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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb promo
waiting for tha update
plzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome promo dear.
plz updet soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Now this Promo has made me more curious! I want to know what happens!
So again try updating tonight please!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry Mawara , for disheartening u always as I have been a silent reader of all ur stories because of this busy schedule of mine as 10th board u know but as my exams will get over I will surely comment on stories regularly


Love
Kunika
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Posted: 9 years ago
But all it stories are awesome and this one and dheere dheere are my fav
Luv u
Kunika
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice. I like this story the most. Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.hahaha Manik got late for his meeting. Nandini's pampering session was mindblowing. Loved it. Wow nandini came to know about anti depression pills.manik was in so much pain.dr's words were well penned. Wow nandini heard manbir's convo. Manik's good side was blissful. Manik's guilt state was well written. Song was amazing it matched Manan's situation. Manan's pov was phenomenal. Loved it. Both were equally hurt.nandini's words of u will never hurt me was mindblowing and blissful. Wow manik noticed nandini's behaviour but didn't let her know. Coffee scene was amazing. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Wow nandini realised her love for manik.manan's hurt state was well penned. Totally an marvellous update. Loved it to core. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.
About promo it was mindblowing. Manan's convo was amazing. Manik's care for nandini was well shown. His talked about pills and guilt. Eagerly waiting for update.
Keep smiling
Stay blessed😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing Update...
Nandini making Manik eat the boiled egg before going to office...
Lvd dat scene...
I cn imagine hw will be ma iks expression...
Manik unintentionally looking at her before leaving...
Dat was sooo touching...
Shocking part was dat manik on anti depressant...
I didnt expect dis...
Maybe he is stressed because of his past also...
Manik has a good side which he doesn't want to show Nandini...
But y...
Both have got feelings for each other...
But dey r nt ready to accept...
it just a matter of acceptance what Nandini has accepted...
Jst make dem realise soon...
Sry fr the late rply...
I jst saw the update jst nw...
Plzzz post the nxt part soonn...
Plzzz...
Eagerly waiting...
Post it soon dr...
Take care...
Allah bless u...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Chapter 7 A- Yeh Mera Dewaanapan Hai!


Manik was chewing his sandwich all the time staring at Nandini. He was noticing her each act since last 20 minutes she hadn't ate a single morsel..! She was just tossing her food..!


"Will you keep playing with this food?"Finally his patience exceeded the limit..! She look at him aimlessly and suddenly she pushed the food plate away..! Manik look at her confused while she run towards her room without speaking a word. Manik look at Simran who was standing near him..! "Does she eat in my absence?"He asked to her but she shook her head..


"Baba..! Since last 10 days Mam eat really very less..! Just two or three morsel..!"She explained obediently and Manik shook his head worriedly..!


"What is happening to her?"He was shocked and surprised..!


"I think you should talk to her..!"She suggested and Manik got up..! He walked towards Nandini's room and the door was open. She was standing in the window and her shoulders were shaking that means she was crying. Manik rubbed his temples and entered her room..!


"You shouldn't be crying all the time..!"He spoke softly and she turned furiously..!


"Why the hell do you care?"She yelled and he was taken aback..


"Am just worried for your hea-health..!"Manik said averting his gaze and Nandini clenched her fists..!


"Out..! Get out of my room right now..!"She shouted and pushed him away..! Manik backed off and she came close to him to push him more..! "I hate you Manik Malhotra..! I bloody hate you..! Do you hear that? I-HATE-YOU..!"She shouted all the time shrieking loudly tears knew no boundaries and she was going mad with pain..! She was slapping his chest and he was standing all surrendered. After sometime she was tired and Manik held her wrists..! "I hate you..!"She sobbed loudly as she collapsed in his chest and he held her close..!


