Manan os : My metro ride...updated pg 6

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starssaya

@starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello people...am divya...

Writer of "tu mera jahan hai" and "ishq soofiyana"

This will be my second try on os...

Hope you'll like...

And if you like it please shower me with your love and support...

Thank you for loving my other work...

Stay blessed be happy...😊

Glimpse...😳

My metro ride...

You all will be thinking that what we will do by knowing someone metro ride isn't it...

But what if someone's ride becomes so intrested..

The 'someone' who was travelling first time by metro

And it becomes his most memorable ride ever...

Well this is only what happened with "The Manik Malhotra"...

Manik malhota : MD of malhotra industries..only ladla of his father Raj Malhotra they shares a cute bond of father- son...

His life only revolves aroud his father and his friend..

He have dated many girls...but never fallen for anyone...he have four friends...Cabir Mukti Dhruv Alya...

Dhruv famous Dancer...

Cabir Buisness man...Md of his company

Mukti Singer..guitarist...

Alya Fashion desginer...

They all are BFF...all belong to different fields but have one soul connection music...

Now we will know how manik malhotra will get a ride of metro...

Well that tu you can know from mukti...

Mukti : hey guys...

All were on conference call...

All : hello...

Mu : ok...guys listen to me carefully...am going to delhi..

All : what y???

Cabir : kya hua mukti...tu ab yahan nhi rahegi...aww I'll miss you...

Mu : kamine...

Chinta mat kar itni jaldi peecha nhi chodungi...

Lekin ab meri sun..

Dhruv : haan haan bata...

Alya : ya ya fast...

Manik : say it girl we are waiting..

Muku : shut up...mujhe bolne tu do...

Now listen i have a concert in delhi...and as it is first am going out for a concert so you guys are going to join me...so i have concert they after tomorrow...

And am going today...and alya you and dhruv are going to join me today...and as cabir , manik you both have meeting in delhi on that day so you both can come directly on that day...ans as concert is gonna have...in evening so no problem...you guys can manage is it clear...hmm...hello.

Hello...

Helllo...

Cabir : umm...haan...are speech khatam..ho gayi..thankgod..

Hum tu so hi gaye the...guys get up...khatam speech..

All : ya we are up...

Muku : you bloody jerks...

All : thank you...

Alya : ok...on serious note...we are ok with the plan..

And me and dhruv will join you..kyun baby...

Dhruv : yes love...

Manik : oh...hum bhi hai yahan...so stop..ok..

Muku : cool...than guys will meet you...

And alya dhruv flight is in night...at 10

Dhrulya : cool... Will come your place @6

Muku : ya bye...

Than all cuts the call...

And soon all three of them goes delhi..

And soon two days were over..

And manbir too reach delhi..

After meeting they were coming out of malhotra industry which is in delhi...

In cp...they both were laughing cracking jokes...

C : oh...freak...

M : what???

C : mukti...

Manik looks at his watch and

M : oh shit it will start in 1 1/2 hour...

Kahan jaana.. Hai

C : gtb nagar...

M : fine chal...

Soon they went their in car...

They comes out of car..

M : adress..kahan hai...

Cabir opens his mobile and checks his phone and his face becomes pale...manik notices this..

M : what happen??

C : humko...INA...j..aaa..na.. Tha...

M : cabirrr...

C : am...sorry..

Maine galti se ab kaise jaayenge...

M : jaldi sit in car

C : ideaaa...

M : what??

...no more of your stupid ideas...

C : are nhi metro se chalte hai...

M : what??

C : ya...look it's 7 and mukti concert will be at 8 and hum use 8 se pehle milne hai...

So let's take a ride of metro

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Ok guys tell me if you want me to continue...

Be happy..

Love

Divya...😃

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Edited by starssaya - 9 years ago

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Posted: 9 years ago

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aarohi arora

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Posted: 9 years ago

Amazing update...
Loved it to the core...
Very well written...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...

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starssaya

@starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Ok guys am here with update...

I hope you will like...it...😊😊😊

And guys it's not any of one story in which manan met fall in love and leaved forever...

No it's not...it's just a story...

Like we go some where...and met a person we liked very much and so on...😊

Ok...enough of talking now read it..

And like or Comment ..

Not having any other chance he agreed for cabir's only after giving

'If this time you do something wrond you are gonna face my wrath'...while cabir just show his 'oh so white teeth'...

Than they goes inside metro...

And cabir execuses for tokens...and tells manik to stand here only ..

As cabir was standing in line..for tokens one girl in white crop top and dark blue jeans shorts approach him...

C : yes...

G : hey...if ypu don't mind can you take my token too as i am in really rush and this line is really big...if you can help me too...

C : umm...ya no problem..

G : oh...my goodness...thankyou...

Take this money..and please take for INA...

C : oh..you too are going there..

G : umm..too ...means you too ..

C : ya me and my friend..

By the way am cabir...

G : ok...and am NANDINI

C : ok...nandini you stand there I'll bring the tokens...

N : umm...ya..thankyou..

She goes and stands near manik...

Where cabir pointed...

Well she was Nandini murthy only daughter of Raman murthy...

She lost her mother when she was very young...

She only have raman and navya her bestfriend...in her life..

This two are her lifeline...

She was standing there with worried looks of getting scolded by her bestfriend...

Manik too was looking inside his phone...

Soon her phone rings and she picks up manik too looks at her as tgey were having same ringtone even phone...

Manik chuckles imagining what uf he starts fighting with her that it's his phone as it rings same as his..

But soon he got amazed by the beauty in front of him..

He looks at her from toe to head...

And word escape from hus mouth

BEAUTIFUL...

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Guys am really sorry...

