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sruthilaya13

@sruthilaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Hey guys..

This is sruthi, a crazy fan of manan. for the first time i am writing a story that too on my favorite couple.. so much excited.. hope you like it. please do support me.. here comes my 1st chapter.. so read and enjoy..

CHAPTER - 1

A new morning with bright sunlight. A girl was sleeping very peacefully on her beautiful bed. Her sleep got disturbed as sun kissed her face. she slowly started moving in her sleep. her mother arrived to her room with her favorite bed coffee.

Sanjana Murty(SM): nandu, wake up. it's already 7:30 beta. aren't you getting late for the college..?

Nandini(N): mom... Please let me sleep na..

SM: no. it's too late. come on.. get up.( nandu wakes up and sits on her bed)

N: Good Morning mom..

SM: Good Morning beta. ye lo tera bed coffee..

N: thankyou mom.. you're the best.

Sanjana smiles..

SM: chalo.. jaldi se ready hokar neeche aajaana.. main tab tak breakfast lagwa doongi tere liye..

N: hmm... dad kaha pe hai..?

SM: Wo toh Raj bhai ke sath kuch important kaam pe gaya tha.. tum jao aur jaldi se fresh ho ja.

N: tikhe mom.. give me 15 min.. i'll be there.

(with that nandu's mom goes to arrange breakfast)

SM: Nandu come fast beta.. you're getting late for college..

N: yes mom.

(nandu comes to the dining table and takes her seat)

N: so what's for today's breakfast..?

SM: your favourite sandwich.

N: wow! yummieee..

(she started eating her breakfast)

SM: nandu, tum manik ke sath chali jao na college...

N: no mom. wo tho ab tak apne bed se uthre bhi nahi honge... main apne car me chali jaongi. i dont wanna be late.

SM: tu aise kyu bol raha hai. bichara thak gaya hoga.. tu mere manik beta ka khyaal rakna college mey.

N: mein kyu rakhu. wo chota bacha thodi na hai..

SM: is liye keh raha hu baba.. itna handsome jo hai mera manik. bhuri nazaro se bachale...

N: FYI, i'm not interested mom. achaa.. wo chodo aur ye boliye aap meri mom ho ya manik ka..

SM: tum dhono ka...

N: tikhe.. i finished my breakfast. now i'll leave for college. Navya meri wait kar rahi hogi..

SM: take care beta..

N: okay mom.. love you. bye.

SM: love you too.. bye nandu..

#please avoid mistakes... #enjoy the story and stay cool..

😊

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Kanchan sachani

@sachani

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Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Hey sruthi welcome to IF

Amazing story I m toh vese very

Big fan of your story

Continue soon

Stay blessed

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sruthilaya13

@sruthilaya13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: sachani
Hey sruthi welcome to IF
Amazing story I m toh vese very
Big fan of your story
Continue soon
Stay blessed

THANK YOU DEAR...!!

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sruthilaya13

@sruthilaya13

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

next part for you guys..

CHAPTER- 2

Saying bye to her mom nandu left for college...

MALHOTRA MANSION:

at the same time IN MALHOTRA MANSION, a tall handsome guy is sleeping on his king size bed with a sweet smile kept on his face..

his sleep got disturbed by a phone call.. he slowly moved his hand towards the mobile on the table just next to him.

Manik(M): hello..

Cabir(c): aur kitna dher soyega yaar. ab toh ut ja saale.. ab thak nandini ke dreams pe khoya ho kya..?? aaj college aane ka iradha hai ya nahi..??

M: arghh cabir... tu phir se shuru math ho yaar.. I will be there in an hour..

C: come soon..

M: hmm.. bye.

Manik gets freshens and comes to the lawn where Mrs. Malhotra is already there..

M: good morning mom..

Nyonika Malhotra(NM): well thats really a good morning... you woke up on yourself.. not bad ha..

M: oh.. come on mom.. stop making fun of me.

NM: learn something from my nandu.. Wo tho kab ka college chali gayi.

M: haha.. very funny.. manik malhotra doesnt learn anything from others..

NM: bilkul apne baap pe gaya hai.. ab jaldi se naastha finish kar..

