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Posted: 9 years ago

#411

Nice update

Ohh smart manik but it affected nandini a lot

Glad atleast nandini let out all her feelings which were burried inside her

Continue soon

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Swagatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#412

I am left speechless

The face off was just awesome

But I still feel Nandu is completely right at her place.

Manik needs to do more to earn her forgiveness

Superbbb update

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0Nivida0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#413

So I m the first one..awesome update..this was much needed between these two..gosh there was so much pain filled inside Nandini..i hope she will be fine ..thanks for update..take care

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aarzooarora

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Posted: 9 years ago

#414

Brilliant work of writing

Kyaa intense moment tha, i loved it to the core

U nailed it seriously.

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a.pari68

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Posted: 9 years ago

#415

Superb and emotional update

Nandu had so much inside her

Finally both talk

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manandeeplove

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Posted: 9 years ago

#416

Emotional update...

Amazingly penned down...

Manik nandini face off...

Manik managed to bottle up her emotions by taking her down d memory lane...

N nandu blasted on him...

Bt i guess it affected her health ...

Lets see what happens next

Cont soon

Waiting

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abha5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#417

awesome written...eager fr next update

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Vandyandy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#418

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Hi Aashna

Thks for the PM dear

How did u manage to write down this one, 😲

Itna emotional , itna painful update 😭

Nandu has become really NUMB not able to react to anything.

Her tears have as if got finished in her eyes.

They don't come out anymore.

Manik wanted her to remove out her frustration

That she has built up inside her HEART.

Taking her to places where they shared some beautiful moments.

The flashback parts were very touchy.

Manik picked out the most best moments of their life

He wanted her to say, cry, hit him, do anyhting.

Manik's childhood was very SAD

he went through so much at the age when all the boys have fun playing around

Flirting with girls, partying n what not all

But his destiny had other plans for him.

Taking all the responsibilities on his shoulders and that too at the age of just 17 was really too much for him

Finally nandini burst out at Manik.

Whatever she had kept inside her, she was just throwing it out

Manik was so worried seeing Nandu in that state

Which was really not good for her health.

GOSH !!! Her pains started !!!!!

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richa20298

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Posted: 9 years ago

#419

Amazing.

Loved it

Baby time..

I hope everything will be fine...

Soon

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JiyaRajput

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Posted: 9 years ago

#420

nice update long too manan talks I was so eager to read about manan talks and here u had all the chappy on manan manik is trying his best for forgiveness but maay be nandani is hurt beyond repair that she was not letting her walls break but finally manik is able to break those walls and her frustration got out and now its delivery time fingers crossed hoping for food continue soon keep smiling

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