Am in hurry...

I'll post soon...

Sorry..

And about my another ff's so have posted tu mera jahan hai..

Ishq soofiyana I'll post today.

Keep smiling stay blessed be happy...

😊😊😊

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samanta

@love.my.monster

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Posted: 9 years ago

it seems interesting...plzzz continue soon...I'll b waiting for d update

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starssaya

@starssaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

Hello am here with update

Hope you'll like it..😊😊

Manik was checking her out when her voice make him come out of his checking out land...

Nandini was talking to someone over phone...

N : hey dad...hmm..ya...

Aah no...i have to reach before 8 otherwise they both are gonna eat me alive specially navya...

Aahhh...y not car would get itself repair...isn't it as am only and only daughter of MR.RAMAN MURTHY

And this was the name whuch caught manik's attention..

M ST : Raman Murthy...is she daughter of him...hmm... Interesting...

Smirk appears on his face...

Well no doubt she is beautiful , cute , hot...and what not...but need to find more...

N : hmm..ok bye..call you later

She cuts the call and soon cabir too comes and gives token to nandini..

N : oh...cabir..thank you..thank you so much dear..

C : no need...it was my duty as a human to help you..

N : so...sweet of you..

C : ya...well meet my friend Manik

Nandini turns and says hello to him..

N : ok...guys need to rush will meet...

C : ya...ya we too need to rush..

Bye...chal manik..

Nandini goes towards girls row and manbir in boys row...

Soon they come inside after check in...

As they reach metro was about to close they immediately enters..

Soon metro starts moving...it was little crowdy...seats were alredy occupied...by others..

As nandini turns she founds manbir there..

N : hello...

C : hey...we met again..

N : umm...ya...

Than they talk..about various things...but maman were not talking to each other just talking to cabir...

Their station was at No.15..

Soon metro reaches to it's first destination...

And become more crowdy...

And boys were more than girls..

All were touching each other while standing..because of less place...

Now manan were stamding close to each other facing each other..

Cabir was standing little far..

Manik was looking at nandini and her cute antics...

Metro reach at it's 2nd destination..

It becomes more crowdy...

As soon as metro get closed and starts moving nandini get pushed and her hands lands on manik's chest...

Both looks at eachother...

Both were lost in each other eye's when suddenly someone touches her waist...

Nandini immediately look back and found that one boy was gazing her waist and was touching it..

N : execuse me...

B : wo..sorry..bheed ki wajah.. Se

Nandini turns towards manik and closes her eyes...

N : oh..god mujhe ladkiyo ke 1st box mein jaana chahiye tha..

Manik too sense that she is uncomfortable so he immediately holds her waist and pins her towards metro wall...and comes infront of her..so that now no one can touch her...

Nandini was shocked by this sudden push...

She opens her eyes and founds manik talking to cabir...

N : did he do this for saving me from this jerks...aah..thnk god..

Manik than turns towards her..

Both were looking at each other..

It was getting more crowded and they were coming more close and close...

Both were not knowing what to do...but nandini breaks the silence..

N : thnx...

Manik : for..

N : turning me from there now no one will touch me...

Manik smirks listening to this..

M : but...i tu touching you..

Nandini blushes hard..

N : wo..y..you..ca..can touch..

M : acha...y so??

N : as you have right to touch me Mr.malhotra..

Manik smiles naughtily...

Manik : are you sure about it soon to be Mrs.Malhotra...

Nandini opens her mouth to speak

M : aahh...ab ye mat poochna ki mujhe kaise pata chala ki tum hi wo nandini murthy ho jiske saath bachpan mein meri engagement hui thi...as i haven't seen you pic..

N : tu...kaise..manik..

M : wo...aise kyunki i heard you talking when you said that ki tum papa ki beti ho...i mean Raman Murthy...my papa's daughter..

Nandini blushes listening this..

And soon founds manik's hands inside her top catessing and pinching her waist...creating havoc in her body..

M : by the way..u were ignoring me outside..isn't it...you tu knew that am only your manik than..

N : wo...wo..ma..mai...actually..i..i didn't knew..h..how to talk to you sudde...suddenly..

She speaks strammingly as manik's tortures were giving her tough time...

Manik smirks seeing what effech he has on her...

M : thank your ayippa nandu...

That we are in metro ni tu believe me till now tu you would be crying for leaving you as i would have been marking you as mine umpteenth time..till now..

Nandini was whole red now..

N : Aarav...

M : what??

Speak it again...please..

N : aa...aarav..

M : oh..god...how i missed it from your mouth...i love you doll...i really do..but I'll never forgive for promise which you took from me that I'll never try to find you and to even see you on social networking sites...but you know what..it is also good as this wait has really given me a beautifull..

View...😳

Nandini hugs him to hide her blush..while manik too..hugs her smiling crazily and this was seen by cabir...

C : wht the hell??

Manik hug kyun kar ra hai..

Isne tu aaj tak kisi ladki ko haat bhi nhi lagaya..because he is truly madly and deeply in love with NANDINI from his childhood when he even didn't knew ki mummy kya hota hai..

Nandini...ek min N A N D I N I

Ye bhi nandini aur iski waali bhi nandini yaani ki yahin hai nandini

Oh my god Nandu..meri nandu

He shouts while all looks him like he alien..

Manan too bteak the hug and looks at cabir..

N : ello(hello)..cabir..(cabir)...haiya..(bhiya)

Cabir was in ters seeing his babu dool after 18...bloody 18 years..

Soon they reach at their destination they comes out..

And cabir takes her in bone crushing hug...

Manik too was in tears watching the duo...

N : bhai...

C : doll..kaisi hai tu..