaise ho gayi?

Keep thinking!!

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sweetheart2110

@sweetheart2110

Explorer

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#152

hey baby...i really appreciate your work... you are good at writing fun moments the most...i really like ur story...but cn I just request one thing? can you please add page number on which the chappy has been updated?? it will be much easier to open the chapter then... :-)

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megha94kumari

@megha94kumari

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#153

I lyk Nandu... she is too gd yr.. update soon

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Sumaiya

@Poushi

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

OFFSS!!! NANDINI JEALOUS HOE KAR YA KYA BOL DIYA...
PATA NAHI ISKA EFFECT KYA HOGA??
NEXT PART PLZ ASAP

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

The update was great as usual
And the promo is awesome
Can't wait
Lol Nandu saying she is pregnant
Can't wait for maniks reaction

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aswathibabu

@aswathibabu

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

OMG what was that
Waiting for the update
update plz soon

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#157

Awesome awesome ptomo...

Looking forward to seeing more soon. ..

It's very very hilarious. ..and amazing story. .

Keep it up dear...

Thanks for sharing this.

Stay blessed desr.

Thanks.

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aamuda

@aamuda

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#158

Super story keep up the good work. Rofl pani in love wow Tx to u for dis n nandini's reaction n sucide !!!more dan all nandu pregnant ha ha cnt wait !!!!