"Ahhh...!"She shouted in his chest, clutching the back of his shirt tightly and he patted her head..! The pain of love with which she was suffering was forcing her to behave like this..! Manik himself was a broken soul! But the difference between them was she expressed her pain to him and he was not ready to open up! They kept standing like this clinged to each other when suddenly Manik felt her grip losing on his shirt..! She was fainted..! He freaked out and picked her up immediately..! He placed her on the bed and her face was pale..!

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"She went unconscious due to lack of food and stress..!"Doctor Sinha spoke to Manik who was sitting beside Nandini holding her hand or we can say she was holding his hand tightly and was not letting him go even in unconscious state..


"She will be ok na Doctor?"Cabir asked and Doctor nodded..!


"She will be..! But only if she will be taken care by someone close..!"Doctor Sinha taunted looking at Manik who was staring at her angelic face..! Cabir smiled.


"Manik..! Come out..! Let her take rest! We need to talk...!"Doctor said and Cabir too nodded..

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"You want to make her like you? Ruined and a depressed soul?"Doctor Sinha started while Manik was standing in his balcony..


"Yai tou main bhi isy samjhata hoon..! don't do this to her..! Wo teri tarha strong nahi hai Manik..! Tjhy apny inner emotions chupany aaty hoon gay usy nahi aaty..!"Cabir continued..!


"Kya islye shadi ki the tum ny us say?"Doctor said...


"He planned everything very cunningly..! But falling for her was not his plan..!"Cabir was showing no mercy on Manik..


"Tum kho do gay usy Manik..! You want that?"Doctor said turning Manik towards him and he noticed wetness in his eyes..


"Na-nahi..!"Manik stammered and Doctor patted his shoulder..! "Par main kya karoon? Main na nibha paya tou? Expectations pori kar paya tou?"He was scared..! "Wo mj say naraz ho kar mjy chood kar chali gai tou?"


"Manik..! She is a very intelligent lady..! Tum usy aur apny app ko aik chance do..!"Doctor assured him..


"Yes..! Or else you will lose her..!"Cabir too patted his shoulder and Manik took a deep breath! He decided!

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"Baba..!"Simran knocked Manik's door he was busy on his laptop..


"Hmm?"He just hummed without looking at her..


"Wo Nandini Mam..! She is not eating anything..!"She said helplessly and Manik sighed..! He shut his laptop and got up..! He reached Nandini's room with Simran and heard her shouts..


"When I said that I don't want to eat then what the hell is your problem?"She yelled on another maid and at the same time Manik entered the room..! Nandini look at Manik and turned her face..


"Ap sab jayen..!"Manik said to all maids and they went out placing the food tray on the table..! Manik sat on the bed..! "You won't eat??"He asked and she shook her head like a baby..! "Main kahoon ga tab bhi nahi?"He asked innocently and she look at him finally..! Manik got up and picked up the food tray..! He again sat beside her this time a little close..! Then he picked up the spoon full of rice and she opened her mouth to eat..! Without any protest she kept eating from his hands and she was looking at his face while he was just busy in feeding her..! "Mj say ziada expectations mat rakhna..!"He finally spoke and she blinked her eyes to shove away the tears..! "Bohat nikama insaan hoon..! Rishty nibhany nahi aaty mjy..!"He continued..! "So..! Maybe..! Tum ny jo dream daikhy hoon about your life partner main us par pora na utroon..! Dhruv jesa nahi hoon..!"He said looking away and she hiccuped in her sobs again..


"You are better than him..!"She said softly and he look at her amazed..! "YEs..! Ap ka aur Dhruv ka koi match nahi..! He is a loser..! But you..!"She didn't completed her words..! "So? Are you ready to give US a chance?"She asked after a long pause eyes full with hopes and he sighed..


"Yes..!"He said determinedly nodding his head and she was so happy. Not even her wildest dream she felt so happy..! Shoving the food away she flunged in his arms and he hugged her back..


"Thank You..! Thank you so much..!"She whispered in his ears and he smiled..! He wanted to thank her but was at loss of words..

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Edited by Mawara_Ejaz - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Arrey yaar dis promo...
It made me more curious. ..
Ppst it yaar...

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