M: no mom.. its already late. i will have something in the canteen itself.

NM: par beta, its not healthy na..

M: dont worry mom.. ek din khane se kuch nahi hoga..

NM: tu meri bath kabhi nahi sunogi na...

M: okay... bye mom. see you in the evening..

NM: bye beta.. take care.

nyonika is not sure that manik will have his breakfast. so she called nandu and informed her to make him have his breakfast. she cant deny to her sweet aunt.. so she agreed.

AT SPACE ACADEMY:

manik enters the college and parked his car. all girls started staring at this handsome hunk.

he didn't give any heed to them and started moving towards the jamming room with his all time attitude.

here nandu finished her first class and walking in the corridor along with navya.

She suddenly remembered nyonika's phone call and shouted.

Navya(Na): arey tumhe achanak se kya ho gaya..

N: wo kuch nahi.. mujhe bas manik se milna tha.. tu canteen mey rukh.. mein thodi dher me tumhe waha milthi hu.

Na: jaldi aaja.. mein tab tak aaryaman aur abhi ko dekthi hu..

N: okay baba.. cabir ko bhi sath me lekhe aw kya..?

Na:(blushing) aur aise mein kab kaha

N: tu rehne dhe.. teri chehre pe saaf likha hai ki tu apni majnu ko miss kar rahi thi..

Na: stop it yaar...

N: acha.. ab mein chalthi hu.

Na: hmm..

JAMMING ROOM:

Manik enters the jamming room..

M: hello guys..

C: ab finally manik baba ka dharsan hume mil gaya.

manik glares at him..

Dhruv(D): hai buddy..

M: hello dhruv..

Alya(A): arey why so late.?

C: bas apne lala land pe kho gaya hoga.. kyu manik?

Mukti(Mu): what lala land..? i cant get you cabir..

C: wo kya hai na..( manik shuts him with his glare) nandini

A: kya nandini..?

nandu reaches them with questioning look..

C: mera matlab nandu is behind him.

everyone looks at the door and found her. she comes in and greets alya and mukti with a hug. and dhruv and cabir with a side hug. with this she stood next to manik.

Mu: itni subah humari yaad.. not bad nandu.

N: wo mujhe manik se milna tha..

C: ha,,, take him.. he's all yours and winks at manik.

manik avoids this and asks nandu..

M: what happened nandu?

N: wo aunty ne call kiya aur bathaya ki tumne breakfast nahi kiya.. so first have something in the canteen.

M: i'm not a kid okay..

n: is liye sirf bolne liye aaya naahi khilane liye..

D: offo.. phir se jagda shuru.. bas bhi karo yaar.

A: yeah. i second dhruv.

Mu: come na manik. canteen chalthe hai..

C: yeah. lets go guys.. nandu tu bhi aa..

N: hmm.. chalo..

M: toh phir practice ka kya..?

Mu: wo toh baadh me dheka jaayega.. tu chal.

m: okay fine. chalo..

#please do comment whether you like the story or not..

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sruthilaya13

@sruthilaya13

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

AS I SAID I'M HERE WITH A NEW CHAPTER.. READ AND ENJOYYY...

CHAPTER - 3

FAB 5 and nandu moved towards canteen.. as they entered they saw aryaman navya and abhi were talking to each other.. they went towards them.. cabir and mukti hugged their respective partners(navya and abhi).

Aryaman came to nandu and hugged her.. this brought a change in manik's expressions but he didn't say anything... this was observed by our very own Cabir jiii... later everyone else wished each other. Aryaman started the conversation..

Arya- hello baby doll..

Nandu- hai aryaman..

(Manik goes to navya)

Manik- hey madhubala.. what's up..??

Cabir- (shouts) Maaanikkk...!!!

M- okay.. cool bro..

Navya- rehne dhe cabir.. Wo kabhi suna hai kya.. jo aaj sunega..!

Abhi- guys.. calm down. lets have something..

everyone took their seats in the order as aryaman,nandu,navya,cabir,manik,mukti,abhi,dhruv,alya again aryaman in a round table.

Arya- so what should we order..??

