#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
congrats for the new thread !! just love ur story .nd u have such an amazing writing skill ! waiting for more !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
congratulations for the new thread dear !! 👏
sometimes i choose nandu but sometimes manik ... hehe..well i choose manan ..😆
please kill rewa ..😡 i cant tolerate her( i know it is stupidity but still i hates her to the core)
i want promo ... if possible i want it now 😃
please give us a sweet promo 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Congratulations for new thread. I want promo of next update please.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
congrats for the new thread...the last update was amazing but rewa needs to be killed...manini getting scared of her daddy n den getting back to normal was the sweetest part n she wants a blothel awww...i really felt bad for nandini in the end...can manik plz understand the situation n console nandini...n plz give a promo jaldi se...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Manik over Nandini or Nandini over Manik!
I chose Manini over MaNan! 😛

You've been carrying this story amazingly! And tbh I don't have any suggestions because I would love to read whatever u've planned for this story.
And no comments because it is just perfect!!

There're also times when I hate or love either Manik or Nandini more but I just love that feeling! Impulsive them are annoying sometimes but again that's the charm of this story! Love it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Firstly a BIG congratulations!! Woohooo!! A big tight hug to Manini baby and her impulsive parents! They be a single piece in this world😆 I am just LOVING how you are taking the story! Well yes I do have my moments when I go all "Kya kar diya gaddhe ne" at both Manik and Nandini😆 But at the end I be like "ahh these guys are impulsive bacche! Yehi toh karenge" Hehe! So yea I really can't choose between these two! They are equally lovable and equally irritating with their impulsiveness😆

Ohhooo!! That was one LONG update! And a FANTASTIC one at that! I thoroughly LOVED it! And I sooo wanna hug this cute lil bundle of awesomeness! Maniniii!! 🤗 Ahhh she be rockstar and beyond! And yea she is a kid but just make her to get her impulsive gaddhe parents to come together somehow! No plotting and all but yea somehow! This kiddo can do it!😃

The way you wrote about the entire sequence of Nandu n Manini getting lost and finally Manik finding them n yelling his heart out to relieve his fear, that was AMAZING! One could so feel that moment just by reading! And wahhh Kameena Manik FTW!😆 Ek kiss kya mili he started having chance pe dance!😆 And its FOUR DOWN Can't wait for Manik to win this bet!! Hehehe!

Oh my god. I totally felt so bad for Manik reading how sad he was coz his princess dint come to him. It was beautifully portrayed!👏 And even better was how Nandini explained her Daddy's fear and love so brilliantly to Manini! Aww! ❤️ And finally Manini running to her dad and showering him with kisses be SO much LOVE! ❤️

Aww man this kid never leaves a chance to embarrass her parents!😆 Poor girl wants a brother but here her parents be idiots😆 And the final sequence of Manik and Nandini talking was again beautiful! But well stubborn heads.😆 Oh but can I take the honour of killing Rewa? Please please please? She irks the hell out of me! Or even better please show her getting one hell of a treatment from Manini for what she did to her mom! That would be AWESOME!😉😆

I am guessing Nandini misunderstood the entire conversation thanks to Rewa's indirect talks. I for one don't think Manik can EVER move on from Nandini or Manini. He just can't. But Nandu needs to get that! And I know you would show that beautifully!😃 Oh but can we have some consolation for this emotional chapter?😳

Oh and I legit cried seeing Nandini walking away that hurt. That stung real bad. :(

Ok now am super excited for the next update! And yes I WANT A PROMO!😃 I wouldn't mind reading promos everyday! Hehe😆

Thanks a ton for this amazing update and also for d pm!😃 Keep rocking!
Phew that turned out to be a longgg comment! :P Hope you weren't bored!😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Congratulations for the new thread.And thanks for the PM.
Manik over Nandini or Nandini over Manik difficult to chose because they are my bachha's my Manan.
And I chose Manini over Manan.I love Manini.She is so cute.
I really felt bad for Nandini in the end.
Thank you so much for beautiful Manan.
Impulsive soul mates is also very close to my heart.
I Want PROMO and update soon also.I can't wait baby...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Congo for the new thread
Amazing update
Loved it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
bmed .. keep it cuming ... luv this story
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
congrats for new thread dear
update soon

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