#6//The Ex's At War//Ch19 Pg 122 & LINK FOR THREAD 7 ON PG 1

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Swara111

@Swara111

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Posted: 9 years ago

#991

Congratulations ''''
Thread 6 in 17th chapter that's an big achievement.
Good going.. Waiting for your next update..

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faii44

@faii44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#992

Superbb updatee..

Emotional one too.. Manini baby feel so sad fo her.. N that rewa bitch.. N the endd.. Huff kia hoga abb.. Pls jaldi update dydena..

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vaish11

@vaish11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#993

Cried throughout the update 😭

It was nice of Mukti to give some words of wisdom to Nandini but I guess destiny was not her side this time as well.

Couldn't see Manini that way at all!! 😭

And then at the end the bomb that just fell "Stay away from my daughter" dude it just made my heart skip a beat!! I just hope that it doesn't get ugly till divorce and Manik being close to Rewa 🤢

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gazal.lubna

@gazal.lubna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#994

Yaar thats not fair

You ended it on such a crucial point...:(

The whole was so emotional

But manan misunderstanding again umm I am gonna cry :'(

But it was awsm emotional part

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WhyNot_Mee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#995

Awesome update! and omg so much drama... I can completely understand how emotionally draining it must have been to write this! So kudos to you 👍🏼

I don't think manik is wrong at getting pissed at nandini. I think anyone would be in that situation... but he's wrong for not letting the mother and daughter meet. And I don't think rewa was wrong either I mean nandini insulted her in front of everyone when it was her own fault so rewa getting back at her is justified.

But for manan, they suffered enough when manini was gone they shouldn't anymore! I hope manik doesn't blame nandini for killing their baby and now almost manini (although that would make for some good drama but it would take forever to fix so please don't go that route 😛)

But seriously amazing update! The whole freezer thing was really creative! 😉

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apy1608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#996

Damn emotional...
Ohhj god this rewa... bloody hell... huhhh!!!
,now wht...??? :(
Awww manan -_-

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oaoa

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Posted: 9 years ago

#997

I thought they'll finally be together:(

Update soon!

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mishghan

@mishghan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#998

hey,

ok i have to say a lot about this story today especially after reading the last update... sorry to pakaofy you! ab itna acha likho gay to aisa to hoga naa 😛

starting from the start...

yes nandini was at fault to assume that her monster for once will get her ishara about to look after his own daughter without any further help of words...

but here lies the fact that may be God did not forget to keep brain in him but forgot to give some knowledge to him as how to use it! but is mei Manik ki kya ghalti agar usse nandini ka gesture samaj nahi aya... bechara Manik!

the turmoil you showed was beautifully penned down! yes Manini is the oxygen nitrogen hydrogen for both of them stupid impulsive egoistic fellas!

ek second ko to meri bhi saans atak gai when you wrote that Manini was in freezer! 😲

now the main thing!

Manik is bar nandini ko manini se door kar k ek bar phir i repeat EK BAAR PHIR wohi ghalti duhra raha hai jo usne kuch arsa pehle ki in his anger!

last time he lost his unborn child... this time m afraid k wo nandini ko naa kho day!

the level of immaturity nandini has especially in case of manik and the amount of insecurity she has hidden inside her might lead up to something drastic which none of us as readers want!

theek hai wo baap hai ... theek hai nandini was at fault... lekin wo maa hai... and mothers are never ever careless about their kids...

i wonder whats gonna happen next coz aap to wednesday se pehle promo do gay nahi!

i love the small small moments you give us in between... act as energy drink reviving me back!

i just love love love and simply love your writing. kindly please update asap! would appreciate that!

thanks tc.

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sabrina.shown

@sabrina.shown

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Posted: 9 years ago

#999

Whattt the heck yaar...

Yeh kaya Tha..

The on earth are you try to do...

I feel ki you really want them to get divorced.. What is wrong,... what are you trying to dooo plzz tell me.. kis ki dushmani nikal rahi hoo.. yeh batao..

I was dying each sec when they cant find Manini.. not a mother yet, but i knw how it feels... and In the freezer.. are you kidding me..

Main to sh Rewa bitch ko freezer main dal dungi.. and tume bi.. direct threat de rahi hoon.. If in the next chapter you write ki nandu witness manik and rewa making out.. i swear.. agar tum ekta bani na.. to tumahi khair nehi behen meri.. soo plzzz bahut ki bada zajtka diya.. lol.. but awsmm.. yaar i could not breath when cabir said staff will get to water.. and the way nandu was cring.. omg.. i was like yeahhh this is how a mother actually would react.. to this situation hats off bc you are not even married.. lol.. kaise karti hoon tum.. love you to the core.. main only for your writing weekend ki intaar karti hoon.. but ek baat manlo.. plzz this is high time... in logo ko ek saath karo.. plzzz... i really want to see nandu cry her heart out to manik.. and manik should just hug her.. and say issshhh.. bas.. i am here.. thats all ...

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1000

Thanks for pm
Thank god manini is fine
She is after all the life of this story for me
N again fight between manan
I know manik is possessive bout manini
But it wasn't nandus fault either.
Poor manini got mixed up
N even manik should have seen for her why only Nandu
N manik actually is behaving as if Nandu did it one purpose
He knows what she went through n still he let him get influence by rewa
Hoping that manini will get her parents back together

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