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The Devil


Part : 17A

My baby in pain


Read the note at end plz...


Manik is setting on bench outside the ICU n his tear having no stop e ccnd


"Mr.Mahlotra unka Khun bhut bhai gya hai we need blood "Doc. Coming out from ICU n give a one more shock to him


"Aap mera sara blood lelo.. but plz safe her "manik said getting up immediately


"Mr. Mahlotra we need A+ blood "Doc. Said


"Doc. Plz.. save her plz.. "manik begg infront of him


"Aap.. jldi se blood arrange kr li jae.. "Doc. Said n go from here


Manik immidaitly calls his P.A. n ask him arranged the blood from anywhere


"Ek.. blood tk arrange nhi ho paa.. rha tumhse.. u r fired.."manik shout in anger on phone n cut the call


"Oh.. god mujhe khi se toh blood arrange krna.. hi padhega.."manik said palming his face


"Mr. Mahlotra we have found the donar voh lady abhi ati hi hogi"Doc. Said coming toward manik n by saying this he got lit bit relief but the main tension is her operation


"Doc. Kya hua voh lady ab tk ae kyo.. nhi.."manik asked after sometime as the lady didn't comes


"Sir un lady ne blood dene se mana kr diya.. "Nurse said coming toward doc. N manik looked shocking toward her


"Wht ? Aisa kaise mna kr skhti hai.. voh.. nurse khai voh main hone se bt krta.. hn.."manik said angrily n nurse take him to that lady


Manik stopped their after seeing the lady face as he comes to know the reason behind why she denied for giving blood


Flashback


Mahlortra Company

Manik come into his cabin after attending his meeting n sit on chair than his eyes fall on one girl who is wearing a sexy red hot dress coming upto her knees


Manik inner desire increases by seeing that girl he call his P.A. n ask him to call that girl the girl name is Anjli


"May.. i come in sir.. "Anjli take permission before coming inside


"Yes.. "manik said n she come inside she is new in office n didn't aware about wht kind of person manik is


"I want.. u.. tonight.. at my.. bed... "manik said shamelessly n girls got shocked


"But.. sir.. i m not dat type of girl.. " she said in low voice


"I don't care.. here.. i m the boss.. u have to do.. wht.. i will say.. "manik said getting up from the chair


"No.. i will not.. I want to resign.. than.. "the girl said n manik anger raises as no one ever said no to him


"Don't u.. know.. who.. i m.. i can do anything.. if u don't come tonight than u will see.. me.. "he said n left his cabin n Anjli got sacred by his word


The other girls employee tell her about manik power n she told her he can do anything

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Night time


Manik is setting in his study n doing some work.. on his lappy


"Sir.. apse. Koe.. ladhki.. milne.. ae.. hai.. "servant came n told him n a victory smile came on his face


"Send her in my room "manik said getting up n servant left


"So... u came.. "manik said coming inside the room


"Sir.. plz.. i m not.. dat.. type.. of girl.. "she said with fearful voice


"Stop.. acting i know tum jaisi ladhkio ko thodhe paise dikhae.. aur kisi ke sahme apna rang dikha deti.. ho.. "manik said n after listening tear start falling from her eyes


"Jitne Paise bologi uthne milenge.. but u have to cooperate wid me.."manik said pushing the girl on his bed n Start opening his shirt botton


Flashback Over


"Plz.. i need yr blood plz.. tum hi ho jo uski jan bacha skti ho.. plz.. meri ghunao.. ki saza ushai mt do.. "manik come toward her n start begging joining his hand n Anjli get fully shocked after seeing his this behavior voh bhi ek ladhki ke liye.. as she know that he will surely come to her for blood but she thinks he will show his money power


"Okay.. i m not like u.. mein revenge lene ke liye kisi ki jindgi khtre mein dalo.. "she said he didn't say anything as he is not in a condition to Say anything as he feeling guilty for his deed and he is hell worried about her condition


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Part : 17B

"Thank.. u.."manik said when Anjli come outside after giving blood


"U changed.. u changed for good.. i hope tumhne jo past mein kiya... bagwan uske liye tumhai maf kare.. "Anjli after saying this left from there making him more guilty


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Manik is continuously roaming around ICU worriedly again n again the flashes of nandini falling down coming in his eyes n voice of screaming his name


And than 3 hour of operation passed n these hours like ages from him doc come out fron ICU removing his glubs


"Doc. How she.. "manik asked immidaitly jumping on doc.


