@manan@ A SECRET RELATIONSHIP PART15B PG(132N133) imp.note pg137 16/7 - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
Awesome update manan romance dekh k maja aa gaya in cabirs presence also manik has taken what he wanted loved how he kissed her in front of cabir n cabir ne eyes close kar li. Amazing story dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42



I just came out to see this story. .

I read it in a go...and it's amazing. .

Manan in secret relationship. ..awesome awesome. ..

Very very interesting start. .

Cabir the cupid. ...

Looking forward to seeing more soon.

Thanks for sharing this awesome story.

Stay blessed dear.



Thanks.




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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
awesome updet dear .
full of manan hot romance.
manik so so nughty .
poor nandu blush kortey kortey tometo ko bhi har mana degi.
cupid cabir just amazing.
plz next part continue soon.&
stey blessed forever.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
nice update...
naughty manik...
manan romance was too gud...
cupid cabir...cm to distrub them...
but manik dont bother to stop his teasing session...
nandini is blushing lots...
update next part...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#45

hello people and thanks for ur likes and comments😛😛.

Part-3
JEALOUS MONSTER😡

Nandini eyes were still closed , the person kissed another cheek of her's. she fisted her hands and punched hardly on the stomach of the person😡👏👏

p-ah..Ah... somebody help me from this mini monster of mine.😡

This time our BMMM gave him hard punch on his stomach for saying her as his.😡

U read it right it was the boy , who got punches by both monster and from his mini monster.😉

Ma-don't u dare , to say her urs, because she is mine and only mine.😡

Without further thinking our JEALOUS MONSTER, pulled his baby from his embrace. Nandini was annoyed by this act of her monster😡. Cabir was having all time fun seeing trio faces😆, it was like tom and jerry and the dog in that show, and boy was frowning seeing possessive and jealous nature of BMMM.

Boy-hello, main tumari gf ko lek bagne keliye uska kohi friend nahi hoo, balki uska bhai hu,😡

looking towards nandu, who was already in embrace of her bf giving her all puppy faces to him, holding manik tightly in her tiny hands😲

boy- aur madam app , rehen dejeye u just punched, I'm not ur boyfriend take all ur punches and tantrums of urs😡

both manan frowned and made grumpy😕 face, where cabir was rolling on the road😆 , not able to control his laughter, and the boy gave the angry glare to both manan😡. Nandini broke the side hug with manik and moved towards the boy and just got another punches for dialogue which he delivered 30 sec ago.manik also joined cabir. 😉

Boy-ah! Barbie aur kithna punch degi, I should have joined u for some boxing coaching class rather than joining u to space.😡

Na-aur bhi punches chayei kya😡

Boy-naa,🥱

She just hooped to her brother , even he responded, he missed his sister very badly.😛

Na-I missed u abhi😊

I give applause👏👏👏 to all who guessed right, he is non other than ABHIMANYU MURTHY, anything further about him will be revealed in charcter sketch, one thing I can say is, nandini is more a daughter than sister to him.

Ab-I missed u Barbie, 😊

He broke the hug gave her kiss on forehead, as father gives to his daughter.

Ab-so, how is my Barbie😊(taking pause), mansion se bar nahi nikli na(little panic tone)

Before she answer cabir answered

Ca-mansion se kya, apna room se bhi nahi bar aye hogi, haina manik😉😉(never stops his teasing session)

Nandini just blushed and hugged abhi, manik gave tu mera hathse marega😡😡 look to him, which he equally shrugged, and went towards abhi and nandini just hugged both of them(to be in safer side-u know its matter of life of A CUPID😉😉)

Ca-missed u yaar😊

Ab-same here cabir😊

Ma-mebhi😕

He just and hugged all of them, but the intention was keeping other two people away from his girl😕. U know he never allows any boy around his girl, he is 😕😕FREAKING POSSESSIVE AND JEALOUS BOYFRIEND😕😕. It may be her brother also , no one is allowed around so close to her other than him. If any found u will see further what happens just wait and read urself.(sabar ka fal meeta hotha hai😉😛)

This was also identified by his girl, who gave him punch with help of her left elbow. Bechara ki dard math pucho😉, cabir once again started laughing😃😆, even abhi joined him, and sweet nandu frowned seeing his possessiveness even for her brother😡.

Ab-manik, don't worry my Barbie is all urs and only urs bro😊

He just hand over her to him, without any doubt because he know that his Barbie is safe and sound with him, he loves her more than anyone in the world but she is his world where only manan lived there, he trusted manik .(sab ko ese hai bhai mil na cha eye hai😳)

Manik just smiled😊 and took nandini for side hug, they just smiled to each other.

