MANAN FS:OUR WILD KISS / EK VILLIAN( LAST PART ON PAGE 55) 27APRIL - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
nice story line...
dhruv in negative role...
pls continuee...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello guys ...see today I came up so early ...hehe...well can't help it ...today is Saturday and my holiday that's why ...chalo here is ur update ...ENJOY😛

PART-1 (A)



A girl is sleeping in her king size bed ...there was smile on her face which makes her more beautiful ...it's like she is having a dream ...a most beautiful dream

DREAM-

A girl is sitting sitting in the bench ...she was crying ...suddenly a guy came and put his hand on her shoulder ...Girl instantly looked at him and a smile crept on her lips ...guy wiped her tears lovingly

Guy : Kaha tha naa rona mat ...fir kyu roye aap...u knew naa little one ...I can't stand by ur tears aur aap fir bhi roye ...u broke ur promise little one ...

Girl makes her head down and slowly said : sholly ...please maaf kardo ...I will never cry ...I will smile ...smile for u always ...

Girl smiled widely that brings smile on guy face ...

Guy smiled at her and said : That's like my little one ...accha chalo now give me my kissi ...

Girl blushed at this and quickly pecked his lips not giving him chance to respond ...guy makes a poker face to which girl laughed loudly

Guy : This is not fair little one ... u didn't let me to kiss u ...

Girl smilingly said : Bcz I didn't want to ...

Guy smirkingly said : well in that case I have my own ways ...

He brings her closer by her waist ...Girl stopped laughing and looked into guy eyes ...without waisting a sec. Guy started kissing her hungrily ...he was sucking chewing her lips like a candy ...as she doing the same ...guy was asking for enterence but girl smirks between the kiss didn't give in ...that makes him crazy ...he squeezed her ass tightly to which she gasp and guy entered her mouth ...there tongues were mingled with each other both were fighting for the dominance ...there kiss became wild ...they were exploring each and every corner of mouth ...finally after good 15 min . Guy broke the kiss ...both were panting heavily ...

Girl lovingly said : I love you manik ...

Manik smilingly said : I love you too my little one ...

Girl sadly said : u will not leave me naa ...

Manik kissed her forehead and said

Manik lovingly said : how can I leave my nandu haa ...I will always be there with you ...whenever you need me ...u found me ...

Nandani smiled and said : I knew ...that's why I love you so much ...

Manik smilingly said : I love you more MY LITTLE ONE ...

Manan hugged each other ...suddenly manik left from there ...

Girl wakes up with a jerk by saying MANIK ...yes the girl is nandani ...she took a photo frame which was kept on her side table ...she traced her fingers on the frame and smiled a little and said








Nandani : when will u come back haa ...ab aur kitna wait karaoge ...u knew naa I don't like to wait ...but for u am waiting from last five years ...ab toh aa jaao ...ur little one is missing u ...I kept my promise manik ...I didn't cry ...am smiling for u ...har roz mujhe ek hi dream aata ha ...our last meet ...jaldi aa jaao manik ...ab wait nahi hota ...

Suddenly her alarm started ringing ...nandani looked at the clock ...

Nandani : oh shit! 9 baj gaye ...stupid alarm 8 baje ka lagaya tha ...9 baje baj raha ha ...great ...I wonder how nandani murthy u become a no.1 fashion designer when you couldn't even up on time ...jaldi kar nandu ...otherwise today ur hitler boss will kill u ...

Nandani get up from the bed and hurriedly went to the washroom ...after taking a quick shower ...she wears a black dress ...did a little make up ...and looked herself on the mirror ...

NANDANI'S ATTIRE-






Nandani : Looking nice nandani ...chalo ab jaldi bhaag nahi toh boss toh tujhe pakka kacha chaba jayega...

Nandani started taking her belonging suddenly her mobile beep ...nandani looked at the message ...


Good morning baby girl ...I hope you slept well last night ...aur nahi bhi toh I don't care ...I want u that's it ...come to my house right now baby girl ...if u didn't come up ...u knew what can I do ...I want u to be there in next 30 min.
Come fast baby girl ... Don't be late ...otherwise u knew the consequences...
Love you baby girl
Druv

Tears made there way ...nandani was just looking at the phone screen ...

Nandani Pov :

Why can't he just leave me alone ...I..I never knew my life became this much cruel to me ...I can't understand how can my parents say to marry him ...he is a psycho...and most importantly I don't love him ...I told him the very day when he came up with the proposal that I don't love him ...but he behaves like nothing happened ...and agree for the marriage ...I was shocked by this...i...I told my parents that I love manik ...but they didn't paid any heed on it ...I was so frustrated ...days passed like this ...he came my home regularly as I lived alone ...it's easy for him to come ...I used to ignore him...I thought he will understand but no
...he never understand or should I say don't want to ...I still remember last night ...I ran away from him when he tried to kiss me...if my friend didn't came up on time ...I probably die bcz of the shit he is going to do with me ...bcz am only manik ...only my manik can touch me ...no one else ...I can't even tell my parents ...he blackmailed me ...if I did he will ruined everything ...me ...mom ...dad ...everything ...now what should I do ... please manik aa jaao naa ...ur little one needs u ...please come back ...




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A guy is sitting on his cabin ...he was looking at the phone ... a constant smile was on his face








Guy : Am coming little one ...ur manik is coming ...I knew u waited for me a lot ...now no more wait ...am coming little one ...for taking u with me ...for marrying u ...for making u NANDANI MANIK MALHOTRA ...AM COMING LITTLE ONE ...

Screen frazes between manik smiling face and nandani crying...


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So how's it Guys ...mazza aaya yaa nahi ...well tell me honestly wanna me to continue it Or not ...agar nahi toh I will not continue it ...aur agar haa toh please likes karkar bhag mat jaana comments jarrur karna ...ur views are important for me ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Wow awesome update...
So manik is away for 5 years...
This dhruv is sch a pshyco...
Nandu is waiting for manik soo much..
Jst hope he come soon...
Luved it..
Cant wait for nxt update...
update soon...
And yes continue...
I love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
Heu dear nice one
So manan are away from each other
That to 5years
And druv pscho wants marry nandu
Now wat wil happen
How they gona meet
Pls update next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Awesome update dear
Manik bas jaldi aajae
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
I loved the update
lovely

Dream was so cute
Manik kaha giya ??

little one is so cute to hear
even baby girl but geeek doesn't sound nice from shaitan mouth..

that dress was cute..
hope manik come soon n no misunderstanding..

thank u
keep smiling.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Gosh !!! Manan ek dusre se 5 years alag rahe. Why????
It must be something big.
PSYCO DHRUV how can he trouble Nandu like this.
She is not his private property.

Cont diya nice story.
Will wait for the nx one.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice part loved it
Continue soon
Amazing concept
Dhruv a psycho
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
i can smell a misunderstanding chapter on air ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Good story
Eagerly waiting for manan meet
Update soon

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