Manan TS || ANKAHEE|| Glimpse...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guyz this is Aayat Siddique... A new member in this forum...
At first i was a silent reader bt after reading all of ur stories jst got inspired to pen down my thoughts... So registered as a newbie...

A big big n a big thanx to myrah bby (_Myrah_writer of it hurts alot n sanam re..)for helping me wid this... U r really a sweet heart... Love u babes for helping me out wid this...



ANKAHEE...

Glimpse

Fab5(Manik, cabir, dhruv, alya, mukti) were on a trip to manali.. Actually they were going for trekking wid group of many ppl...
There was chaos on the station...
Everyone were bzy in adjusting there luggage...

While there was a person standing on the door of train lost in his own thoughts... It was our Manik Malhotra..


A girl was struggling wid her luggage ..she asked help wid manik" Hello mr.khoya hua chand can u plz help me wid my luggage ... It's really heavy ..kya aap issey andar meri seat par rakhwaaney mey madat karogey plz... "
Her sweet voice broke manik's trance...

He listened her request bt ignored her...

Girl:Hello main aapse baat kar rahi hu.. Aren't u listening..??

Manik:Main ajnabiyo sey baat nahi kartaa..

Girl:Haa toh main kaha aapko mujhse baat karne k liye keh rahi hu.. Main toh bas aapko meri madat karne k liye keh rahi hu naa...

Manik:Manik malhotra ajnabiyo ki madat nahi kartaaa..

Girl:Okay then its me nandini.. Nandini murty n aap manik malhotra naa toh see ab toh humey ek dusre kaa naam vi pataa hain so i don't think ki we r still strangers... Toh ab toh aap meri madat kardo aur waisey mere appa kehte they ki madat karogey naa toh punya milegaa..

Manik:Kya milegaa..??

Nandini:punyaa means god ki side sey blessing n reward..

Manik:Mujhe kisi sey kuch nahi chaahiye..

Nandini:Par mujhe toh bohot kuch chaahiye...like pehle toh i want a ...bt she was cut off in btn

Manik:Do u think m interest in ur demands or wants...??


Nandini:Okay.. Nahi bataaungi bt plz help me out naa thodi der mey train start hojaayegi.. Kahi meri train naa chut jaaye...

Manik:Oh god come on pass me ur luggage..

Nandini:Thnk u so much...

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Train got started...
Much more talks...
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Manik was again standing on the door of train..

Nandini:Hello mr.malhotra

Manik:Tum fir sey aagayi.. Tumhaare paas mera sar khaane k alawaa aur kuch kaam nahi hain.. Seat par baithaa thaa toh udhar aagayi idhar aayaa toh idhar.. Wat is ur problem yaar..??

Nandini:Dekho aapki aur meri bilkul nahi ban rahi right..?? Toh we r like unlike poles naa n bachpan mey toh padhaa hi hogaa naa unlike poles attract each other... Issilye aap jidhar main vi udhar... Kyu..??

Manik:Yaa right...!!

Nandini:Main toh humeshaa hi right baatein hi karti hu.. Like always...

Manik:Tumhe kya bolney ki bimaari hain..??

Nandini:Biraami toh bohot saari hain bt aap jaan kar kya karlogey.. Aap doctor thodi ho ki theek kardogey...

Manik looked at amazingly towards her..

Nandini:Arrey i was joking .. Aap apni aakhen jo shock ki wajahse badi hui hain ussey choti kar saktey ho... Waisey y were u shocked.. Kahi meri chintaa toh nahi hogayi thi naa... Bataao bataao..😉

Manik:Agar isske baat ek vi word bolaa naa toh i swear i will throw u out of this train.. Koi dekh vi nahi raha chup chaap yaha se fek dungaa aur kisiko pata vi nahi chalegaa..

Nandini:Huh..!!😡 How rude of u.. Khaamakhaa aapse baat karkar apnaa waqt barbaad kar rahi thi.. Now i won't talk to u...

Manik:As if m dying to talk to u right..!!

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So guys this story is all abt two unknown person who meet at station n r going wid same group for manali trekking...
So wat has this trip planned for their destiny... Want to knw then stay tuned to Ankaaheee...

This basically going to be three shots... N if i get a good response then will update the first chp on nxt wednesday else i will discontinue it...

Plz guyz do comment n support me...
N for pm buddy me...

Till then keep smiling n spread positivity...
Cheers...😉

Love Aayat...!!!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wooo Intrsting...waiting for update...pm me plzzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hahaha.. funny...nandini is a chatterbox... it vl be a fun trip... update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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superb & interesting!!!!!! 😊
nandu is a chatter box & manik an angry bird...it is so cute!!!!
😳 cont soon!!!
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intresting
continue soon
if possible send me a pm
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Very interesting plz continue...waiting eagerly
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superb amazing awsm fabulous...
bakbak nandini & kharus manik...
manik kyu itna khoya khoya ha???
nandini toe bindas ha...
plz next part asap...plz
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Prolouge quite interesting... Update soon
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Amazing glimpse...
Sounds damn interesting...
Really wanna know more...
Plz continue soon...
Will be waiting eagerly 4 d next update...
Take care...
Stay blessed

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome start di...
Guyz do read it.. Its damn interesting...
Will be waiting to read more.. Lol mujhe toh already story pata hain bt fir vi i will be waiting to read it as a updated chp..
N haa help k liye thnx wanx karne k koi zaroorat nahi hain as yeh toh mera farz thaa..hehe..!!

Chalo now enough pf bakbak...
Do update soon...

#ok thanx bye #cheers..*wink*

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