Ma-I know bro, by the way how was ur camp buddy

Ab- it was nice but missed my Barbie( cupping nandini face with one hand.) (taking pause)Barbie ab hum college ek sath jayege because we said we both are out of town for mangalore na, so our friends think u were with me, so we are going together😊.

Ca- I guess ur Barbie as forgotten it, haina cutie😉(eyeing manan)(putting his hands on manik's shoulders) because even are manik as told lies to his friends to stay with his love.😉

Manik was just ruffling his hairs and our nandu tho pucho math she was once again giving competition to tomatoes 😳because of double meaning words of cabir, which was true although.

Ab-manik u are getting late, cabir take him, I will come to college with nandini after some time.

Ma-but we would have gone together na(making puppy face for leaving nandini)

Na-manik, everyone will get doubt on us, so u better push ahead , we will be back within while

Ma-par

Na-muno bye

She gave kiss on his cheek 😛 and went to her car, which was bought by abhi, she herself sat on the driver seat and waited for 3 of them, manik made the puppy face😕 , finding no option he headed towards to the college with cabir. Abhi sat on passenger seat, after bidding bye to them.

Manbir car

Ma-did u find anything about him?🤢

Ca-no manik, what he is upto I don't man, u should keep ur relationship with cutie as a secret for time being

Ma-u know what cabir, i'm keeping this relationship as secret because I'm scared mere wajase use kuch hojayega na I will die cabir, who meri zindagi hai cabir😭(he started crying like baby)

Cabir was in driving seat he stopped the car, seeing him in tears was the last thing cabir never wanted.

Ca-manik sambal apne apko(he consoled him by giving him a hug which he required that time)varna tu cutie ko puri duniya ke samne rival nahi benatha, not even our friends able to make out, then how can u think he will get to know

Giving all console required to manik ,cabir started the car,but he himself worried for his cutie, which he cannot offered at any point by thinking all this he reached space.

Ca-manik we reached

Ma-hmm(still lost)🤢

Ca-manik, everything will be alright

Ma- I hope so

Ca-but currently everything is not ok(looking out)😔

Ma-what??🤔

He gestured manik to see out , what he saw dried all his blood in body. He was shocked😲 to see the view infront of him

Abhni car

Na-so, how was ur camp abhi, and when did u came, u didn't called me also

Ab-behna , pele apna cell check kar, I have called u 10 times from morning, but u were "😡 VERY VERY MUCH BUSY WITH UR JEALOUS BOYFRIEND😡"(He said in sarcastic way, which irked our MINI MONSTER😡 OF MONSTER😡)

Na-u want to see BOXER BARBIE OF URS😡

Abhi being very much poor soul scared hell, knowing very well about her BOXING SKILLS AND EVERGREEN PUNCHES, abhi made puppy face of scared, which melted mini monster, and concentrated on road.

Ab-sorry, I came this morning only and camp was superb..

Na-how come u get to know , I was here??😕

Ab-tum ne phone nahi utaya na , so I called cabir he said u will be there only, so I came there

Abhni car entered the campus of space what they saw , shocked them to core😲😲😲

Keep guessing what happened ?

I know it was not funny at all , but next part will be super duper I asure u people, keep waiting for next part.

I know it was very short but I couldn't help my self for writing big part as I was busy, and made my time only for u people, so, plz comment and like. If I send pm's to u people that means u are my special readers guys, so u comment and like, other wise I can unbuddy u people so, u people better comment.

If u any suggestions u can give me, all tomatoes are welcome, eggs are not welcomed bcz I hate its smell. If u didn't like my style plz do say guysss.

I am writing another story ONCE AGAIN SUNRISES, I have sent pm's to my buddy's , if u want me to send pm for that story also plz send me request, so that I can send u pm.

About that story is something like mystry , in which nandini doesn't have hope against trust or love but how manik brings her back her from her past and makes her trust on trust and love is the story. For more read urself the story.

byee...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
awesome update...
who is manik scared of...
abhi n cabir are aware of manan...
pls continue...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Awesome update!
Continue soon
Eagerly w8ing for wt is goin to happen nxt
Pm me!

Arushee
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Wow awesome update...
Manik is soo possessive..
He can't see Nandu even with his bro...
Both luv each other soo much..l
But what happened...
Y manik does not want their relationship to be public...
Who's this guy...
Luved this bro sis and manbir bond...
What happened...
Can't wait for next update...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awesome update dear
Waiting for Reveal the mystery
Cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
Awesome update pls continue soon

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