Manan FF LIFE-PARTNERbyDESTINY #3new thread link pg 1 (note pg 148)

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Mou Deb

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Posted: 9 years ago

#71

awesome updet dear.so cute.
love all the line.
cabir &aliya are realy fast .
manan are so cute. manan part so hot.
plz next part continue soon.

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#72

Wowww Amazing part

Tysm for pm

Btw congrats for ur new thread

3 threads wohhh bhi just with 25 chappys

Ong dats a big achievement yr

Just a request Cum advice yr
Can u plzzz highlight the dialogues and leave space while every para

If its ok with u

Happy lohri
From vidhi 😊

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Sonu137

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Posted: 9 years ago

#73

Wow

awesome

amazing update!!!

navya met cabirs mom good progress must say!!

cabira mom even liked her thats good!!

and now came nandinis vidaii

even aryamans chapter is fully closed for nandini

chalo manik ko pta to chala k uskk choti si nandini ko gussa bhi aata hai😉

the sad part of shadi vidaii

you have described it perfectly!!

and the way nani and dadi handeled her telling her that they are for her that was nice!!

ring khojo ceremony was also godd with romance!!!

and finally he came to his room but here also fees!!😆

muktis demand car not bad

and alyas demand dhruv very good must say!!

and in room on bed cabir like seriously!!

and finally came manan moment!!

a moment where theh were going to be one together forever!!

you have written it beautifully!!

their memorable first night😉

whole update was amazing

waiting for next!!

thanks for pm

take care

keep smiling😊

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ahanabansal13

@ahanabansal13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#74

Heya!! Firstly congrats 4 the new thread yipeee

What an update Mann. ... I toh just loveeed it😃 it was AWESOME 😊😃

U know even I got a bit emotional while reading the bidaai scene...

U know I was hoping 4 two things and coincidently u had both of them😛

1- manan ki ring dhundne wali rasam...kafi haad tk I hv imagined that sath main ring dhundne wala scene

2- cabir in nandu's get up...hahaha...it was really funny...

Nd uske baad😳😳 Their first night...beautifully described. ...

It was amzing to read...

Looking forward to more romantic, naughty manik wale nd cabir the teaser wale updates😛

Thank you😊 nd happy makar sankranti

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mounicareddyc

@mounicareddyc

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Posted: 9 years ago

#75

Wow... Dis part was Jst amazing..strtng frm cabir making Navya meet his mom to vidai part with was very emotional to aryamans closure to Manik saying Abhi to take care of nandus dad to dat ring radam to dramebaz cabir ka nautanki to mannan scene everything was so beautifully written..I loved it..!!