Cabir- hot chocolate for me and navya..(navya smiles)

Alya- pastha for me and Dhruv..(Dhruv nods)

Mukti- diet coke for me and abhi...

Manik- Sandwich for me and dark chocolate for nandu..

Arya- but nandu likes butterscotch.. (manik looks at nandu)

Nandu- no aryaman. actually i feel like having dark chocolate..

(unknowingly a smile kept on manik's face)

Arya- okay then i too will have dark chocolate..

(Manik soon stops smiling)

Everyone enjoys their food..

Cabir- so navya, aaj kab thak tere classes chalega..??

Mukti- kyu date pe jaane ka plans hai kya...!! (winks)

Cabir-kameeni mukti..!!! tu kyu jalthi ho mujhse.. tu bhi leke jao na tere aBhI ko date pe...

Mukti- agar jaana hai toh jaroor jaawongi.. kyu abhi..???

Abhi- sure baby.. (Mukti smiles)

ukthi- dekha...!!!

Manik- bichara abhi..!!

Mukti- tujhe kya problem hai manik..?

Cabir- isliye kyunki hume samaj nahi aatha ki tu uska boyfriend hai ya wo tera.. (winks)

mukti beats cabir..

nandu- shut up cabir.. wo toh in dhono ka understanding hai..

Alya- haa.. bhilkul..

Mukti high fives with alya and nandu..

Arya- Nandu humara practice ka time ho gaya hai.. chalo..

navya- ha nandu.. chalo..

Abhi- tum log chalo.. mein badh me miltha hu..

Nandu- tikhe bhai.. chalo navya hum chalthe hai..

(nandu treats abhi and cabir as her brothers)

Navya- hmm..

Nandu- manik, tum apna sandwich finish karke jaana..

manik- tikhe Madam ji..

Cabir coughs..

Navya- (tensed) tujhe kya huwa..

Cabir- arey kuch nahi navya..

Dhruv- wah.. kya pyaar hai..!!

Alya- awww..!! they look so cute..

navya-(shy) okay bye guys..

Everyone: Byeee...

3 of them move to their class..

JAMMING ROOM

After finishing their food they resumed their practice in jamming room..

they made a wonderful tune..

everyone relaxed for sometime.. soon it becomes evening and they decided to leave..

FAB 5 went to parking area..

Nandu, Navya and aryaman were already there..

Nandu- chalo navya..

Navya- nandu, mein cabir ke saath chalthi hu..

Arya- okay lets go together nandu..

Cabir- (interrupts) aryaman! Tu bhi humare saath aaja..

Manik- that's a good idea..!

Cabir (winks): i knowww...

Alya and Dhruv on Dhruv's bike.. cabir navya aryaman in one car.. Mukti and abhi on another car.. manik and nandu in their own cars..

MALHOTRA MANSION

MANIK- Kaka.. mera green tea laana..

kaka(servant)- abhi laaya manik baba..

Manik settles on a sofa.. nyonika comes..

Nyo- hello beta.. how was your day..??

manik- very tiring..

Ny0- tikhe.. apne kamre me jao aur aaraam kar.. mein tera green tea bejwathi hu..

Manik- thanks mom..

manik freshens himself till then Kaka brings his green tea.. manik finishes it and rests on his bed..

MURTY MANSION

Nandu freshens and listening to her favorite music in her room balcony sitting on a swing ..

her mother arrives..

San: Nandu beta.. kya kar rahi ho..

Nandu- kuch nahi mom.. do you need anything..?

San- wo aaj MANAN INDUSTRIES ka ek bada project approve huwa hai.. isliye aaj malhotra mansion me hum dhono families ka dinner arrange kiya hai nyonika ne... so tum evening 7 baje tak ready ho jaana..

Nandu- tikhe mom.. par dad hai kaha..??

San- unhone call kiya aur bathaaya ki wo seedha malhotra mansion aajeyega..

Nandu- okay mom.

( nandu's mom leaves)

PRECAP

MALHOTRA'S and MURTY'S dinner together..

#hope i didnt disappoint you guys.. please do comment...

Edited by sruthilaya13 - 9 years ago