@manan@ A SECRET RELATIONSHIP PART15B PG(132N133) imp.note pg137 16/7

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

coming to second part
Thanks for giving cavya in it
I really loved them. they r second favorite after manan
cabir was in pain and navya is so angry on him
she's hell possessive for him
when he says cutie her anger rose to seventh sky
their kiss was so cute after navya punched to cabir
seriously cabir... manjulika
dude at least see the situation before joking
And the way cabir propose her it was really beautiful
he takes two year to proposed her
diya too like navya for cabir all thanks to our nandu
she was blushing like he'll
And the third part the bff bonding was too good
one shot one secret
And the karela part was awesome
I too don't like karela
nandu was the always one who has to drink karela
manik is hiding something that to for nandu safety
hope so that doesn't create big problem
waiting for next chappy
plz update soon

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nandininiti

@nandininiti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#672

big comment that's why need to split up
but update soon please

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#673

That was too much of fun..
bichare boys and their poor bums got served with hot hot pan...
And nyonika is great, she also has a great sense of sarcasm...
The lady has attitude man, suits to be Manik Malhotra's mom...
And Nandini is a smart ass she has locked cavya in a room...
And seriously Cabir will never change even if he is romancing...
And finally cavya are together..
And nandini got her punishment oh my my!!
Yuck kerela juice...
Will be egarly waiting for their London trip..

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Bhawna

@Bhawnasr

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#674

This chapter was so looong

Thank you for writing so long chapter

I loved the whole chapter

The Manan scenes, Cavya scenes.. everything was amaizng

I really liked the Neyonika and Aliya scene where Neyonika pretends like she doesn't know Aliya

Thanks for the pm and please pm me when you update

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vidhi_vd

@vidhi_vd

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#675

its amazing as always srry for commenting late as i had nt checked my pms...i jst hope nandu will be safe nd ik manik wont let nything happen to her...alya's insult was classic i loved the way nyo dis nt acknowledge her at all it was an epic moment...manan's secretvwas at the verge of cmng out whoshhh...haye the way nandu sneaked nayvya's photo was so adorable...kerala juice wala part omg it was hilarious...waiting for the nxt update

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mylifeplf

@mylifeplf

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#676

this is specially for my reader , a small amout of surprise to the person, who made cute attempt , and giving some ideas for manan date , which I planned, thanku sweet heart... this one for u, and next part is completely for u from my side, to cheer up me😊😊

special promo for my reader(on special request)

this for ur kanjoos readers of mine-who didn't commented- a sweet revenge

na-mano(she uttered in annoyance)😡

ma-what baby?

manik was engrossed in his mobile, didn't spared a look at her...

na-idiot , how can u bring something like saree on date😡

ma-what else u need , dad's doll?(he was equally annoyed) how about knee length gown(he said in sarcastic way)😡

na-that sounds good(she said like a excited doll)😛

ma-what makes u think that I'm obliging ur please?😊

na-because u gonna oblige like perfect baby sit bf😃

ma-do u think so jaan😉

na-yeah

next second nandini ...

what's next think think... a beautiful romance is ahead for pre honeymoon in london😉😉

I know I know , I really want test ur patience , because u people didn't gave me required comments and likes...

so bogtho,,,😡 I was about update today but seeing ur response going down, I didn't felt like updating today , i'm really stubborn in such matters, it's highly disappointing yaar.. I hope exams are over to many, but still u people didn't mind to comment and like... its okay if u have ur own ways of excuse, even I have one...😡

so if u need update wait...😕

now bye🤢

lots of love😊