"She is out of danger now but.."Doc. Said


"But.. kya.. "manik asked worriedly cutting him


"There is lot of chances of her to going in Coma we have put her on observation we have to wait till tomorrow manik "Doc said n bust a blast on his head


"Can i meet her.. "manik said n than doc allowed him


Manik entered in room making himself strong but as he enter in room she stopped on the door after seeing her like this he never want to see her like this in his dream also n her head is covered with bandage n on face having oxygen mask
Manik after seeing like this his heart broken into pieces but he managed to go toward her


He sitting beside her n touch her face n than start crying hodling her hand


"I m sorry... i can't safe u.. from falling.. i m sorry i left u.. alone.."manik screams holding her face as he is felling guilty but he is totally unawre about wht she has gone throw in that 10 min. Only


Next day manik whole night keep seeing setting beside her in hope she will open her eyes
Now also he is setting staring at her n all the memory of their time revolving around


"Plz.. wake.. up.. "he plead again whole he is pleading like this but she is not giving any response


After sometime he feels her finger moving on his hand n he get happy n see toward her in hope


Nandini try to opening her eyes n than she slowly opened her eyes n she sees toward him but than only she remembered that worst incidence n become restless n start taking long long breath


"Baby.. R u okay.. Doc.. "manik shouts holding her face


"Baby.. i m wid.. " h said n she hold his hand tightly n as she trying to say something to him


She removed the oxygen mask from her face as she wanna say something him


"Mani.. "she said cryingly n tear start falling from her eyes n this make manik more worried


"Baby.. u r okay.. stop.. crying..."manik said as he thinking she was crying becoz of her this condition n he wipes her tear


Than doc. Came


"Baby.. i m here.. only.. let doc. Checked u.."manik said cubbing her face carefully as she is not leaving her hand


"Mr. Mahlotra it's okay.. i will check her like this only.. "doc. Said n checked her n she is just crying as the incidence is coming in her mind again n again n her cry is making him more hurt but now he is standing controlling his cry as he don't want cry infront of her


"Mr. Mahlotra she is f9.. now.."doc. By saying this left from there


"Mani..."she again called him very difficultly n manik sit beside her


"Baby.. why.. r u crying.. khi.. pain ho rha.. hai.."manik asked her lovingly n next she said make him hell shocked


"He.. try to ra...rape.. me.. "nandini said very difficultly holding his shirt tightly crys n manik became numb. For movement


"Mani.. it's felt so.. bad.. i got so sacred.. "Nandini again said n now manik is blankly listening to her n more guilt filled in him as he can't protect her n by seeing her the night he spend frocefully with Girls their screams also enchoes in his ear


After listening her pain he truly realise wht he had done with the other girls becoz of his wrong thinking becoz of his one bad incidence he make many of life like her but the main question comes in mind who tried to that with her with her baby


"WHO.. "manik asked her she is still crying but she said b/w her crys like a small kid "i don't know he was bad.. he was very.. bad.."


Manik didn't ask her let her cry as he knows this must n he sleeps while crying only n he is setting thinking who can do this n crys making him more n more hurt he can't bear a tear in her eyes but now he have to seeing her crying like this.. in pain not only physical but her inner pain is more


So.. here.. is next bear this last one emotinal part.. from next i try to give a happy update.. n promo scene will be in next part.. n guyz.. i wanna ask one question u were saying that make the person punished who done this with nandini on the other hand u were saying that not punish manik.. guyz.. i have to show this but i will show slowly everything.. n u gonna surely like it.. n now plz.. reply.. to my question.. n plz.. do.. big.. wale.. comments.. n u guyz.. liking my story than plz.. share


Love Mehak


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing awesome superb outstanding mind blowing fantastic lovely update tysm dear fr the update vry vry happy continue soon plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
so emotional part...
bt its penned down perfectly,,love it...
want to see that manik will punish that person very badly...
so sad to see nandini's pain...n plz dont punish manik very much fr his past...he changed n will more change fr nandini in future,,so i think manik's guilt is his real punishment...
waiting fr the next part...continue soon...
Edited by lovlytuli - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
Manik feeling guilty about his deeds
Hope he finds the person soon who tried to molest Nandini
Update next part soon.

Keep smiling always
N Stay Blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow awesome update...
Manik is soo guilty of whatever he did...
He definitely did wrong no offence in tht and he is paying all tht...
Tht girl was soo shocked to see manik like this...
Nandu was soo broken...
Jst hope he finds it out soon...
Jst hope everything goes well...
Luved it..
Eating for next...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update


Manik is feeling guilty of whatever he did in his past


And nandini is really in pain


But manik is not gonna leave the person



Waiting for the next part




Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
manik nae dusro ke saath galat kiya...
aur ab uski galti ki saza nandini ko mil rahi ha...
joe bikul sahi nahi ha...
manik ko ab unladkiyo ki takleef samjhe arahi ha...
but it's too late...
plz next update asap...
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsmmm

superbbb

amazinggg

nd emotional update also

manik is guilty bt it's too late

for his deeds nandu should not suffer

don't make her suffer

loved the update very much

cont soon asap

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