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sakshi

@softysakshi

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#71

Ur writing skills to as always superb.

And i also get to know that u pm'd brutal love...
Hahahah...but I didn't read it from 5-6 chappies...
Vse u know...I'm ur silent reader.. 😉 😉

But here I'm commenting...
Pta h kyu akku..
Because of ur dhamki...
I just luv the way u give dhamki...

Just take this one big I mean tight hug...
Bhn...kya dhamki deti h..
Mtlb superb yrr...!!!

Just luved the way u write ur red danger color note... 😆 😆 😆

Vse ha...dnt take anything in offencive way..
Coz mujhe boln me baad Hi smjh aata h ki ne sahi bola ya glt..

Love

Sakshi

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Saranya

@charanyaaj

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Awesome update...
Im eagerly waiting to know hw they vl cme to know abt dhrulya??
Today mukbir missed seeing them???

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@dreamy_doll15

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Soo update is here..

mtlb like wow.

I totally loved this..

Oppss dhruvlya ko kisi ne nhi dekha

Lab hogaa secret out..
m eagerly waiting for that. ..

Soo manik is so determined ki shaadi to uski nandu se hi hogi.

😉

or manan moments were beautifully penned..

ThaT was seriously mindblowing. . 😡

Poor evil twins..

rok nhi pate manik ko.

hehehe.

update was soso so so fab..

sooo awesome. ..

Bdaaa vala huggiee ..

for writing thiss much awesome. ..

I just love it..
Itsss soo awesome ..
So amazing. .just love to the core. ..

Soo .fantastic. ...

Keep updating. ..

U r such a beautiful writer...
Update soon..
Waiting for next update eagerly ..
Thanks for this update
.
Thanks for pm too. ..

Love Geet

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archu_asok

@archu_asok

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Awesome update. Dhrulya's part was well penned. Dhrulya's convo showed their helplessness and painful state. Manan's convos and moments were beautifully penned. Angry nandini was amazing. Now coming to the best past of this update the evil twins confrontation😆 with manik. Manik,mukti and cabir's convos and moments were mindblowing and beautifully written. Loved their bond. Scared manik Becoz of cabir and mukti was fab🤣.totally an amazing update. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

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@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Cid cabir mukti fail ho gyeee

Shittt

Tats nt dneee

Shittt

Manik

Ohhh i luvv uu

Kya dialogue maaaree h

Waaah waaah waaah

Mazaaa aa gyaaa

Nd den sher sherni se b bch ni payaaa

Lolzzz

Cntnue soonnn :)

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Danny92

@Danny92

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#76

Nice update

Arey yar someone shud hav seen alya nd dhruv together naaa cabir nd mukti failed in their mission fr nw

Manik said all that to nandini sooo confidently hope all will get on right track

Continue sooonnn

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cutiesanaa

@cutiesanaa

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#77

dhrulya's short luv story ws awsum bt im feeling sad fr dem
cmng to manan dey r d bst
angry bird nandu n majnu manik r alwys a treat to watch 😉
n der short cute moment hayee 😳
n den my fvrt cabir n mukti der amazing 🤣
ol in ol a fab update 👏
thnks fr pm 😊
tc lots of love
sanaa 😊

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simkapoor

@simkapoor

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Posted: 9 years ago

#78

hey diii...

frst of all ...
thnks fr pm...
n a big big congo fr new thrd...
hope u open more of thm soonnish...

nw abt the update ...
it ws cute...
manik is so cute...
whn he behaves insane he looks so cute...
his million dollar smile ...awwe. .
vry nice...
so nandu also likes his stupid actions ...
amazing actually it shows his lv n passionate lv he hv fr hr...
n his dialoges...maar dala tumne to ...
lvly... i lv u... sooo mch...
shaadi to nandu sehi krega mr romeo...

dhrulya were so mch in pain...
had to go through so mch...
poor thy...
so mch misundrstanding is there ...
jst once if thy talk to manik all will b sorted ...

bt then mukti n cabir wrre hilarious ...
manik bechara...
bt usme b cuteee lg rha tha...

lvd it...
cntinue sooonnn...
tc