MANAN FS:OUR WILD KISS / EK VILLIAN( LAST PART ON PAGE 55) 27APRIL

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sindhukannan148

@sindhukannan148

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Posted: 9 years ago

#231

Hey i just read ur story...
It is amazing...u have penned it very well...and the story is also superb...
Dhruv as a psycho is an interesting one...
I liked the very calm manik in all the parts and he is very caring towards nandini...
Waiting for their meeting...if u can pm me...
Keep smiling always😊😊

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Manal

@manu_stylish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#232

Hilooo...were havng exams..so couldnt comment...

But da update wz really appreciable..

Liked it alot..

Manik aur Nandu ko jaldi sath main wapas le aao..plz..

Loads of love..

Cont soon

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Fiza ansari

@fiza81

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Posted: 9 years ago

#233

It was good
But i was confuse were nandini was hating manik then how sudden she start missing him?????

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Cuteprincess6

@Cuteprincess6

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Posted: 9 years ago

#234

Awsm story
i read both chapters in one go
nd the storyline is amazing
u wrote all scenes so beautifully tht i m all lost in it
manan flashbacks r so cute nd lovely
dhruv is damn cruel
i m just waiting for dhruv nd manik's face of

continue soon
take care
stay blessed

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#235

Hello,

U guys must be thinking am diya right...actually no...am not ur diya...am karan her fiance...as u all know our grandmom is not well...she is very critical and diya is very close to her...due to a lot of stress ...she got fainted twice...and doc. Told her for bed rest...am here to inform you guys...she couldn't be able to update any of her story for few days...I hope you guys understand...and those who pms her about our grandmom well-being ...thank u so much for that...

Karan...

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Love_Queen

@Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#236

It's perfectly alright dear

waise bhi family cums first so we understand it
nd don't worry about ur grandmom she will also be fine soon have faith in God he will not let anything happens to her

take care of urself first dear so dat u can take care of her too

God bless you n luv u

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Jyoti

@bhagupur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#237

Take care dear..

God blessed your grandmother with health. ..

And you also take care your self. ..

Stay blessed dear.

Thanks.

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diya

@diyaNarwal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#238

PROMO -

Manik was continuously drinking while cabir came and snatched the glass from him to which manik gave a deadly glare...

Cabir : c'mon manik tu ese haar nahi maan sakta...arre voh teri nandani ha...teri jaan...teri little one...agar tu haar maan jayega toh kaise chalega...

Manik who was frustrated...while cabir talk were not helping a bit ...

Manik : toh kya karu main cabir...kya...har jagah dhundh liya...har jagah...yaha tak ki uske papa ke yaha bhi gaya...par esa lagta ha...jaise kismat main hamara Milna likha hi nahi ha ...

Cabir was shocked by listening this...he couldn't even believe in his ears his best friend who just want to spread happiness now talking like shit !!!

Cabir :tu pagal ho gaya ha...kismat ki baatein haare huye log karte ha...aur Jis manik ko main jaanta hu voh kismat banata ha...soch manik kuch toh esa hoga...koi insaan...koi jagah jaaha voh jaati ho...

Cabir looks at manik hopefully to which manik closed his eyes ...suddenly a picture flesh in front of his eyes and brings a smile on manik's face

Manik : shit!!!shit!!!shit!!!How can I forget ...am coming little one...am coming

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Nandani was packing her stuff...suddenly aryaman came from back...

Aryaman cheekily said :baby girl...are u going somewhere?

Nandani looked at aryaman and takes a deep breath and said

Nandani :haa aryaman...am going...ab bahot ho gaya...bahot intazaar kar liya...bahot sah liya...ab bas aur nahi...main jaa rahi hu aryaman...HAMESHA HAMESHA KE LIYE...

Aryaman shockingly said :what?

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AND GUYS AM CHANGING ITS NAME ONE MORE TIME BCZ IN THIS NAME THERE IS ALREADY A STORY...SO YAAH AGAIN IT'S

MY WILD KISS 😳

LEAVE UR PRECIOUS LIKES AND COMMENTS...❤️

Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago